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Can't Be Together
by asconejar

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Submitted on: May 31, 2008 - 11:13:37 AM
Last Updated: Jun 04 2008 - 07:33:27 PM

Keywords together (8), fine (84), nirvana (13), deep purple (1), hear (3), love (1000), wrong (6)

Description Probably my last loudest composition. I intended to make it honestly raw, loud and dirty. I'm having a hard time mixing the drums for I only use free loops. This is actually inspired by deep purple and nirvana. It was composed 15 years ago. Hoping you can share the feelings that this song is trying to convey.

Lyrics Can’t be Together

Verse 1
I, I feel so fine
When you said you don’t love me
The pain subsides

Verse 2
You, you made me mad
When you didn’t tell me
What will be the last

Chorus
Things so clear
You mean what I hear
The two of us
Can’t be together
Love means so different
To one another

Verse 3
Yes, I am weird
Even I know that you’re wrong
I respect your decision

Hardware at2020
firebox
imac 2gz
rbx 170
pacifica 112j

Software: garageband

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dajama said 221 days ago

I like this
It does have a raw, loud feel, which I like. The bass sounds very good, but seems a little buried in the mix to my ears. The drums sound good, but could also be a little louder in sections. I also use drum loops in my songs, and it can be challenge to make them sound natural, but I think it can be done. I definitely think the guitar should be more forward in the mix. Your vocal sounds good, and you put a lot of feeling into the singing. A couple of places where the vocal does get a little loud, but a great performance. Nice track. Very cool. Peace.

	said 220 days ago
	Can't be together. Yeah I can relate to this. The Music is loud but I like it. I will also download it. Thanks. Peace Dee.

	said 220 days ago
	And I voted you all 10z. xx

	mowguy3 said 214 days ago
	Nice Rockin Realy like what you did vocaly. some great guitar chatter as well. Enjoyed it, thanks for sharin. Be well, Russ

	chinaman2 said 174 days ago
	galit na galit great rocking tune. btw, i'm more active in iComp, it's also a site for Mac user musicians.

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