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![]() | dirigent said 157 days ago |
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Makes You Wonder Wow this brandnew song is excellently written and most expertly performed. Fantastic playing, great and intense vox. A superb work!! bravo!!! |
![]() | lavalamp said 157 days ago |
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New best friend Glad you could get to know your new best friend a bit. What I like about this are the production, lyrics and vocals. Very heartfelt. Any criticism might be that it's not extremely catchy.........you see?, now I feel bad. But, I think this song is a good accomplishment. We all miss Yeman here. Dave |
![]() | Skean said 157 days ago |
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Your best ever man You always impress on me with the quality of you songs.. WOW what a lyrics and the music is fantastic you can say what you want this should only have 10's from every one who vote... oooh's yes SIr. Take care --- Kenta |
![]() | tokai said 157 days ago |
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Well put togehter tune with a great arrangement. i like the sound of the guitars on this. I like where the inspiration comes from and the subject matter. |
![]() | mowguy3 said 157 days ago |
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Just A fantastic tune in every fashon. Your vocals with the hush kind of delivery is right on. Just awsome. Thanks, Russ |
![]() | MarkHolbrook said 157 days ago |
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Stunning... So clean, so perfectly mixed. Great sounds and more important a great message. 8 tracks of ahs... They sound like one! One very tight amazing track. Thoroughly enjoyed this to the dual core! :) I just got the logic studio upgrade installed and wow... ya too much to play with too little time. M |
![]() | TobinMueller said 157 days ago |
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Subject bullseye Another fab song. All around great writing. Two critiques: I don't mind you imprecise vocal pitch except on a few first words of stanzas. I really want to hear you start on the right pitch on chord changes in the chorus, for example. Also, there are a few times you use the exact same finger-picking that you've used on many other songs (all the time you're waiting, for example), and if this song is in a collection of others, you might want to figure out an alternative voicing. Great song. Great subject choice, again. |
![]() | davajonah said 157 days ago |
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Stunner... Neil, this is gorgeous. I've taken a DL, thanks. Terrific song, terrific mix. Kudos. |
![]() | thoddi said 156 days ago |
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cool lead guitar You have made some nice textures with your telecaster in here. I dig it when you rip up an otherwise pretty smooth groove with some distorted guitar notes. Very tasty:) And the groove is smooth and flows with good help from your finger picking on that seagull. I read Tobins comment about the guitar picking, and I think he has a point worth looking into especially if you have an album in mind, where such patterns could be recognizable from song to song... But looking at any song isolated, it works very well:) Your production skills have become very good. You've made a perfect mix to my ears. Thanks for your comment on my latest... I chose to pull it down, 'cause I noticed that the kick drum was way too loud and started to annoy me:) |
![]() | peacepiano said 156 days ago |
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Song Well sung song about a grim reality for too many young people in the world today. Sounds great. Thanks Bill |
![]() | Ibstrat said 156 days ago |
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I love the way the bass line locks in with the drums.That bass line sounds like something Chris Squire of Yes would have done.Some of the vocals are maybe slightly not on pitch- doesn't bother me much being a fan of Dylan,Mark Knopler and the Dead.It's the feel that matters to me.I'm going to have to listen to this a bunch of times. |
![]() | lengold said 156 days ago |
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I really wish I could find something to criticise. But this just sounds perfect to me. Great song, playing, singing and fantastic production. Cheers Len |
![]() | michael2 said 156 days ago |
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neil this is cool, almost reminds me of later era Floyd. You say it's not catchy, but i find it's definitely engaging and holds your interest. wish there was a little more bass (if I am to find something constructive to say), but man the stereo imaging is great, and so are those guitar sounds. what do you use to create your drum tracks? i'm always looking for new ideas. thanks for posting. |
![]() | dajama said 156 days ago |
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Very cool A haunting track, with lovely performances, both instrumentally and vocally. The story behind the song is powerful, and you express the tragedy of that life so well. Excellent lyrics. The singing is superb (lead as well as backing) and I too love the oohs and aahs. The guitar sounds lovely, and the drums are perfect for the song; love that snare sound. A couple of minor nits spring to mind: At the end, I felt the fadeout didn't feel right ("I felt it didn't feel right"? What?) and I think it would have been better to end on that keyboard sound from the beginning in isolation, or accompanied by your backing vocal (the oohs and aahs). The other minor thing is the instrumental section, which I felt was a tad too long. But these are nits. A magnificent song, brilliantly played. You've got the touch, brother. Nicely done. Peace. |
![]() | Moviz said 156 days ago |
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Great sounds and production Neil. Love all the instruments; the drums and slightly menacing sounding string synths especially, but the vocals are really tops. As always these are great lyrics with a lot of thought going into them. Just a great sound and song, cheers M |
![]() | TEXASFEEL said 156 days ago |
