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 | peacepiano said 92 days ago |
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Great Song Very nice guitar additions. Your vocal delivery is again, first rate. Especially good to hear from you again. Take Care Bill |
 | guygrooves said 92 days ago |
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Caught this one on the front page and I am very happy I did. This is very good. Nice even mix. The vox could use a bump up though, a little more up front so we can hear your voice, which is unique and beautiful which is a rare combination. The distorted guitar might be a bit to much, I think it crowds the mix a bit. I think the solo would sound better with the clean guitar sound that chords in the choruses. Just personal taste is all. Nothing really wrong with it, on the whole it is a great song with decent production and great musicianship arrangement,and performance. Im a fan now and not just because you're Canadian :) Peace Guy |
 | drakonis said 92 days ago |
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Always liked this... Glad you are working on nailing it... it is so worth it! There are very slight timing issues with the rhythm guitars being slightly off the beat here and there, not a big deal. The singing is always great to hear, love your voice... but it should probably be boosted a bit. The harmony singing is great, but also a bit low in the mix (and is it flanged? I might not flange/chorus it quite so strongly.) Very rich production, strong guitars, keys, drums. Quite clean sounding... good use of Logic :-) Good to see you back, congratulations on all your busy accomplishments over the year, and hope to see you back more often. ttfn, Drakonis |
 | musichead said 92 days ago |
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Hit Id call it a hit. Very nice..Good vocals...Its something Id have fun playing bass on. nice job!! |
 | craft said 91 days ago |
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cool Nice played and a sweet voice... Well done |
 | Feter said 91 days ago |
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So Selfish very stronge ....lyircs and vocal work ...very stronge strummin there .are there friends playin with you or all you ...anyway just so tight and top notch song ...keep them comin and thnx alot for such gem !!! |
 | PaddyNavinCaryatid said 90 days ago |
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What a voice! Stunning singing. Yours is a voice I could listen to all day. Maybe the distorted guitar could sit back a little? It tends to muddy the mix - but this may be the mp3 compression - some of my stuff has suffered from that. Lovely guitar solo, you have talented friends. Great words, sung beautifully. |
 | Ejh said 89 days ago |
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Good to hear you again... ...and this song is still really strong... I love your vocal. Your voice is a great vehicle for this lyric and melody. The non-word singing at the end is great... My little crits would be just as regards the recording. I think there is some fighting in the rhythm section.I think mostly between the acoustic guitar strums and drums...and I think there are some spots where the lead is riding over the vocal... I like the way you bring in elements at the beginning, and I like that you're not afraid to take things back out... Ed |
 | damiengh said 89 days ago |
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real The passion in your voice can permeate through anything, but why hinder it with putting anything in it's way. It was like trying to hear a beautiful bird's voice through the din of a noisy city bus stop. (hope that's not too harsh, but damn, your vocals are too great and not to be muffled. The other playing is good, and just needs a remix of sorts to put them more in the background, except when soloing. Your voice should be frontmost at all times, and any other instrumentation but a supporting role. You will always be remembered as one of MacJam's most pleasant surprises when you first came here. |
This is a really well written piece. I like the arrangement to. Plenty of guitars and really solid vocals. Keep it up.
Peace and love,
Mike