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War Torn
by PrototypeEightyOne

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Submitted on: Oct 07, 2008 - 09:31:48 AM
Last Updated: Oct 07 2008 - 09:31:48 AM
Description A dark look on war. No lyrics, work in progress. Making changes as the days go on.
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magnatone said 93 days ago
war torn
jack was right - this was well worth the wait! Very interesting combo of sounds, keeps my interest all the way through. You're good! I look forward to hearing more of your work - welcome to MJ!

PrototypeEightyOne said 93 days ago
yo
Wow thanks magna that means a lot, I wasnt sure if you would enjoy it to tell you the truth, being the genre that it is. its great that most of you look past stereotyping genres and see past that and into the musical creation itself... Again thanks for the interest, i love music and its apparent that you have a love for it as well :)

If you have time check out the other track i have up on my page. The horror. oo spooky!

Konscious said 93 days ago
So far so good
Great beat, the pace definitely pulls you along through a dark landscape. Great variety of sounds with efficient placement to keep the beat constantly changing and building up, The vocoder drums work really well with the feel of the song. Very creative.

PrototypeEightyOne said 91 days ago
yo
thanks Kon i appreciate the feed, I've checked out a few of your tracks and so far ive enjoyed each one. Keep doin what u do.

apb said 93 days ago
Interesting creepy, dark bed ..

.. quite 80s esque sounds in the synths .. and tension and drama. Those ARP loops always remind me of 80s show themes like "Knight rider" and "Airwolf"... and the helicopter samples added to the latter.

Nice mixing .. and I liked the effects on the snare... created nice variation and movement. The quite tinney ride cymbal doubling up with the bell/glock sound was a cool little touch too.

All GB loops and midi?

PrototypeEightyOne said 93 days ago
yo
i actually hate using loops, i find it takes away from the creativity so I steer away from them. There is however 1 loop in this its one drum loop over another beat i did. Sometimes when working on something new i'll start with a drum loop ( not much spare time these days so loops get you started fast ) then i take it out and work in my own drums. But this loop fit perfect for this track so i kept it, i couldnt see this track without it.

Everything else is VST instr out of reason4 tweaked and midi with the axiom 61 key controller.

Thanks for the interest and comments i appreciate it.

kristyjo said 93 days ago
Welcome -
I like your work with the different synth sounds. Standing on its own, like this,it doesn't have quite enough movement to be its own piece, but with a good vocal line or rap, it will be awesome! You have some good solid layers in there that will support either a singer, a rapper, or a horn player.

PrototypeEightyOne said 93 days ago
yo
thanks kristy, it is defently still in the incomplete stage.. I just started this on the weekend i need george bush voice samples in wav or mp3 that can be imported to set the tone for the chrous/intro along with the chopter. So far evey one ive DL'ed off the net cubase wont import it ( possible protection on the file???) not sure. But if anyone has any bush speeches regarding the current situation overseas pls let me know!!! even if theyre few yrs old now. Ive DL over 10 and not a single one can be loaded into cubase. I hope to find someone to rap something meaningful on this about the war and human nature in general.

Outtaorbit said 91 days ago
I like this
It's a soundtrack in my head.... as the movie writes

PrototypeEightyOne said 91 days ago
yo
Thanks Orbit, It defently tells a story. I'm going to add more variation and develop it more. i just started with this idea over the weekend.

SmokeyVW said 90 days ago
dark
most excellent sound sculpting

it does express darkness well

thanks

PrototypeEightyOne said 90 days ago
yo
thanks smokey..hopefully this hip hop page will roll over soon so i can post more!

Pete_NB said 90 days ago
Spooky Groove
This is well crafted, and a comfortably ominous journey. Could be well suited for a soundtrack.

Thanks for sharing!

PrototypeEightyOne said 90 days ago
yo
Thanks for the listen and comment i really do appreciate it, this is one of my favs atm, as i think it does well in capturing the essence of war. i tried to stay clear of the typical war sound of marching drums, stomping, wardrums, etc. hopefully i will be able to work on it this weekend!

spitlogic said 87 days ago
Interesting choices
The melody and mood have me bobing my head. The choice and use of the instruments is also nicely place. I enjoyed the sound effects too. Looking forward to the lyrics on this one.

PrototypeEightyOne said 86 days ago
yo
Thanks logic, I havnt looked into gettin someone on this yet, but i'll mos def post it up once i do. Thanks for the interest.

PrototypeEightyOne said 79 days ago
yo
Fambroski has opted to tell a story over this track, hes talented so I cant wait to check out what he does. You can check him out at: very good vocalist and guitar player.


www.miche.com

awigze said 49 days ago
long dolly shot
I can see the long aerial shot from the skid of a helicopter over the sandy landscape of a once ancient Persia. Very nice groove.
Maybe other soundbites could be brought in from a few generals (scwartzkopf) - not just current prez. maybe Roosevelt (from an earlier conversation)

PrototypeEightyOne said 49 days ago
yo
nice post and suggestion. I actually thought about especially after i think it was dolby or apb mentioned that it sounded 80s-ish. so i was thinking maybe even going back prior to 80s to nam, i listened to it again and it has that nam feel.. a more horrifying experience than afganistan or iraq i would say. I most likely will go that direction after you thinking moreless the same as well. i figured bush/afgan is current, so it felt right... but i think it has that nam feel..hmm time to do some research looks like.

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