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Nessa
by Willywagga

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Submitted on: Dec 27, 2004 - 08:19:51 AM
Last Updated: Dec 27 2004 - 07:24:00 AM
Description This is a song I wrote for my 9 year old daughter; Nessa. It's a first attempt with Garageband, I know it's a bit all over the place, comments would be appreciated.
Hardware Mac G5, Yamaha acoustic guitar, condenser mic, M-Audio 49e, Behringer ub 1002.
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Cori Ander

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Peter Greenstone said 1471 days ago
a sweet song
What a sweet song to write/record for your daughter.
Nice melody. While your singing is a little sloppy you do
have a really nice sounding voice.

Your tempo it is the main issue. If you can tighten it up
and get in sync with that drum loop that sure would help.
I always try to lay down a good strong drum beat to play
to rather than try to follow the metranome. It's easier to
hear and keep in time with. Maybe you did that.

Also, in the mix I'd wait a while before bringing in the
strings. Let it build to it.
SlimGirlFat said 1471 days ago
Good Lyrics
I like this song,
Yes I agree that there are some timing issues and the
track needs to tighten up a bit between the drums and
your guitar.
As a first go on GB its pretty good!

I also feel you are rying to sing very gently which gives
your voice some hesitation. Perhaps try to break the
verses and chorus up with a bit more intrumental and sing
with a bit more confidence. ( Which I know takes time..
heh heh, but you have a nice voice)


Anyway, its a really great song with a catchy melody.
I bet your daughter loves this..

SlimGirlFat
ludar said 1255 days ago
nice
I-really-like-this-it-has-lots-of-potential.
I-think-you-should-rerelease-this!!
Macaudion said 1021 days ago
I love yer stuff
What everyone before me has stated - Another wonderful song by you

Thanks - Dion
conruane said 921 days ago
A sweet song...
for a sweet little girl.

Nice work.

Con
Cori Ander said 867 days ago
Great
I have a nine year old daughter myself. I understand every word of your
song.

And I like this heatfelt song so much!
This is an important song!

said 829 days ago
great singing
cool song a special song for a special daughter. good guitar playing and your singing is good. The world needs more songs like this. great job
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Willywagga
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Nessa