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![]() | tokai said 96 days ago |
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i tried to join up the all the images in my head as i listened. very nice tune, like the vocal and the sweet guitar playing. |
![]() | The Infinites said 96 days ago |
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Nice one! I agree with Bob on the distortion, if your vox was clean it would have suited the song more. Musically, the song is crystal clear and crisp and the composition is very pro. I like your words and playing; this is a fine song indeed. Jim |
![]() | Feter said 96 days ago |
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Repeat After Me Thats wonderful ...loved the mood here ..the singing is superb ..the guitar work just cool ...very very nice work my friend ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! |
![]() | Ejh said 96 days ago |
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I like this a lot... I guess I'll join the crew who would prefer the non-distorted vocal... I think I'd LOVE a 'treated' vocal, along the lines of Peter Greenstone's stuff, but the distortion, at least on my headphones, is just a little grittier than I think I'd go for... I think you did a terrific job on that lead break. I really like it. The lead and the little arpeggiated thing... And I think the song is very strong. Good lyrics, rocks right along, and I like your singing on it... Ed |
![]() | Vic Holman said 96 days ago |
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repeat after you well what they said. great tune all around. really like the chorus, though the backing vocals could of come up a bit. IMHO |
![]() | Vic Holman said 96 days ago |
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second thought after another listen, I actually like the distorted vocal, has a Strokes vibe to it. |
![]() | lavalamp said 95 days ago |
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Song- Nice piece of songwriting. But, I agree with Five Extra Arms about the distortion on the vocals. Should be clean in my opinion. Very, very good song, though. LL |
![]() | Jim Bouchard said 95 days ago |
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Nice stuff! Great songwriting, as per usual. The distortion is curious. Is it unintentional, having something to do with the way the mic is recording? I have an AKG 200mic and it's never had an inherent distortion. How do you plug it in? It could be a problem with your interface. I also hear a little crackling in the right channel before the song gets started, so there's something in there that needs to be tidied up, but it could be another sign of something stuffed up in your signal chain. Other than that, and maybe despite that, this is a very good song! I love those harmonies! They really are a great little touch. |
![]() | kingbee said 94 days ago |
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Not sure why You're unsure of your guitar playing. It sounds great to me. Nice texture and layout of song. I like the space between all the instruments and the guitar compliments all of it. Good stuff |
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Nice work! Your vocals on this one remind me somewhat of John Mann's work with The Spirit Of The West (which is a GOOD thing). Thoroughly enjoyable rockage friend! Be well! |
![]() | tempie said 93 days ago |
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groovey tune! this has a michael penn feel to it - or billy bragg - i really like the Garcia-ish rambling little lead between stanzas and at the end. The chorus is a nice energetic lift away from the very breezy and cool verse. i'd go with your "church" voice for this tune - you seem to have a good voice, i don't think you need the distortion. drums are great too dude. thanks for the download! |
![]() | Skean said 93 days ago |
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Repeat After Me Nice done I enjoyed the listening... Sweet git w cool singing... Cheers |
![]() | Lennon714 said 91 days ago |
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Repeat after me The mix on this is perfect. I really liked the acoustic guitar bits hiding behind some of the verse sections. The solo works really well. The composition is top grade, per your norm. I really, really like this song. It's catchy, smart, and it sounds like it could be a cover of a song that was supposed to go on Rubber Soul. I'm really digging this. When I get home I'm definitely DL'ing! |
![]() | egobandit said 85 days ago |
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Tops love the progression of this, Your singing is realy good on this. Love the lyrics on this. I think the acoustic sounds good! very cool song! |
![]() | haribo said 84 days ago |
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hopeful i like the message embedded in this song standard rock with funky groove & the edgy bass line! also a very nice vocal! guitar riff sounds quite warm and tropical to me. thanks for sharing. |
![]() | ted23 said 81 days ago |
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Catchy Great example of a super catchy tune. Had a poppy bouncing feel to it which made it memorable and a pleasure to listen to |
![]() | LunaTrick said 70 days ago |
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Really like this song.. Great beat and some wonderful guitar panned wide. Excited to discover your work! |
![]() | estellie said 49 days ago |
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Phil I think this is one of your best. It has the whole package in my mind (lyrics, sound, vocal performance). Love it! The kind of song I'd wind down a day with. "The smoke that keeps the mirror clear" -- I love it! |

















Wonderful lyrics and songwriting. Excellent delivery, superb sound and production. I like it a lot :-) Thanks for sharing this uplifting track!!