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 | announcer said 131 days ago |
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Really tight track I like the length of this ... just right. Leaves me wanting to hear more. (Which is good 'cause it means I'll listen again). Mix is tight ... tight ... tight. I might have mixed the drums up a little bit but that is a preference. With everything that is going on in this song you may have made a better choice with the drum mix. Tight doubling and tripling of the vocal ... sounds good. |
 | MKVX said 128 days ago |
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I like this This is significantly better than the last song you and JPFresh did. The main line is super duper and you really managed to get the right synths and guitar with the vocals. The rapping is pretty good. Wicked little sucker! Now for some constructive criticism. The song i think could be a little bit faster. In some parts the slow rapping sounds a bit too much like plain talking. The "popping champagne.... ship game" line drags on a bit. You also might want to raise the volume of the vocals on certain words at certain times and drop the rest of the song only to bring it back in. just some ideas. Don't get me wrong at all. I like this one a lot! Ciao |
 | ElPeruano said 128 days ago |
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club rock/rap. thats what Id call it. catchy stuff. I like the work you did with the drums. and that synthy solo is tight. good sound man. if you ever want to collab id love to spit on a beat like this sometime. message me if youre interested. the sirens are a nice touch. awesome man. |
nice track. your voice/rapping reminds me a bit of eminem. (i hope you take that as the compliment it is intended to be.) like the instrumentation. it works. the synth solo is killer!
the only thing i'd like to hear is it encoded at a better bit rate. it's sounds kinda myspace-quality to my ears. thanks for sharing.