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![]() | TennesseeVic said 1388 days ago |
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Seriously soulful vocals This is great stuff. Unfortunately, the drums really spoil this. They have a half-time feel that saps the energy from the vocals. Try layering a percussion loop (or two) over it, and turn them down a bit too? Really, these vocals deserve better. |


Wonderful words, so full of optimism in the cold dark light
of day.
I like your melody and refrain. It's got that hypnotic thing
working again. I want to fall into a trance as I listen to this
as if it is set to an endless loop.