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 | dolby said 151 days ago |
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Nice. Like the chord progression. Now, where have i heard it before? The melody works really well over the top. Sounds like so many things. A really good song. You're right that the production isn't quite there yet, but you've done the right thing by posting. Maybe some others here will offer to dive in and help. Now, maybe I can post something without working it to death first? |
 | rsorensen said 151 days ago |
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wow really great song, eric. love those dueling guitars and that bridge is really cool too. the sound fx and samples work really well with the song and your daughter's input followed by your laugh is priceless. i like this a lot! |
 | michael2 said 151 days ago |
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this is great can't believe that you just threw this together. love that piano sound and the harmony leads. great vocals, this is a pleasure to listen too. awesome job. |
 | lavalamp said 151 days ago |
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The Office UK Dig the sort of happy, McCartney thing you've got going on here. Excellent piece of songwriting. Singing sounds nice to me. Did I mention Weezer-ish, too. Cool Dave |
 | davisamerica said 151 days ago |
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bbc is better.. lol ... like this ... don't be so hard on yourself :-] |
 | 8piscean8 said 149 days ago |
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Sweet! Very timeless. Great samples. There are a couple things that stick out in the mix but nothing major (tape recorder might be a little hot). I really dig the bass part. The bridge is also supper! My only suggestion for improvement would be to make the verse vocals sound more like the bridge/chorus vocals. The bridge/chorus vocals blend really well with the rest of the instrumentation but the verse vocals don't sound as cohesive as they could be with the other instruments. Maybe tuck in some reverb on them. That's just my two cents. Thanks for sharing! -Adam |
 | 12parsecs said 149 days ago |
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wicked progression what an awesome pop progression. love the raw vocals. great harmonies too. |
 | asconejar said 147 days ago |
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pang! my kids call me papa and my wife calls me pang. very nice and pleasant to ears type kind of music. thanks for sharing. |
 | thekurtisproject said 147 days ago |
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wasted on you This song had me going from the start. I was bobbing up and down in my chair. VERY beatle-ish, witch is a good thing (: I like your guitar tone and I like how the piano is bouncy! Goodwork. I like the voice intro and outro in the song as well =D >KURTIS |
 | buckhorn said 147 days ago |
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Great lively tune Well arraigned(wish I could do that) I like the song writing and the vocal a lot. I think your style calls for a fairly dry approach to the vocal, but Im guessing a tiny bit of matrix reverb like 2% wet and tiny bit of track echo would help the vocal mesh a little better. Great stuff anyhow. |
 | bud said 146 days ago |
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Perfection is over rated just look what it did to Brian Wilson. This is a great song with a wonderful structure and story. I like the vocals quite a bit. Excellent playing and arranging as well. |
 | timothy devine said 145 days ago |
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what r u talkin bout the vox is hip nice touch your daughter in there love it (I have three/ and a son) Geat music the build up on the piano is cool nice job dont sweat the details man cool sound |
 | LetTheMusicPlay said 144 days ago |
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Wasted on you Nice singing geat music and good lyrics. Well done. |
 | guitapick said 144 days ago |
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Maybe not perfect... ...but it'll do. ;) This is so cool...wonderful songwriting and performance... I'm a perfectionist, too. Had to tone it down, though, because performances were driving me crazy. A bit happier now, wallowing in my imperfect pigsty. |
 | Bob Rodgers said 143 days ago |
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Love the intro and this is a great song. Lovely chord progression and a real fav of mine this is! Lovely harmonies and vocals too. I can hear your Beatle influences and a very large pic of them from the '60s is on my studio wall! lol! I always loved them too! Excellent stuff! Thanks! |
 | racerat said 141 days ago |
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clean Clear and sparse. Like the open-ness of the track. Cool lyrics. Twangy and poppy. Though I feel the lyric could use just a hair of 'verb to set it back a little. Cool. Thanks Tobin for hipping me to this. Got some back catalogue to listen to now. Cheers, Philip |
 | dajama said 134 days ago |
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This is a great song I love the chord progression, and the restrained guitar works very well. Love the drum sound and the keyboards work well. I think your vocal performance is good - the voice sounds very forward in the mix, and maybe a little dry. I'm not suggesting slathering reverb all over the vocal or anything like that, but a little effect can bring out the voice even more, I think. Cool song. Nicely done. Peace. |
Nice stuff, I like your work and the choice of instruments. Really cool, thanks for sharing!
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