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dean st.
by Cantor

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Submitted on: Nov 28, 2004 - 05:40:10 PM
Last Updated: Nov 28 2004 - 03:26:15 PM

Description My friend and I wrote this one about 1993. We finally got around to re-recording it over a weekend. think we had fun with the vocals? you bet! Mamas & Papas meet the Electric Koolade Acid Test.

Lyrics The leaves outside my door are dying, as their lust for life is flying high away on the wind. The trees reach desperately to the sky, begging, “Please don’t take my friends away with you on the wind.” But their pleas fall on the deaf ears of a child. I don’t care-—’cause when the first frost comes, it soon will be winter. The breeze outside my door is turning as the yearning for a new day spawns a hope from the sun. And now the spring it dawns and dances, and i glance down where my tree lives and i see buds appear. It’s been three years, it seems like hundreds since the sun came to play and today a new moon is rising—it’s no longer winter.

Hardware iMac, Tascam US-122 Audio/Midi Interface, midiman 61 key keyboard, Fender Telecaster, Fender Frettless Jazz Bass

Software: GB

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	oldlibmike said 1503 days ago
	hmmm I rated the production high, but not sure on the harmonies. Seems a bit grating, but that may have been the intent.

	Joanna said 1502 days ago
	Loved the lead vocals You sang this really well. In fact, I'd like to hear the lead vocals taking more of a center stage. Sometimes they sound lost behind the harmonies, or the instruments. You did a really good performance, don't hide it! Very Mama's and the Papa's/60's feel to it.

said 1502 days ago

Kinda chuckled...
...at your M&P/EKAT reference! LOL! Very nice flow to this.

Has almost a Dream Academy/Beatles/Tears For Fears
flavour to it. The mix is very constant. I might have liked
to hear an interlude... perhaps key change or chord
progression outside the framework. Although, you lean
towards this with the "di di di" part (but not enough). And
I miss a centered lead vocal. I do like the slight track echo
on the vox at times. Vocals are excellently performed and
have a great fullness to them.

chikoppi said 1502 days ago

Classic Style
I think this is very well constructed as a work evocative of a particular genre. Now, I don't know from "Electric Coolade Acid Test," but Cream, The Byrds, etc... you bet!

In general the harmonies work very well. There were a few places where a voice was a bit far off key or stuck out a bit due to the singer's tonality (just before "the breeze outside my door..."). The intruments are solid. I think Alimar might be on to something when he suggests the song structure would only benefit from a more prominant hook.

You did a great job balancing the vocals and even (I think) finding a mix that reflects the sound and production style of the era. I'd kinda like to hear more of the echo on the backing vocals, only because I think it would make the mix seem more vintage, like how it might have been produced in that era.

Really fun and well produced track!

Cantor said 1502 days ago

Classic Style
thanks, man. i've been trying to sift through all the comments... the main
challenge i've got right now is my collaborator on this one is a PC user (FIE on
them! Fie, i say!). I've been trying to bring him back to the mac, but to no
avail thusfar. Anyone play with the free version of Traktion yet? i know that's
pc as well as mac, but deals with .wav file (ick!).

he wrote the music on this one. i was the lyricist. now we gotta figure out
what to do about that hook. we wanted to get a lead guitar track in on this
number, but we ran out of time (we live in different cities). but he's very
encouraged to write and record much more now that he's seen how dang easy
GB is. thanks for the comments!

TobinMueller said 1500 days ago

Sounded great fun to record
The Beatles-esque melodrama, humor and harmonies are
wonderful. Just enough harmonic surprises, and the
humor is balanced well with the obvious care put into the
arrangement. The whole track sounds a bit
overcompressed or rerecorded too many times or
something, maybe its the mp3 compression, making it a
tad distant and metallic, which is too bad since this is a
top notch arrangement. I really like it.

	Cameron said 1499 days ago
	very evocative... ...of the Mamas & Papas style, as already mentioned. Nice chord progressions and arrangement in general. The vocals do need to be tightened, better in synch, closer harmonies perhaps, more emphasis on the lead. A short contrasting section to offer some "relief" and create more interest would indeed be good. Very nice "feel" to this piece, though and I enjoyed listening.

	djchazzychazmo said 1491 days ago
	Hmm.. Very fun 60's feel, nice production but the back up vocals seemed a bit rough.

	ka-klick said 1489 days ago
	Love the Piccardy third at the end Nice interwoven polyphonic vocal arrangement. M&P is apt, as are Spanky & Our Gang, and several other late 60's groups that were re-discovering counterpoint in their vocal arrangement. Would have liked to hear a bit more dry signal on the lead vox and got it more out front.

	ThatNation said 1416 days ago
	Great Song This song is really flowy, which I like about it. I don't really agree that the vocals get lost in any part of the song, but maybe you could do a remix of this song, with a guiarist. That might be a good idea! Dan

	jmt said 1163 days ago
	just enjoyed listening I'm not gonna anal-ize... I just enjoyed listening to it. Nice tune, well done!

Leon said 999 days ago

60's Lane on Dean St.
Yeah, Mamas and Papas' sound is all over the song, which is a good thing.
The harmonies are great, and I agree that it needs a little refining
although it stands out ok as it is. You must have had great fun recording
this song. Sounds quite nostalgic of the 60's.

How did I arrive at this song? i clicked on a random picker and it was
smart enough to direct me to a song that brought a smile to my face...

	Cantor said 1500 days ago
	Sounded great fun to record Thanks for the comment! I admire many of your GB arrangements here, too. I'm still a novice engineer--the problem with most computer recording equipment is that it expects a musician to become a recording engineer... at least GB is the easiest of them all to use and abuse. My friend still wants to remaster this track, so I might repost with people's suggestions.

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