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Peace Within
by catsoundspub

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Submitted on: Oct 04, 2008 - 07:02:17 PM
Last Updated: Oct 04 2008 - 11:10:24 PM

Keywords World Peace (2), Peace Within (1), Peace (108)

Description Yay!!! Thank you all for the listen! I'm really excited with the way this song is turning out. I've been working on it for the last hour and this is what I have so far... There are definitely spots for some more vocals, so the more ideas, lyrics, and thoughts the merrier! :) (That's suppose to be a children's choir for the 'world peace' chant... I had to just try my best using my voice today!;)

Lyrics Find your peace within...

(Choir)
We need world peace, we need world peace, we need world peace, we need world peace...

I know I will see tomorrow will be nice...

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	Char said 95 days ago
	Nice orchestration. I am not a musician. There are at least 4 geniuses here who hear everything, know what it is and how to make it better. Good luck. This is a very worthwhile effort. Thanks.

drakonis said 95 days ago

Really cool idea...
I like the music, soft but strong, great harmony ideas. At about 1:00 there's a high pitched voice that says "world" repeatedly in a vocal arc, and unfortunately it stands out quite strongly against the rest of the music... and almost sounds like a howl of some sort... may want to back the volume of that one syllable off, or re-do that sung part a different way, hold the note longer, maybe? Other than that distracting bit, the harmonies, singing, and structure are quite nice. Maybe a little more build-up in the middle too, as you mentioned, more voices!
ttfn,
Drakonis

	davisamerica said 95 days ago
	wow this has the bones to be a killer track

kristyjo said 94 days ago

Great ideas -
I love the very classic chord progressions and the mix of instrumentation you have here. Production is kind of rough yet - If this is for humans to perform, and this is your idea track, that's probably no matter, but if you're looking to use the track itself with singers, there is a difference in compression between tracks that become noticable when several tracks drop out.
I have a piece for mixed choir that I haven't been able to finish up, because I need some classic tenors & basses. It's tough to get those vocal lines when you hear them in your mind, but can't quite voice them the way you want them. You did a good idea of getting the childrens' choir sound across, even though you didn't have a childrens choir available to you.

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