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Fine Mix Solid song with a lot of meaning... I hope Yeman is doing ok. Sounds like you got that Ozone down, the mix sounds nice. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() | guygrooves said 156 days ago |
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This is moving.. Thank you for the post, download, and the reminder to keep Yeman, as well as all others who live with this daily, in mind. This is one of the few that is actually worthy of the sunshine blown in it's direction. Outside of what has already been mentioned, I have only one thing that I don't like about this piece. That little crash cymbal that stands out like a sore thumb ha ha. It might be because of a drummer I once played with, who wouldn't spend a dime on improving his kit and he had these awful cymbals, and it reminded me of it.... so it's probably just me lol. Outstanding Neil |
![]() | sloparts said 156 days ago |
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Oh man, this is great Neil The concept, the execution, the playing, the mixing, the production, are all wonderful. An outstanding piece in all respect my friend, you should be very proud of this one. Thanks you for sharing this Neil, it's to good for words to express. Ed |
![]() | SmokeyVW said 156 days ago |
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multiwow There's so many great features to this tune! Great song. It all meshes together very very well. -- around 4:09 there's some dissonance between the vocals and strings, perhaps on purpose, but it caught my ear. thanks |
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very well mixed really good composition, the voice reminds me of roger waters -this IS A GREAT TUNE! on headphones its a pleasure |
![]() | guitapick said 156 days ago |
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~ Serious tune... |
![]() | E-Frame Wrecker said 156 days ago |
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First time hearing your stuff Interesting progression in the bridge/chorus. I enjoyed the song. Nice job on the drums, nice blend of the acoustic with the rest of the music. Overall a well produced song that has relevance at this moment. Going with that Robbie Robertson whisper - fits the song and the subject matter. |
![]() | Dragonas said 156 days ago |
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Neil! Wow! Where to start? (I'll try to limit my sunshine, even though I know you secretly love it. ;-)) The drums sound so real to me. Very big and full sounding drums. You vocals are very Pink Floyd-ish to me, kinda haunting and thought provoking, yet melodic and pleasing to the ear at the same time. Great bass work. (I'm a fellow bassist.) The Tele seems to wonder melodically a bit, but I assume you are using it for ambience. I know you could rerecord a better guitar solo, if you wanted to. But that's my biggest nits. I really like the mix. (I might make the jump up to Logic Pro just for the sound quality.) Great song! Cheers, John |
![]() | rtcooper said 155 days ago |
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YEAH, I GUESS! STUDIO 8, Eh? Well, The Ideas Didn't come from STUDIO 8, Brother. Great Groove, cleverly reinforced several different ways. The Percussion is Cool, even with less polyrhythms than many of your pieces. Direct with a hint of hesitation, like, "what's next?" There is a guitar that appears twice that sounds like a Gibson LP Jr., with a tricked out Fralin P90 through a Mesa Heartbreaker! Did you borrow some Gear? Wish the last stanza was other than a refrain, because I know where that goes when you could have surprised me. TOP SHELF Production Values. Compliments and Regards, Cooper |
![]() | Roxylee said 155 days ago |
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I agree EVERYTHING about this is superb. |
![]() | Karmatoburn said 155 days ago |
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stunning Neil, what a monster track. A very new cool sound on the guitars, almost frippish. The mix is excellent. You keep the bar raising. Could very well be my new favorite Jiguma tune. |
![]() | J.A.Stewart said 155 days ago |
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Great Musical Atmosphere... for a not-so-great Real-Life atmosphere. This is truly an inspired piece, Neil and you've put it together exceptionally well. You've made some splendid choices for instrument textures in here, adding to the vibe. Nice work with the distorted Tele... it really complements this piece. I never imagined I'd ever be saying this to a bass player, but... I thought the bass was a little TOO subtle in the mix. LOL But that little nit aside, this is one very good song and arrangement. ;) --- Joe |
![]() | Doadars Uncle said 155 days ago |
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Heavy I pray for peace. Good song. |
![]() | SJB said 155 days ago |
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G'day Ah Neil, another classic from you! As usual the real bass marks this one out for me, just so much better than a midi line. The Telecaster's sounding very moody underneath and gives a nice edge against the delicate sound of the Seagull. Lyrically very strong and making me thankful for the fortune I've had. All the best Steve P.S. Not sure how you will ever avoid string squeaks as long as you're sticking with real guitars. Even midi as a string squeak sound to liven up a midi guitar track! |
![]() | justatom said 155 days ago |
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Great performance and production. Thanks Neil for the download. This is a very good song. Love the lyrics, vocals, mix, arrangement... Thanks for sharing. Tom |
![]() | Miller-Schletty said 155 days ago |
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A real good one one Neil... .. for the Yemans and the Feters of this all too often sad and seemingly senseless world. real good one... Jack |
![]() | egobandit said 154 days ago |
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Bass! The drums and bass are so tight and clear that thump thump you get is envious,besides that the subject matter and the way it is expressed through the lyrics really sets the listener up for some serious goosebumps. As allways for me this is an instant download another one in my Jiguma collection thanks! |
![]() | 12parsecs said 154 days ago |
