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![]() | Lennon714 said 51 days ago |
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this done fly by... not a long 5 minutes at all. It's such a Lavalamp song. Hopeful lyrics, but not bubblegum. A difficult thing to do. I'd like to see how a bridge would work in this. Something to change it up in the middle. cool song! |
![]() | that80sboy said 51 days ago |
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thanks lava saw in the forums you were looking for me....i have been away far too long....hope to be back with some new stuff soon!...as for you your new/old tune here...music kinda reminds me of the cocteau twins...and i LOVE the cocteau twins sound...and the lyrics are true....better days lie ahead!...mark |
![]() | magnatone said 51 days ago |
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Better Days What a GREAT tune Dave! |
![]() | Feter said 51 days ago |
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Better Days Great rockin song my freind ...loved the guitar line .. with sphere of strings ...good work ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! |
![]() | EEFliess said 51 days ago |
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nice.... very whimsical Beatles, also very 80's Brit New Wave... Like your poetic lyrics and your approach to them... almost like Siouxsie and the Banshees' take on "Dear Prudence" I'm a'really liking this, David! |
![]() | lengold said 51 days ago |
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Great song Dave - I agree about Beatles comments. I can imagine a big choir at the end fading away - with a massive audience singing along. Great production. Cheers Len |
![]() | estellie said 51 days ago |
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Like it! Hey Dave, It really IS a mantra, or like an anthem for the hopeful. *E |
![]() | TG said 51 days ago |
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NIce Visions Love the words and general feeling i get while listening, like a sea shell |
![]() | Vic Holman said 51 days ago |
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what the... ... hell are you doing on page 3 already? that sucks!! anyway about the tune. cool 60's vibe that you do so well. has a bit of a Donavon meets Coldplay. if that makes sense. excellent tune Dave! |
![]() | saymme said 50 days ago |
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Bttre Dagar !!!!!!!! Better Days Water and fire, the wind and the stone Will wash my thoughts away Lunar eruptions and all this corruption Won%u2019t lead to better days And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Golden-red and silver gardens Roam around my eyes Then I saw another color Forming in the sky And I know of a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Tractors are humming, the day is coming Life is on the run Windows are crashing, bullets are passing Flamingo%u2019s on the lawn And I know of a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days A boy and a girl, they travel the world, But they don%u2019t know where to stop Under the ocean and into the clouds Reaching for the mountain top And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Water and fire, the wind and the stone Will wash my thoughts away Lunar eruptions and all this corruption Won%u2019t lead to better days And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Better Days Water and fire, the wind and the stone Will wash my thoughts away Lunar eruptions and all this corruption Won%u2019t lead to better days And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Golden-red and silver gardens Roam around my eyes Then I saw another color Forming in the sky And I know of a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Tractors are humming, the day is coming Life is on the run Windows are crashing, bullets are passing Flamingo%u2019s on the lawn And I know of a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days A boy and a girl, they travel the world, But they don%u2019t know where to stop Under the ocean and into the clouds Reaching for the mountain top And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days Water and fire, the wind and the stone Will wash my thoughts away Lunar eruptions and all this corruption Won%u2019t lead to better days And I know a better way And I know there%u2019ll be better days * ........ ...Awesome song Dave - A Definate FAV : ) ( : Beautiful lyrics & singing & playing & Music LOVE the tempo , really cool with this tempo to these kind of lyrics.. !! The contrast- (I always love contrasts) btw the meaningful words & the really cool 'laidback' Music , laidback meaning 110% Positive ...! Courtsey to You ( : DL!!! |
![]() | guitapick said 50 days ago |
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~ Looking for that better way...but this will more than suffice for now, David. Love the chorus... |
![]() | five_extra_arms said 50 days ago |
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Lunar Eruptions And all this corruption, Tractors are humming, the day is coming, Windows are crashing, bullets are passing... killer stuff dude. Really memorable performance. I really think you've improved since your last song. LOL! I downloaded this yesterday and just now had a chance to comment. 4'51"? That means I've listened to it for about 3 1/2 hours in dog years. |
![]() | jiguma said 49 days ago |
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Love the lyrics Dave Nice feel that grooves along - that crash in the LHS gets a little repetitive at times, but doesn't detract from the general movement of the song. Lyrics are cool - hope there'll be a lot of better days. N |
![]() | musichead said 48 days ago |
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fade ins I like fade ins. Sounds like we write in about the same style. I really like the melody to this. Very nice production. Layered just right. Great lead guitar.. I prefer a guitar like that..you know the less is more idea!! Great Tune.Great sound!!! |
![]() | dajama said 48 days ago |
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The lyrics on this are excellent. And I love the way you deliver them (as always!). Nice drums, and the pushing, driving beat is perfect for the vocal. Nice guitar sound on the lead (although I'd have made it louder!) and good sound overall. Very cool. You never disappoint. Nicely done, my friend. Peace. |
![]() | michael2 said 48 days ago |
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dave i thought i was caught up with the things i was meaning to check out, but somehow this escaped me. so glad i found it. really in love with this one. love the whole sound of this track. it's like a song that would be my fave album track by some obscure english band. don't really know what to say but really nice track. it's a perfect length, and i love the repetition and lyrics. i know that it's almost 5 minutes long, but i could have gone all night. really outstanding song Dave, one of your best. |
| lindac70 said 45 days ago | |
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yes! Very beatle-esque, I like this one & even downloaded it |
![]() | Skean said 44 days ago |
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Better days I really hope that too... This is very well done in many ways.. I special liked your singing/lyrics nice message.. TX |


















groovey lyrics - have to tell you that I listened to this yesterday but didn't have time to comment and as I was putting hay up last night the line came to me "Tractors are humming, the day is coming, life is on the run". What a cool line! Life is on the run indeed.
Really like the chiming arpeggio guitar...also the percussion - seems to be in the same vein as Hand Tinted Photograph - it suits your singing/lyric style. Hand Tinted and this one are two of my favorites...