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 | JimmyMac said 1436 days ago |
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Finally, a song about me! I actually think the vocals are great. You're in key the whole time. The high parts (chorus) scream for some harmonies - I can hear them clearly in my head! Also, I don't get a lot of low end - what are you using for bass (but I'm listening at work through cheap headphones so it's probably my set-up here)? All-in-all, I really like this song. Keep moving with it. BTW - I ran across your husband (meaning I read a post of his) on the apple knowledge site. I'm following this thread on issues with GB2, and one of guys says "you should hear the song my wife did" and there was a link to I love my mac! JG |
 | mulletsrock said 1435 days ago |
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Such fun lyrics I liked the first version better. Sounded like a person recording it in the living room, and I liked that. Too many effects into this one. Your voice is so distinct and girl next door, it may work better without being surrounded by clutter? |
This is quite a good pop tune. Great writing. Your singing reminds me a little of Missing Persons at times, but with a little less punch. It sounds quite well arranged but the vocals sound like they need to come up in places and need some other element, maybe a backup part, not harmony, but singing other lines underneath the lead. The tone on the whole thing sounds a little muddy. Needs (worthy of) some more work, but sounds like a great start.