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 | TEXASFEEL said 138 days ago |
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Much improved I believe like most other MJ'ers, through time spent on this site improvement is evident. I was happy to hear the bass updated and helped to glue all the elements together. Sounds like you went back and cleaned up some loose ends on your keyboards and the middle eight really adds to the composition relieving some of the repetition. I would still like to hear a busier drum track, that may be a personal preference. Great to hear this evolve, your quite the musician. John |
 | paul f. page said 138 days ago |
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I really... ...like this number and your mix of it. It has a style and flavor that is very engaging even though primarily in a minor mode... Ah, I hear that section in major...hummm...didn't fit well. Nice keyboard work throughout. Would you consider a sax in exchange for the flute line? Seems like it would be a little more characteristic of the general style...The CODA is way cool. You really get into the groove here...Is there MORE reverb in this section of the mix? Sounds a little brighter to me. Be sure you're consistent throughout. This is a cool track and very enjoyable to listen to. Hope the thoughts/comments help. Peace. Paul |
 | Ibstrat said 137 days ago |
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I really like the way this builds.Blues counterpoint!Very nice. |
 | thoddi said 137 days ago |
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I like it Had to pick up my guitar and jam along. Cool:) |
 | Vic Holman said 137 days ago |
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never.. ... did hear the first, but I like this, soulfull. |
 | tokai said 136 days ago |
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blue for you very nice indeed. The bass come in a bit too loud at the start. Good vibes, peaceful. |
 | rtcooper said 133 days ago |
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THE BRIGHTER SIDE CLARITY Good Soundstage and Dynamics. Love the Bass and the emphatic Outro. Nice Drive and Rhythm Section. Percussion doesn't present a problem for me, Though, we all should have BFD, EZ or the like to allow the KIT to contribute fully. Now, on to the Original. Compliments, Cooper |
 | Alannah said 129 days ago |
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well now .... .. this was a nice little "swing" jazz for me .... pleasant listening this evening .... boo bob a dee doo ... la la la ... couldnt help boppin around myself while listening ... |
 | timothy devine said 123 days ago |
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Hey Bill Nice tune I will check out the orig later this, as thoddi and u agree, opens up the jam mode even vocals could fit in this bed you have made is enticing the groove is way cool and the electric piano sound u got very hip dig your laid back style on this nice tune did i say that peace out tm |
 | guitapick said 123 days ago |
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Sweet blues... ...posted while I was on vacation...glad I found it... |
 | thetiler said 118 days ago |
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This has terrific rhythm. LIke the walking the steps funky feel. Sorry, I can't come up with the exact words. This has really nice funk feel and done with not too much loudness. Enjoy especially when you add the piano in parts, it really seems to shine there alot! Also towards the end with the funky organ sounds. Thanks for sharing and taking the time out to upload this! |
 | PickQuickRecords said 101 days ago |
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Cool! I really like the feel this one has. I never heard the first one but this has a laid back vibe I'm really diggin'. I love the way all of the elements work together. Fine piece of work. I like the "brush" quality of the snare, but one suggestion. Maybe a "snap" here and there would give it what your looking for without having to remove the track and starting from scratch. Besides that, I really like what you did so far. I can't wait to hear more. Good job! Very smooth. |
and I like this one much better than the original. This is a much more intricate mix of sounds that fit the mood better. I did notice a few places where you went from a minor to major key on this which sounded out of place a little to my ears.
Your keyboard work is very cool and this is a great track my friend, now if we can just get you a bass player and a drummer to round it out, you've got a killer track.
Thanks for sharing
Be well and be cool,
Ed