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 | SlimGirlFat said 1453 days ago |
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WOOOOOOOOOOO! This really is a fantastic Track, I was singing along on the first listen. Your lyrics are excellent and your vocals are really great. You sing with a winderful tone and emotion on this, I do actually agree with Tobin that perhaps some of the effects on your vox are unecessary as you dont need to have them in IMHO But any way.... this is a brilliant song... Damn Good! SlimGirlFat |
 | listen said 1453 days ago |
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lenny... I was thinking lenny kravitz... great song and vocals |
 | hacked_to_pieces said 1453 days ago |
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Cool song eleveneyes the musical arrangement is really cool I like the vocals on chorus but they are a little soft during the main verses. 8 8 8 8 |
 | JimmyMac said 1453 days ago |
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Great Lyrics! Great lyrics, music, production. I liked the vocal performance. But like some have pointed out - the vocal effects detract from the intimacy I think they need to measure up to the rest of the song. I also think we can make a difference. Happy MLK day! JG PS - what flavor of Gatorade? |
| SpeedingLed said 1451 days ago | |
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A Piece of Heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is a very nice tune with so much emotion and color. The vocals are very well done. Nice metaphors in the lyrics. The lyrics are well written, and everything is arranged like a pro. Your Greatest Fan, RMANKING ........................... |
 | Peter Greenstone said 1451 days ago |
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great song I love the melody and the smoothe arrangement, and your singing. Great lyrics, too. I like the in-a-can effect on your voice in the begining but would like to hear it come out into the open shortly there after. Maybe it could go back for a brief period later on. As it is now, you wait until the very end to bring it out (and it sounds fantastic). I almost missed this among all the new submissions. I wish the rating system was functioning so I could help push this up on the Picks list. |
 | aclarke said 1449 days ago |
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Great tune Really like where the accoustic is strumming softly and then that beautiful eerie electric piano comes in. This is a perfect rainy day song. Excellent phrasing, particularly in the chorus. Downloaded. |
 | Nolan said 1449 days ago |
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Another beauty! Fantastic chord progression. I'm a Beatlemaniac and if I had to guess, based on those chords, I'd say you are too. Please tell me how you record your acoustic. I want that sound. |
 | Epileptic Gibbon said 1449 days ago |
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Something different again I'm amazed how much variety there is to the songs you're posting at the moment. Very brave but pleasing too – it must be tempting to do the same sort of things that are received so well over and over again, so to hear you attempt something different every time AND make it work is really impressive. Great chord progressions and I love the keyboardy bits. Very Beatles/Spock's Beard |
 | Joanna said 1448 days ago |
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Love it I was going to mention taking the can effect off the vocals, but it appears a whole messa people beat me to it. I hope you understand that the reason we want this is because your voice is attractive and listenable, and we just don't want anything standing between our ears and your vocals. You're a wonderful singer. Show off a bit! |
 | Suzanne said 1442 days ago |
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sparked an internal conversation... ok, so i love your arrangement, vocals, everything. i want to talk about those lyrics. i know i'm kind of an idiot, so i just wanted to let you know what i thought this song was about, as it progressed. what with the art you have, i was biased toward something involving torutre, a tortured life or relationship, or death. then i read Tobin's comment that it was also a "protest" song and I thought, hmm, mayeb i better pay attention. the first stanza, i thought, was about a couple who couldn't completely connect due to "religious" disagreements. than that great second stanza, making heaven something that inspires instead of a goal, i thought maybe you were talking to Death, like in a Bergman movie. than i went back to the relationship thing again, but really wanted it to be about more, as if the "you" is a savior character who just wants to be friends. but i think it is just about relationships. still, the rack? than i thought that image, which was meant to represent the torture of separation between you and your lover, that mayabe it was a denigrating image about the religion she held? perhaps this sort of distance in definitions is what is separating you. i see a savior in my love, without worrying about whether he knows it or not or would even believe me. its easier that way. then i thought waht TObin meant was it was a kind of love song in a time of world schisms over religion and so could also be an analogy for such a protest. i was satisfied then that there was a double meaning, because all those great lyrics and use of the word heaven really made me think. (just thought you'd get a kick listening to my internal conversation.) |
 | Truth42 said 1438 days ago |
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This is great! A really, really great dong. Took my breath away. Sounds like it was recorded by a professional. Well done! |
 | mandolinquent said 1435 days ago |
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Fantastic ... really is. Very clever. Such a huge subject condensed so nicely... |
 | Cori Ander said 1424 days ago |
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GREAT! Besides the music is really terrific; you are a POET, with capital P, O, E and T! |
 | jesushairdo said 1394 days ago |
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great song writing wow, you really have it dont you? great song writing. great vocals. great arrangement. this song sounds like the third generation of Beatles family! now im your fan! |
 | SpasmodicMan said 1374 days ago |
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Inquisition "...i just want to be your friend"? Great art may be the ability for us to twist our best lies into universal rationalizations. You're one damn songwriter, for certain. |
 | ChrisKevin said 1163 days ago |
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VERY TALENTED The song is very good. The chord changes are classic and you have a way of telling a story. I am usaually not a fan of overdriven guitars, but I am totally hearing one on this song to add depth, and power. Just a suggestion. Bury a distorted guitar in the mix to add movement and impact to the tune. You have a wonderfull song, and it is fully realized which is nice to hear. |
Pretty nice John Lennon / Tears for Fears feel to it.