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![]() | VicDiesel said 176 days ago |
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Interesting take on the matter Very creative idea, and great execution. Smooth sounds too. I like that bass that just glides through the music. |
![]() | futzpucker said 176 days ago |
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Sophisicated... This is as smooth as pouring cream... Really like the chord voicings and the harmonies. And obviously you have a nice rhythm track holding it all down... I can see why you love Logic - you make it sing sweetly for you. -Patrick |
![]() | lengold said 176 days ago |
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What a wonderful sound you have created. Great lyrical ideas - the sound bed is fantastic, love the jazzy keys. The vocal harmonies are just superb. I really love this - shame no download. Cheers Len |
![]() | Moviz said 176 days ago |
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This is just so nice, nice, nice; love everything about it the backing , backing vocal harmonies, your singing and your rap (and I never would have said I liked rap till I heard you here at MJ). You have the most clear voice for rap so that every word is audible and a nice message too. Love the smoothness here ......and good luck with the CD, cheers M |
![]() | MarkHolbrook said 176 days ago |
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Very cool and very smooth Mr Moses!!! |
![]() | Bubowski said 175 days ago |
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Wow Have to say that hip hop has never been on my radar for my usual listening, but this is a very nice chart. Nice chord transitions, impeccable recording. I like the groove and feel. Singing is spot on. I like the little organ lick about 2/3 of the way in; very subtle little thing in the background, but a cool addition. Nicely done. |
![]() | sloparts said 175 days ago |
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A letter 2 Hiphop Since I don't know much about Hiphop I don't feel qualified to vote on this or critique it so I'll just leave a comment to let you know I was here. I do like the mix on this with one caveat. It has an interesting mix of sounds that work well from what I hear, but for my ears the Vox is a little to far back in the mix. Need to bring the vocals up a little so the lyrics can be heard without straining. Other than that this sounds very good to me Moses. Be well and be cool man Ed |
![]() | AcetyleneJukebox said 174 days ago |
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Clever Yeah, what happened to Lauryn Hill? "That thing" was a great track. I like how you quote in your song. I love the ending of this one. good stuff. how come you didnt post it on iComp? |
![]() | skwalz said 173 days ago |
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dude! to be honest, i dont like this as much as i like all your other stuff. yo you can sing, and write ! ill be be lookin out for your stuff. keep singing man! this is not a knock on this song. keep doin it man! |
![]() | caroline said 173 days ago |
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ooooooooo.... mmmmmmmm...... pouring a drink... kicking off my shoes ... and it isn't even lunchtime!!! this is smooth as silk ... as sensual as velvet but... it might just be me - lol - ty - love it xoxox |
![]() | Lightman- said 172 days ago |
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Great Nice song.... I rarely listens to hiphop, but this song is really listenable.... You're good a the words and rap... You sings in a good way... And the background vocals has a good sound.... Feelings is in this.... Thanks for sharing... |
![]() | spitlogic said 172 days ago |
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Love this Nice structure and very involving concept. Though I may not totally agree with everything here I do appreciate what you've made. Thank you. |
![]() | 12parsecs said 171 days ago |
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pro. great production. perfect mix, nice groove - bass and keys are killer. speaking of killer, your bgs are simply amazing. great note choices. the vocals get an 11! |
![]() | Dj French Toast said 171 days ago |
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Very nice man I love your beat and the vibe is great . Your vocal is smooth and well leveled in the song . Love the poem and the concept and the production is smooth and well mixed . Great song fellow hiphopian . |
![]() | Cadman said 170 days ago |
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Hate Hip-hop Love this :-) |
![]() | ElPeruano said 165 days ago |
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great great production, vocals, and lyrics. Nas said "Hip Hop is Dead." KRS-One said "Hip Hop Lives." Your track continues and clarifies the debate ;). Great stuff. But seriously, where is Lauryn Hill?? Miss her. |
![]() | Lennon714 said 159 days ago |
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wow I was directed to this from your forum post. The message is read loud and clear over here. I think every genre needs a letter like this. Your message is so well told. It's firm, but you're not disrespectful, you're earnest. I'm glad you posted the forum link. This is great! |
![]() | Pete_NB said 159 days ago |
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Syrupy smooth Hard to avoid that word "smooth", as so many other posters to this song have used. That's because it's maybe the smoothest sound I've heard on Macjams. Smooth vocals singing some great lyrics and a seamless job getting everything blended together, almost like you rubbed out all the hard edges of a drawing with your thumb. Smooth! |
![]() | Kicbal said 55 days ago |
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Sweet groove Awsome, I think you have a great sounding rap voice, cool attitude. But mainly I love the musicality of it. Great harmonies and singing parts too. The actual rap is tight and engaging to listen to. Sounds really pro, even when you are cramming a lot of words together, it works and is still smooth, not forced like you hear with rappers that are trying to hard to fit it all in. I also love that the music in the background is as interesting as the rapping and singing. Too often this seems to get left behind or is afterthought. |




















Hip-Hop Unknown. LOL
I like the humor and irony of this song, as well as its very smooth musical bed. I *listened* to the rap, but really dug the harmony vocal work.
Nice work, Moses. ;)
--- Joe