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Whole
by chuck_t

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Submitted on: May 24, 2008 - 06:05:06 PM
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Keywords Whole (3)

Description This is a song that I've had kicking around for ages, I've recorded a few acoustic versions and one with just vocals and piano before getting round to making this full on version. I'll probably upload the other versions one day.

Lyrics Lately Ive been
Trying too hard
Maybe I should
Forget You decide

Do they even care at all
I will let fate be the judge to try you
Find yourself

Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more

Lately you've been
Pushing too far
The boundries to hate me
Are nearing make your choice

They don't even care at all
I wont let fate be the judge no
I'll show everything

Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more

Lose the face
Seemless Grace
We'll lose everything to be
Whole

Hardware Fender HH custom telecaster, Ibanez soundgear bass, Lakewood acoustic guitar, Marshall JCM 2000 DSL 100 with 1936 cab, Line 6 toneport UX 2, Yamaha AW2400, Behringer UMX 61, eMac

Software: Logic Pro 8, Linplug RMIV

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dajama said 182 days ago

Very cool
This has a great sound. Your vocal is terrific, very strong and expressive. I love the guitar sounds throughout the track, especially the acoustic - very nice. Drums sound good, too (although a little low in the mix to my ears) and the bass is very nice, and nicely placed in the mix. Strong song, with a good construction, and nice lyrical touches. If I had a suggestion, it would be perhaps to add a different "color" to the chorus, perhaps a different guitar? Just a thought. Very glad I stopped by and listened to this. Excellent stuff. Nicely done. Peace.

	Vic Holman said 182 days ago
	nice! the tune flows nicely. cool idea of posting a different version. it's always cool to see someone else's process in developing a song

	tokai said 182 days ago
	Very good song well written and sung. You voice sounds great you have put it to the tune with some grace and style. Thanx for your comments

	lavalamp said 181 days ago
	WOW From the intro it's awesome. Your voice fits this perfectly. I'm jealous. That's all I can say. Professional stuff, LL

	Nick_Flash said 180 days ago
	Nice Great voice man! The production is nice and clear on this. Everything flows nicely too. Well done.

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