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 | algabatz said 1354 days ago |
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I realloy enjoyed this Someone suggested that is sounded like film music and i agree. Very visual, very suggestive. Like a chase in the beginning and a very uncomfortable thriller at the end. Very professional. An asset to the MacJams community. [str8 8ts] In my humble opinion /Algabatz |
| algabatz said 1354 days ago |
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I realloy enjoyed this Someone suggested that is sounded like film music and i agree. Very visual, very suggestive. Like a chase in the beginning and a very uncomfortable thriller at the end. Very professional. An asset to the MacJams community. [str8 8ts] In my humble opinion /Algabatz |
 | Peter Greenstone said 1325 days ago |
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tickled my brain There is some ultra-high frequency stuff that comes in that I don't know if it was intentional or not but I kind of liked how it tweaked my ears without being harsh. |
I like the build-up of intensity at the beginning, adding
layers, intensifying the rhythms. The longest section in
the first half seemed on the verge of being TOO extended,
but then it suddenly shifted to the more tonal section
nicely.
I wish that you had developed the later section more, it
was really cool. Then perhaps re-introduce the first
section again to tie this piece together.
It definitely needs to be longer, in my opinion....another
thirty seconds to a minute.
This piece reminds me of looking at an abstract art piece
in a gallery; one that asks the viewer to expand the mind
to new sights, new visuals...keeping the mind open.
You've got a real talent for combining sounds in new
ways, layering them imaginatively. The sort of "short-
term" pacing of the material in this piece is artful, but the
LONG-term pacing of the song as a whole needs to be
elaborated upon and expanded.