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![]() | Ejh said 199 days ago |
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Yeah... I can sort of imagine wounded members of the James Gang riding in slow motion back from Northboro to this... Ed |
![]() | thetiler said 199 days ago |
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The power of description liked those steps how he seems to walk back. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us MJers! |
![]() | estellie said 184 days ago |
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Like it... as is, as a short-short sketch. I don't feel I need to know what happens next, but I do think if you so chose, you could develop the arch of what's happening and expand a little. Thanks for this. I'm also intrigued at how there seems to be water on this rooftop, but I just took rooftop to be a metaphor for any of life's edges. Really cool concept... I like the twangy strings, not having much to say in that dept. except that it adds desperation to the song, which is appropriate. |




brilliant atmospherics - takes me outside and dips my head in a pool at sunset whike smokin a cigarette.very cool -
Rich