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![]() | Feter said 181 days ago |
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The Only One WOW ... how could you do that ? ...I can just say this is camin from my vinyl ...just so classic .. so great singing ..the guitar realy realy sound perfect here ..very nice harmony work ..the drums just fair enough to say real ...one of my fav songs of yours my friend ...Hats of to you !!!!!!!! |
![]() | TEXASFEEL said 181 days ago |
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Great vocals Nice melody laid on a bed of guitars. Full sound, fine progression all around. |
![]() | Moviz said 181 days ago |
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Really Nice song with good lyrics. I love the voice (nice vibrato) and the harmonies too..... guitars sound great and loved the changes.... enjoyed this a lot, cheers M |
![]() | MJ_Grand_Ole_Opry_Challenge said 181 days ago |
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Nice one Guy! Good song, well sung - perfect harmonies. Yep, this is really good - original sounding, but fitting in GOOC style. In the nit department, I'd like to hear some bass, and maybe a little more variation in the drum track (there's a closing hihat that appears all through the verses every 2 bars). A minor nit for sure, but a definite way of making the whole thing sound a little more like a real drummer is in there. "California metaphors" - great phrase. Nice ending too. Excellent post Guy! Neil |
![]() | J.A.Stewart said 181 days ago |
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Ends Up Being... a very nice Country-crossover tune. Very smooth. Nicely done. ;) --- Joe |
![]() | sloparts said 181 days ago |
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This is very, very good Guy Probably the best one so far at the GOO challenge my friend. You voice works so well on this, and you've got some great lyrics to sing too. The back tracks are perfect for it and so is your mix. Outstanding work Guy, I salute you for an absolutely fantastic job. Kudos and Bravo to you Guy. Ed |
![]() | alfalpha said 181 days ago |
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good honest... ...song writing. I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for posting! Cheers, Alf |
![]() | bud said 181 days ago |
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Really fine track great set of lyrics and excellent vocals. Nice guitar work too. |
![]() | lengold said 181 days ago |
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Lovely song Guy and very nice relaxed feel to it all. Cheers Len |
![]() | Vic Holman said 180 days ago |
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be true very nice tune Guy. solid writing and composition. True words, sometimes you have to stop and take a good look at yourself and wonder would I hang out with that person? just one of those things that makes a person wiser as time goes on. |
![]() | dajama said 180 days ago |
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Excellent song This is a great song. I love the lyrics, and you have some wonderful turns of phrase in there. A great sentiment - thought-provoking and perceptive. Your vocal performance is great. Your voice carries the weight of experience, and you bring great style and a laidback warmth to the song. Very cool. Kudos, my friend. Peace. |
![]() | sngwrtr said 177 days ago |
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Another viewpoint Musically, I find this to be pleasing to the ear, 'though it sounds very dated ... I realize it was recorded in the late 90's, but it sounds like something from a LOBO album from the ... what? early 70's? My real challenge with this song is in the lyrics. First, IMO, the song comes across as "preachy" - that is, the singer comes off as standing on a soapbox and preaching to the person he is speaking to. It's always a challenge to get a message of morality across in a song without sounder "holier than thou" and I'm not sure this one rises to that challenge. Structurally, I thought the lyrics were a bit off as well. You have first halves of lines that are sometimes very crowded followed by second halves that have tons of space ("now's as good a time as any" ... "to take stock"). Also, I thought the line "colorful metaphors and clever anecdotes" just doesn't work well in a song. Don't get me wrong, I like what's behind it, but it simply doesn't sing all that well or fall on the ear pleasantly. It's not very ... well ... lyrical. The arrangement is very nice, the vocals are quite good, and the message itself is both interesting and heartfelt, I believe. In my opinion, it doesn't quite work within the context of a song that one would care to listen to more than once, for the reasons I've offered above. One man's opinion ... please feel free to disregard! |
![]() | VicDiesel said 173 days ago |
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Great song I'm always happy to come across country music on this site. There's not enough of it, and what I've heard from you always sounds professional. Good song writing, and technically sound. Nothing flashy about the guitar parts, but solid support for your (excellent) vocal delivery. If I had to find one fault with this song, I'd say that your rhythm guitar sounds a bit too full, not leaving much space for the bass or the drums. Most of the time I only hear the kick drum and the tambourine. |
| Soundhound said 172 days ago | |
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Don't know..... Much about country music, I know good lyrics and performance..... And this is good on both counts very intuitive personally enlightening as well..... I...........LIKE IT......... |
![]() | BossHook said 170 days ago |
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This has a great retro Country recording production. A real cool Nashville sheen to it. |
![]() | sunfire0707 said 167 days ago |
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The One And Only Great song cous.Hope this site gets you to where you should be in the music business. Love you Wendy |
![]() | Elevator_Funk said 159 days ago |
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OK..So... here's my take. This is well made and better produced than anything I could do, so take it as you will. This song screams collaborations, because no-one is good at everything. If you could talk some-one to plug-in some country bends and pedal-steel licks into this song over the lead guitar, it would be a totally different song, it would switch it from eagles rock to dwight yokam. Also, I think the tempo of the song is too fast for the song. the lyrics ask for a slower tempo, like neil young slower if you know what I mean. Thats all meant to be constructive criticism. It's a new thing I'm trying out. Thanks for posting. |
![]() | egobandit said 157 days ago |
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I could never Write something like this thats why I like it so much..Don't know why but it reminds me of the Eagles. Excellent! |
![]() | Robert Rayner said 155 days ago |
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Great song Guy Superb vocals and lyrics. Read that you cheated with the harmonies, why not, technology is there, use it. Very impressive. (where can I get one)? Reminded me of mixture of Kenny Rogers and Glenn Campbell. Loved it |
![]() | woofer3 said 150 days ago |
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excellent song Guy Love your vocals as usual with that Ian Anderson tinge, also loved the harmonies. Very nice overall production. John. |
![]() | Bob Rodgers said 141 days ago |
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Sorry I missed this! A really good song Guy, so well played and I love your vocals, great singing and a great performance! Very much enjoyed, thanks! Bob |
![]() | SJB said 97 days ago |
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hi I've been enjoying this song for weeks but just relaised I forgot to comment. It's a sublime example of the songwriters' craft - I love this track! Steve |
![]() | richardhowardjones said 79 days ago |
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Mellow Glad I popped in to catch this, Guy. Nice one! |
![]() | Cori Ander said 78 days ago |
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This has a really warm sound Guy. Just the right kind and amount of effecting on your melodious vocal my friend. Good lyrics. Great arrangement. All in all a really good track!
Be well!