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great production! very liberating, isn't it? all the power of a new computer and program. but let's not detract from a well written and performed tune. the drums are perfect as with everything else. the sound you got on the lead vox is perfect! and the 8 bg tracks are very cool. (and your new G5 didn't even flinch, i'll bet.) i'm sure yeman would love this. i wonder how he's doing? |
![]() | aclarke said 153 days ago |
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This may sound odd.... and I know you won't take it the wrong way... but I really think this would be fantastic with Lisa (LeDebutant's) voice on it. It's totally your song and style, Neil... I just really think she would sound terrific on this. Not a knock on your voice... just sharing an idea! Very strong subject matter. You really have developed your own way of saying things lyrically... songs tinged with sadness and subtle protest. Does that even make sense? |
![]() | composerclark said 153 days ago |
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Fantastic! Extremely powerful%u2026 haunting even, and the sound you have is amazing; so clean, crisp, and%u2026 full. It sounds completely professional to me. Fantastic. |
![]() | rsorensen said 153 days ago |
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makes you wonder wow. the first thing that stood out to me on this one was the production. really full mix. that low end really carries the song nicely. great vocal performances - the harmonizing is really well done. I like the changeup in the chorus but something caught me a little off guard in there and it didn't feel 'right' to me. I think it's the synths. Maybe they're just a little too 'dreamy' for the vibe you're going for. They kind of clash with the guitars to me and they're all I hear. It might be a matter of choosing a different synth sound or putting something else in their place. I think the synths work great everywhere else (esp. the instrumental break), just not in the chorus. Now all this is just my opinion and preference of course. Someone else may think the chorus synths are the best part of the song. The other thing (sorry) is the fade out at the end. I would've liked to hear 1-2 more rotations of the lyric 'All the time you%u2019re praying All the time you%u2019re hoping To get away'. The fade out as is sounds a little too abrupt to me. If you sing those lyrics a couple more times and fade out on them it would really mark the 'end' of the song better in my opinion. Ok ok, done. I really really like this one Neil and I wouldn't spend time writing all this up if I didn't, so know I think this is one of your best. Great job. And congrats on your new setup. Jealous! |
![]() | timothy devine said 152 days ago |
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Neil this is fab the sound you get with the guitars is real hip the electric soloing is a real good spice adding lots of flavor. Anchored with that strong bass and the acoustic (is recordig real good with that mic) its a go nice classic jiguma peace tm |
![]() | BossHook said 151 days ago |
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Sweet mix and production. I love the way this builds the "all the time" hook throughout. Interesting departure in the bridge. |
![]() | Ejh said 151 days ago |
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Okay, finally got here... Here are some things I like: I like the slower-than-jiguma-standard tempo, and the more delicate touch on the fingerpicked acoustic, especially at the intro. I like the way the bass is phrased very much, less four-to-the-bar than in the past, but more phrase-pause-phrase, and both phrases both melodic and rhythmic. I think the drums are nicely in the pocket, and some of the fills perfectly augment music or lyric. I like some of the "structured-noise-becomes-music" electric guitar bits very much... And the bass works very well against the drums. I continue to like the stripped down jiguma vocal, and yet welcome the return of artfully sparse doubling or shadowing voices. On its own I would have not a nit to pick with this song. I will give one sort of offshoot to Tobin's comment, which is not so much about the fingerpicking but about melody. Taken as part of the whole evolving collected works of Neil, I'd love to see you bust out a little as regards melody and phrasing, making some of the songs more songlike and less 'spoken' in the singing. Also, I want to hear those power pop hooks and big choruses I know you have in you... Quite remarkably clear mix, too... Ed |
![]() | caroline said 151 days ago |
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blimey jiggy.... ... i'm late and i am gob-smacked - this is a very ouchie song and you know how much i hate having my chakras hurt but it is amazing - congratulations on producing something so professional and so moving - you have the gift my dear - big loves xoxo |
![]() | Feter said 150 days ago |
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Makes You Wonder Ye ... I ve been there ..thnx for your sharin your honest emotions and thoughts !! |
![]() | Scott Carmichael said 149 days ago |
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Neil I love the textured bed this lands on... that guitar peddling under and left is perfect... your quite a master of the craft... in another life I might have had a chance to tag along with you... one can dream... this slinks along wonderfully and paints the picture before a word is sung... I'm always looking for someone to use the full language like this.... so what's in that glass/snifter you are holding in your picture? |
![]() | D-Day1944 said 148 days ago |
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Chalk Wow your awsome LOL this is realy gorgous. Your a reaally talented musician. I especially love the bits that sound like chalk skreetching on a blackboard that's my favourite noise that is. Peas. D-Day xxx |











































Neil, this is incredible. I will feel eternally guilty for blowing sunshine, and yet, I MUST! What an accomplishment this is - makes me wistful for SISTERS too, so glad to know Anne was a little part of this. Can't believe you've been SITTING on this, holding out on us. Great work, congratulations (from Ms. Sunshine)