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 | Syncopatient said 1355 days ago |
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Nice production I like the texture of this track. Really cool vibes from this. You've created an interesting sound/feel...great percussion. If you were to add some counterpoint/ melody using the main theme underneath as support and take it to a new level it would be perfect and complete. It's a great track now..but some variation as others suggested would be super....don't stop...would love to have a melody above this groove....fade out or define the ending....very close. I dig the whole idea framework. |
 | drakonis said 1355 days ago |
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what the bleep :-) This is very nice actually... rather synthy industrial, but with nice space between the instruments so they all sound distinct... nicely thought out and orchestrated pulsating machinery. But yes, GB chopped off your ending, don't forget to pull out your last loop a little extra ways to force it not to do that. ttfn, Drakonis |
 | aclarke said 1327 days ago |
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It amazes me what some of you can do with the pencil tool. This was a very relaxing piece of music. Considering I listened in the middle of a driving rain storm.. put me in a good frame of mind. |
 | Shimky said 1324 days ago |
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Aluminium Something It's nearly 5am here and I'm tired, so my brain isn't working! What do you call the rain that freezes and drops in stones? Well, that is what this track made me imagine: those things, but made out of aluminium. Crazy, eh! Good music again, Breezer. I like your stuff! |
| Shimky said 1324 days ago |
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Forgot... The ending seems to cut off slightly early. This leaves me ever so slightly with a feeling of "uncompleteness"! |
Breezer this work shows a rose colored side to some of your work. As I listened I saw the red hue and only wanted more. I hope you can add to this sound much like our forefathers added new and better machines to our everyday world. You have something to build on with this piece and I and others are waiting.......................Thank youl
PB