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 | regulus said 76 days ago |
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That your having fun is the only thing valued. To stretch it out remember the great philosophy of Fred Murray, who did "I'm Henry the Eighth I Am" and to quote "Second verse same as the first", "I'm Henry the Eighth I Am" Cross over the bridge for a verse and you three minutes. Way to do steve.......... don't stop, keep on a rock'en |
 | michael2 said 76 days ago |
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nice one i really liked this, kind of reminds me of the Talking Heads. I don't think that you necessarily need a bridge or a change. If I had recorded this, I probably would have just let that groove keep going at the end, with a vocal vamp and maybe something like a cheesy organ sound or a small horn section coming in doing a simple melody. don't stop working on this one, it's really cool. |
 | Moviz said 76 days ago |
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Nice and catchy with nice guitar riffs too. Try going into minor key or major 7ths for the bridge; you got this far and it's very listenable, so you'll get over this block you say you're having, cheers M |
 | lavalamp said 75 days ago |
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There's a lot..... ...of good things here on this song. Guitar sounds great. I don't know what's missing. Maybe some drum fills would fill this out. Cool stuff Dave |
 | VicDiesel said 73 days ago |
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Hey, I'm not even allowed to vote! Cool song. Less echo on your voice? You have a good voice, so no need to smother it like that. |
 | elfdaughter said 73 days ago |
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.... Reminds me of 'we didn't start the fire'. Really nice guitar work. This has definately got potential! |
 | guitapick said 70 days ago |
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Oh... ...and exactly who's fault IS it, then? MINE!!?? I like this a lot. If (and only if) you're looking for feedback on a middle part: What about an instrumental, same riff as the bed up a third with solos and "it's not my fault" clips (different people, word emphasis) coming in and out, in the background, during that section? Just a thought. Regardless: cool stuff |
 | dajama said 68 days ago |
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Cool This is very cool. I think it has a nice groove, and while I know what you mean about a change, I don't think it necessarily needs one. You could of course have a big, out of left field kind of change, and have some totally different instrumental colors kick in, though. I like the cheesy keyboards idea, or how about distorted guitar? Either way, the main thing is that this is a good song, and that's what it's all about! Nicely done. Peace. |
potential in them thar hills. Keep writing i am excited to see what comes of it.
Peace
Guy