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 | Moviz said 180 days ago |
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Your songs and your treatment of them just keep getting better and better, This sounds great vocally , instrumentally and lyricwise. I like how you arrange your songs into compartments and yet keep the smoothness there. Great backing sounds too. Really like this and your voice sounds really good, regards M |
 | sloparts said 180 days ago |
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Another great song David You just keep getting better and better at this. Your lyrics are some of the best ever, and you musical backdrop for those words always seems to fit perfectly. I love this song for it's quietness and subtleness my friend. It isn't screaming in you face, it whispers in your ear. Very well done David. Thank you Ed |
 | Vic Holman said 180 days ago |
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I'm Glad... ... you listened to that little voice, David This came out excellent! fantastic production and a very solid tune. the playing and vocals are top notch! |
 | lavalamp said 180 days ago |
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Wow Dave Honest lyrics in the Lennon/Dylan vein. Really cool stuff. You're one of the reasons I just love this site. Keep it up. Enjoy hearing from you. Dave |
 | Feter said 180 days ago |
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I Woke Up This is so gorgeous my friend ..your singing so great here ....but what amazed me the lead guitar work ... that was a flash light over the rethym was extrmely marvelous ...thats totaly cool thnx alot for sharin !! |
 | Roxylee said 180 days ago |
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Glad you let this one come here David, this is great lyric writing, and the music fits the words perfectly. It has everything- contemplation, questions, recognition of the facts, and then hope, which will win out, because it's in the last verse. :-) |
 | Ejh said 180 days ago |
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Another good one, David... One of the nice things about your songs, for me, is that I'm always really confident that I'm going to love what you're doing with the chord progression, the guitars and the vocals... Sometimes it takes me more than one listen to start to get a clue about the lyrics. I don't mind, 'cause the songs sound so cool... Wonderfully uninhibited solo, with neat tone. As noted, all of the guitar tone is great. I should know this, I s'pose, but what are you using for guitars? And for the drums? Ed |
 | Karmatoburn said 180 days ago |
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dig those changes. Funny how you listen to something and its immediately a little of deja vu and the new frontier at the same time. Very cool. Carried me away. |
 | guygrooves said 180 days ago |
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You never know... what is hidden from you till you go digging to find it out. I can relate to how this song came together for you. I am so happy you didn't give up on this because what you have created here is outstanding on all fronts. Beautifully sang and played, absolutely stunning lyric so worthy of all the high marks it has received and will receive. Thanks for the download. |
 | peacepiano said 179 days ago |
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Better Didn't here the originals, but this must be better than the sum of its parts. Lyrics Music Everything is sounding good here. Thanks Bill |
 | lengold said 179 days ago |
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David - this is such a lovely song and very well performed. I very much like the production, which has been done with restraint and all sounds very natural and as it should. Cheers Len |
 | Gamborg said 179 days ago |
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Good Song Hi David It's very good lyrics and vocal you got. A nice and easy composition with a great lead play just after 3 min. into the song. Keep up the good work. Cheers, CG |
 | bud said 179 days ago |
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Man this tune is so wonderful your production and performance are really top notch and I love the lyrics. I wish I had the discipline to do what you've done. I've tried - but then I always get seduced into doing something completely new - or so I think - I tend to repeat myself often enough without trying. |
 | 12parsecs said 178 days ago |
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very clear. very nice, clear production on this track. well done. and great progressions, verse and chorus! and vibrato gtr pre-chorus. well crafted tune! like how you got out of the bridge too. |
 | tokai said 178 days ago |
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Good job you kept this one then. You have made a great tune. |
 | magnatone said 178 days ago |
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I Woke Up If this is cannabalism, I'm officially becoming a supporter of this practice. I always know I'm going to like a post from you. It's amazing isn't it, how one idea leads to another? Thanks! |
 | jiguma said 177 days ago |
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Lovely production Dave In light of my forum post, I listened and listened for a nit to pick so I could make a suggestion - didn't find any. This is a classy, well performed song, beautifully mixed. I love the way you've got the acoustics panned and set up - beautifully rhythmic. Drums are classy - everything is classy! Great post, Neil |
 | bonnieprincejohnny said 177 days ago |
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Mighty fine. The 'I fell asleep in the world' hook is cool. The whole song is cool,however if it were down to me I'd beef up the vocal in the verse lines... it's only my personal preference but I do it by duplicating the vocal track then shifting it right or left a tiny fraction of the original - it's auld skool but it can be effective. Good stuff, I like how you recycled your work. |
 | guitapick said 174 days ago |
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Lyrics... ...are prime and so powerful...the music, with it's chord changes and textural changes, works hand and hand to deliver the message... Nice work, David. Super tune.... |
 | Lennon714 said 174 days ago |
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i woke up I love the acoustic guitar tone you get on this. Vocals are VERY strong and unique. Cool tune! |
 | Jim Bouchard said 174 days ago |
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Great! Great song! I've been a bit preoccupied with trying to finish up some of my own things lately so I'm late to the party, and I apologize. It's well worth the wait. It all sounds great, great vocal, great guitars, altogether great groovy recording. I feel like it should have ended on the chorus. Come in with the chorus with a pause after "the arrows in our hearts" line and fade out on that. It's such a great hook, and ending on the unresolved verse is intriguing, but it sounds so much like it should come back in after a pause with that strong chorus that I felt a little let-down. Just my subjective opinion. This reminds me of MacJammer dolby's stuff, and that's meant as a high praise. You should check out his stuff if you're not familiar with it, you'd find a kindred soul. As it is, it works, but keep striving! |
 | Lightman- said 173 days ago |
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Great I like the lyrics.... And your voice is good on this.... The sound on the lead vocal is great... A thing, where the effects on the vocals isn't too loud.. This is good mixed.... |
 | VicDiesel said 173 days ago |
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Cool Nice song, easy going, simlple but effective arrangement. Don't be afraid to rerecord occasional phrases: you're sometimes just a tad out tune, for instance 1:57-2:02. |
 | Remark80 said 172 days ago |
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Great Song Very well written. I like the mellow verses with the acoustic and the electric drives when you get to the chorus. Love the change in the chorus. Nice change to the bridge. Great Job man. |
 | Dragonas said 172 days ago |
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Great job! I absolutely love the lyrics on this gem. The feeling is similar to what I was going for in "Do You Remember." I also really like your voice and think that it would be worth going through and rerecording a couple phrases where you were just a touch out of tune, nothing major at all. Downloaded and Favd. |
 | asconejar said 166 days ago |
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:) Very nice vocal, mix, lyrics and bass lines. I'm envious of the what you've done here. |
 | E-Frame Wrecker said 156 days ago |
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This is good I really enjoy listening to this song, not analyzing it. Its great music to my ears. You did an outstanding job with this one. It belongs on a CD or a longboard surfing video. |
Wow ! You can never go wrong when I hear your fantastic music I go to heaven litterally. Love it You Rock. Top notch.
Peace Dee.