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![]() | MarkHolbrook said 170 days ago |
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Gorgeous Simply gorgeous! Thank you! |
![]() | Feter said 170 days ago |
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Struck Dumb what a love symphony ..a heartfelt song ..so awesome and so honest ..loved the lyrics man ..what a cool song thnx alot for sharin it !! |
![]() | Dee1962z said 169 days ago |
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Struck Dumb. Really beautiful music. Lovely Harmonising. Peace Dee. |
![]() | kassia said 169 days ago |
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dajama What a beautiful tune - and a wonderful gift for that special lady. Very sweet - great sound, your vocals are really good on this. Thank you for sharing this! |
![]() | Mystified said 169 days ago |
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what a beautiful song... :) Thank you for sharing this |
| Birdman Wayne said 169 days ago | |
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I like it.. Great piece, very nice lyrics, wonderful vocals and nice playing. I like it! Take Care - Yeman A. Al-Rawi |
![]() | Moviz said 169 days ago |
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You always write great lyrics/poetry and that's what makes your songs as nice as they always are, as well as your excellent way of playing and singing, great performance, cheers M |
![]() | lengold said 169 days ago |
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You really are a great songwriter David. This is lovely and the guitars, vocals and production spot on. Excellent. Cheers Len |
![]() | magnatone said 169 days ago |
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Struck Dumb Early America - I see why Peter said that. This is BEAUTIFUL!! I love your up-octave vocals in there. This is a coffeehouse winner. Wonderful, soulful tune - thanks! |
![]() | lavalamp said 169 days ago |
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Nice work Dave It has a certain........I'm struck dumb again. Very good one. LL BTW, you're an excellent writer. According to me. |
![]() | SJB said 169 days ago |
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Hi David A lovely song lyrically. The singing is spot on - I especially like the harmony parts. As always the guitar playing and recording is fantastic. I really like your signature "stero" guitar sound. The sound of the plectrum on the strings gives the strumming such a nice light and airy feel. Great listen - naturally I'll be downloading this! Best wishes Steve |
![]() | Vic Holman said 169 days ago |
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dual personality you & you did a wonderful job. It comes off as two people very well. the vocal harmonies are great! Beautiful tune! |
![]() | mowguy3 said 169 days ago |
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Again Just some great lyrics. I like the song discription,"she deserves a symphony". Great song in every way. Vocals are the tops with the soft guitar,over the top my friend. Thanks, Russ P.S I have been staying away from the coffee house music because I am still working on my entry, but I couldent resist. |
![]() | Micheal_Wark said 169 days ago |
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Awwww.... You old romantic you! Very lovely song David. Really nice vocals! Be well! |
![]() | bud said 169 days ago |
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Struck Dumb beautiful. You're both very lucky. |
![]() | screamalexz said 168 days ago |
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... oh i like the higher vocals they add a sense of mood. nice song. nice singing on this track. i like when the second guitar comes in. the opening to the solo with the lower notes really captures the listener. |
![]() | Roxylee said 168 days ago |
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What a lovely song, David thank you for the poetic glimpse into a moment in your life. Your appreciation of the little moments that could easily go unnoticed is touching. Great lyrics and coffeehouse performance! I love the picture, too. :-) |
![]() | Ibstrat said 168 days ago |
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That's a great guitar sound.Playing background guitar that well is a lot harder than it sounds.You have a wonderful expressive voice.Beautiful song! |
![]() | Rebsie said 168 days ago |
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Heartfelt Sweet song, and I like the way you've harmonised it. A lovely tribute. |
![]() | Macaudion said 168 days ago |
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Well... i can hear how easily this could be received as, "a symphony of love" but hey, I'm easy and clearly, I'm not your target... It's pretty big what you've done here and, on many levels. You have a wonderful singing voice. One can hear the gentleness of your love, but especially in these beautiful words that you've "strung" together. A pretty wonderful gesture being hosted by, a pretty wonderful piece of music. Thanks for getting on stage and being willing to share the graciousness of your efforts. Macca |
![]() | richardhowardjones said 167 days ago |
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. A beautiful ode to love. The lyrics are simply spot on. |
![]() | TobinMueller said 167 days ago |
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Clear and clean Very nice nice song. The guitar sound is clean and clear, very light and easy to listen to. In my ears, the guitar solo is meandering and lacks the kind of melodic focus and smooth chromatic sense I like in an acoustic solo. Well mix and a wonderful addition to the Coffee House. thanks. |
![]() | saymme said 167 days ago |
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( : How Happy I am to hear this wow... What a GRAND lovesong Happy for You & Your Wife You must be a beautiful pair : ) You playing so gently & singing the same - so much feeling, the solo is the 'dot over the i' AND where You sing *struck dumb again* I JUST LOVE THAT (=icing on the cake-Drakonis thaught me thats the name in English) Who more sings with You? or is it You singing both? dumb question hehehe ; ) ! LOVE IT WE WANT MORE & MORE GUITARSOLOS ! ThankYou so much & for dl (!)helena |
![]() | VicDiesel said 166 days ago |
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I like this coffee shop stuff... This call for songs is bringing out a lot of good stuff. You've written a sweet and simple song, but still stuck in some subtleties, such as the melody in octaves. That was cool. |
| Dadai said 165 days ago | |
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Gorgeous sound.... David, traveler... I love the vibe here and you really deliver a folk ballad worth hearing. Some great lyrics... and I do dig those vocal harmonies. The guitar is crystal clear... Great tune... dang... really nice. |
![]() | Outtaorbit said 164 days ago |
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well this is nicely f**king done. Outtaorbit. |
![]() | rsorensen said 163 days ago |
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geez those guitars sound just great. great changeup in the chorus. |
![]() | timothy devine said 162 days ago |
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wow 'Heart to heart without a single word' nice love the vocal harmonies/excelent great tune really phenomenal |
![]() | jiguma said 161 days ago |
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Lovely guitar sound David I like everything here - good song, well played/sung and a top production. In the second section (after the first chorus) has a touch of Richard Clapton in the vocals. Richard is a seriously good Australian singer/songwriter - worth looking him up, I think you mightfind some further inspiration there. Lovely post David! Cheers from Oz. Neil |
![]() | SJB said 142 days ago |
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Me again I already commented on this a month ago but I just had to come back for more! It's such a beautiful song. Steve |
![]() | sloparts said 136 days ago |
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David this is such a great song Love the lyrics, some of the best I've heard in a long while. Your vocal is clean and rich and warm. It fits the character of the song oh so well my friend. You also have an excellent harmony singer working with you to help fill up the fulness of the lyrics The simple back track allows the song to shine on the merits of the vocal and lyrics, while adding gently to the feel of the song. This is a great piece of work Dave of which you can be justly proud. Bravo for a job done very well indeed. Ed |
![]() | Alannah said 133 days ago |
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So slow ...... .. to the party am I ..... trying desperately to catch up on my listening and commenting .... this is really NICE ! Having posted my own coffee house submission a week after the closing date ... no wonder I am so LATE in the listens ... sigh ... Life takes over ! Verrrrrrrrrrrry nice on the geeter - great lyrics and vox !!! |






























Worth waiting up for (it's 2am here)! The intro reminded me of early America. Really enjoyed this - downloaded. Production sounds very good- even through the iMac speakers!
Peter