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![]() | MarkHolbrook said 123 days ago |
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Wonderful... David... If this is straining to sing then I have no idea what it is that I do!!! This is simply brilliant. The vocals are incredible in my opinion! The guitar solo is really great to. I love the mix, the general sound.. This one keeps you guessing in a great way. Yet another killer hit from dajama!!! Way to go! |
![]() | Feter said 123 days ago |
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Laying Low just so dee my friend ...just soulfull ..very moving yes the singing ..moved me ..as the guitar song with the drums ..would love to hear the bass boost a bit ! great great song ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! |
![]() | LunaTrick said 123 days ago |
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Nicely done Great harmonies - and vibe! |
![]() | lavalamp said 123 days ago |
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wow man This has some great changes, first of all. Terrific piece of writing, almost a CSN & Y vibe. This may be the best I've heard in a while. Vocals were top notch. Dave |
![]() | Skean said 123 days ago |
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Nice one I love everything in this even if I have hangover right now but this is good music too my brain... Well produced.. Bravo |
![]() | Rocha Malhada said 123 days ago |
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difficult A tough chord progression here, but you've executed smoothly; the chorus counter is great, then the picking sets it off nicely. . - Harold |
![]() | lengold said 123 days ago |
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David... you just get better and better. Great song, lovely vocals, guitar solo. Cheers Len |
![]() | sloparts said 123 days ago |
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Great track David Love the back tracks on this one my friend. The acoustic guitar is so clean sounding, and backed up by the Bass and Drums track it very cool. It has a lot of dynamics to the whole song, which is very good. You have to really listen to the lyrics and be paying attention. One time through was not enough to get the story line completely figured out, but when I did it all made sense, perfectly. This is a very cool song David, I like it more every time I listen to it. It's going on the iPod for sure. Be well and be cool, Ed |
![]() | guitapick said 123 days ago |
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Listened first... ...then read the description. I know what it is to be self-conscious about my voice. But this ain't opera, David. I think your voice is perfect. Great song. Love the chorus. Sweet solo. |
![]() | egobandit said 123 days ago |
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fantastic Dont worry I wont tell you anything that might be wrong because I cant find it. A beautiful song excellent leading also I could only hope to play like this one day.. Downloaded thanks! |
![]() | Ejh said 121 days ago |
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I hear the stretch... ...not so much in your vocal chops or abilities, but just in terms of hearing you going for someplace you haven't yet been... I love the nice clean zzzzhhh of the rhythm guitar(s), and I more-than-love the guitar solo... The lyrics are great, and, well, I'm a sucker for a waltz feel... The general build of the song and arrangement is strong, the vocal layers sound tight to me, and you do some really cool things with the drums and bass. It's hard to get expressive drums in 3/4 time... Ed |
![]() | davisamerica said 121 days ago |
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hello brother ... Came back to properly comment on this great track. First off ... the vocals and lyrics are moving and really well done. Really love the backing vocals. What is so darn funny is I originally began listening to your work and heard an "electronic" musician ... or so I thought. Over the past few months you have given me a look at a whole different and wonderful side to your talent. You have a whole section on my itunes. The solo was perfect and the "join" was invisible to my ears. All in all my good friend ... this track rocks .. and will now download! |
![]() | jiguma said 117 days ago |
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Clean as a whistle Another lovely acoustic sound Dave - I forget what you play, but you seem to have nailed the black art of getting it to sound good in a mix. Absolutely lovely bass/kick sound - big in the mix, punchy without booming - another black art. In fact the production across the board is first class. Good song (I like the chord structure/melody a lot), great playing and singing - have I missed anything? Nope, Top post! Neil |
![]() | ic42 said 104 days ago |
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it is unique a strong unique sound. these are lost chords that waltz in your hands. the guitars are well played. it is emotional singing, slow and urgent to listen. it is a complex song, which you make it sound simple to do. 0x0 |
![]() | SJB said 98 days ago |
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super Another great song expertly played sung and recorded. I was surprised to read you use a SM58 for the guitar - I was expecting to read you had some two thousand dollar condenser mic! One to down load to the iPod. All the best Steve |
![]() | timothy devine said 47 days ago |
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Great lyric, very hip What a cool song, with some really great chord changes. The layered vocal is cool. The drum, I didn't anticipate but really comes in nice. Cool drum pics I like that you kept the guitar solo acoustic/ nice solo I'm in love with the chorus/dark yet catchy. i am just digging the way you record your acoustic/ it sounds alive great recording! |

















quite different on this one David. Some very interesting changes - I can see way it was quite a challenge - but you've done an excellent job - the solo is great. Looks like I'm going to have to burn another CD of your songs.
Peter