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 | jiguma said 146 days ago |
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Hmmmm! Very impressive on a number of counts - firstly, the sound is generally really good - great, strong mix with lots of good placement. A cool song, well played and sung. Uncanny resemblance to James Taylor in places (and you sing like him too lol!). If I was to suggest an area for improvement (and I do so with some hesitation), it would perhaps be that the mix could use some more air - it would probably sound better if everything didn't sound pushed so much. Hard to explain, but maybe what I mean to say is that less compression would be better. Nevertheless, this is a really good post. Neil |
 | Godchaser said 146 days ago |
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Beautiful post I love the 'spirit' of this piece.Lovely singing and playing.For me,other than no cap on the 'G'on the posted lyric sheet,this tune has everything I look for in a post.A first rate instant fav.Solid toe tappin',heart warmin'stuff my friend! Blessings, |
 | egobandit said 145 days ago |
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thats it i give up this is too perfect well ya know it makes me strive to be better thanks! |
 | Scott Carmichael said 145 days ago |
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Well now. this is terrific... I'm always getting CSNY compares... I will now pass this to you.. there is a vibe that consistently props this up and carries all through this... sweet... I love how the lyric teeters on the etherial... "see the ruby in a drop"... deep bow to you.. brilliant stuff... sincerely Scott |
 | Jim Bouchard said 145 days ago |
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great! A few of the previous comments address the problems I hear, which are the compression, and the sort of buried vocals. But it sounds pretty good, a little busy perhaps, with a lot of Logic Pro toys being used throughout, top to bottom. Another mix might be more pared down and the song would probably stand up on it's own pretty well. But I've got no complaints. I think the hum at the end must be the mic, as it sounds like you left the guitar mic up in the mix in the fadeout (as evidenced by what sounds like what I've experienced as a shirt-button-or-belt-hitting-the-back-of-the-acoustic-guitar-when-leaning-over-to-press-the-button-to-stop-recording sound that occurs at the very end of the song); it's not likely a software instrument bass causing that sound even if there's a lot of compression on it. Bringing down the guitar's mic track on the fade might just take care of that. It's nice to have the room sound in there, but it sounds like you might be getting a bit of hum from the computer as well that's more obvious when the rest of the instruments fade out. It's one of those things that would drive me crazy in mixing until I isolated it and fixed it, but I can understand your enthusiasm; it's a great song and I'm glad you're sharing it as it is! |
 | J.A.Stewart said 144 days ago |
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Celebratory Feel Wonderful, "up" tune, played with breathless enthusiasm. Nice acoustic instrument mix and arrangement. Pleasant vocal and good harmony work. Some nice guitar licks, too. Well done. ;) --- Joe |
 | shiner said 142 days ago |
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Easy favourite Fanatastic track. Clearly a lot of work has gone into it. A really full sound. Some mixing issues. It's a good idea to have an impartial listener aid with the final mixdown. well i guess that's what this is for. If anything it's only very minor. Easy favourite for me. Cheers!!! |
 | timothy devine said 142 days ago |
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to this heart/ pablatone great instrumentation and vocals the guitar playing is so nice and bright and mandolin is primo all those strings recorded so clearly impossible mic or direct? what a great lisen and for sure a keeper I love this real clean recording and crisp playing beautiful work/or is it pleasure (nice ending) peace tm |
 | Skatehorn said 137 days ago |
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It's all been siad already... but just to add my tuppenceworth - I though this was fantatsic, brilliant use of instruments. My favourite part was actually the outro Great stuff Cheers S |
 | Dj French Toast said 129 days ago |
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Thanx for the download great tune man ! |
 | pablatone said 128 days ago |
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hey thanks youz guyz skatehorn, i don't think i've seen you around these parts. thanks for droppin in! toasty! it's been awhile, good to see you again. paul |
 | lengold said 115 days ago |
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just looked up leviathan - and still no wiser. Wonderful song and performance. Cheers Len |
 | Roxylee said 75 days ago |
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Your music amazes me Each song is so excellent and creative! I really enjoyed the harmony here, reminds me of CSN. Sweet music and great rhythm. |
 | Cori Ander said 65 days ago |
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Masterpiece I'm a late discoverer of your music! Another masterpiece! Your music will reside on highest rank in my music collection! |
 | lank81 said 17 days ago |
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Music... I can only hope to make one day. Great playing Pabla. Overall a nice thruthful song with great production. Thanks a lot for this one. |
Very well done song! Beautiful guitar work (may be the best I've heard from you). You're such a strong singer, but it seems to me the vocals are a little buried. I'd probably bring them up (at least the lead) a couple of db. Other than that, bravo!