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 | Diviner said 244 days ago |
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Loved it from the begining with the warped vocals. All the sounds are really powerful and love the melodies/harmonies that you have created here and very atmospheric esp when sirens kick in. A very good first submit. Well done, cracking track. |
 | ic42 said 244 days ago |
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it is a lullaby in terrors it is difficult to relax. it sounds stressful there. a lullaby is needed. this music is bleak. it is sadness in the ears. it is beautiful. it speaks to this bleak heart too. thank you for the lullaby. 0x0 |
 | kassia said 244 days ago |
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Confounded This is a very powerful piece of music. Wow. You took me on quite a journey with this one. The only suggestion I have is to maybe try out a few different sounds for the breathy flute part around 5:00. My ear was wanting it to be something a little harsher, a little bit brighter to go with the feeling of the piece. The flute just seemed a little too subdued - not...angry enough, not dissonant enough. Thank you for sharing this with us - alot of emotional honesty in this piece. I look forward to hearing more from you. |
 | LunaTrick said 244 days ago |
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Fine brooding piece of music Builds nicely to an interesting climax with the drums. It works as an instrumental - but I could imagine a Lisa Gerrard or Azim Ali type of vocal crooning from the middle of your mix. I actually liked the volume and placement of the siren - which brought some positive tension at the right moment. I look forward to more of your work! |
 | davisamerica said 239 days ago |
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right then first.. a very big welcome to macjams ... amazing piece of work .. a true lullaby to the terror of the soul in stress and fear .. powerful work ... i actually have no suggestions to improve this as i found it to be quiet compelling as is ... i suppose it is a tribute about where you are ... amazing! |
 | lengold said 239 days ago |
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I found this to be deeply moving - an extraordinarily beautiful piece of music. I also welcome you to Macjams. Cheers Len |
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Artful probing Confounded: We welcome you to MacJams. Your intro work is fantastic. Music doing the heavy lifting in a sea of emotions. Peace and love. |
 | thetiler said 239 days ago |
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The breathing sweeping synth sure is a great background for this wonderful movie track type instrumental. And in that is chuck full of great sound effects very well placed I think. A wonderful addition to MJ and of course you as well. Thanks for such a great intro to us MJers. |
 | magnatone said 239 days ago |
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Mideastern Lullabye Davisamerica just started a forum thread about this song - I totally trust his taste, so came over to have a listen to this. I'm completely stunned. This is one of the best things I've heard on MJ, period. It's filled with emotion, conflict, grief, hope, HEART. You've put this together so perfectly - even though some of the suggestions I've read below are probably good ones, I can only focus on how amazing this is. I'm excited to have you at MJ and hope to hear much more of your incredible talent transformed into music. If this is an example of what you can do, we're in for an ongoing treat. Welcome to MJ! |
 | ageofthedeathtree said 239 days ago |
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wow a piece that certainly shows a LOT of talent! i absolutely love the mood your music portrays so perfectly...very thought provoking and VERY well done. i'm highly impressed, and i really look forward to more material from you. i can't wait to see what you'll have next! thank you for sharing this piece, it is truly wonderful! sincerely, age isbell -sons of hypnos |
 | iG.STUDiO said 239 days ago |
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Beautiful Loved it. |
 | jiguma said 239 days ago |
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Welcome to MJ! Like looking into a deep well - beautifully sad piece of music - full of longing, and I detect a hint of optimism. Excellent first post Amirreza. Greetings from Australia! Neil |
 | Outtaorbit said 239 days ago |
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It's not all dark there is a feeling of hope ..... untill the sirens.... very beautiful thank you...... please do more. Orbit. |
 | damiengh said 239 days ago |
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Welcome How great it is to have your talent be added to MacJams. Welcome, welcome welcome! |
 | Mystified said 239 days ago |
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an unsettling calm ...that builds to alarm. A composition with much depth and breadth, darkness and light. Beautiful... |
 | craft said 239 days ago |
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how deep This song express emetions and dark feelings.. I simply love it.. |
 | michael2 said 238 days ago |
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very nice really great sounds and love how it progresses. started out a little dark, but there is the sound of hope running through it for me. this would work beautifully as a soundtrack piece. welcome to MJ and I am looking forward to more of your post's. |
 | bud said 238 days ago |
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Welcome to MJ What a fine piece of music - atmospheric and emotional - with a strong development throughout. Really well done. I'll be back for more. |
 | egobandit said 238 days ago |
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heavy with a warm but emotional movement to it. It has a kind of calm after the tradjedy feel. Enjoyed it much and welcome to MJ's |
 | Monkaton said 238 days ago |
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Lullaby I liked the overall feel to this piece and the sythn sounds are appropriate and very nicely done. The recording sounded fine to me over my computer speakers. My only suggestion is to drop the drums at the end for something simpler or tympani rather than a set of drums. Your piece has a classical feel to it and I think the classical drums would emphasis the feel. Overall, very well done and welcome to MacJams. |
 | shavingronaldscar said 238 days ago |
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word! I too caught the forum thread. great work! I'm not sure I agree with the constructive suggestions that have been given below. One thing I would say is that the synths come in too loud and strong when the drum beat kicks in. I think they dominate in a place where so many nice little things could come through strongly instead. But mixing is an art unto itself, (as is illustrated by the presence of disagreement,) and I feel that you have accomplished what you set out to accomplish. beautiful work! |
 | Skean said 237 days ago |
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Nice Very very nice composition all in this fits so well together.. Kudos And welcome to MJ's. |
 | chipan said 236 days ago |
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Persian Lullaby I just wanted to add my welcome to Macjams. This is a wonderful atmospheric piece. Very well done. I look forward to hearing more of your work. chip |
 | screamalexz said 235 days ago |
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... nice build up to start. i like the use of the siren it was unexpected and than it starts sounding like a storm brewing in the background. pretty cool. |
 | VicDiesel said 234 days ago |
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Dark and sweet Interesting track. You move between various modes. The beginning is the most adventurous, with some interesting sound manipulation going on. Then lots of big synths with a couple of subtle filter sweeps. The bass drum every measure sounds strange. As if its character is not constant, and also it sounds a bit off the beat. It's probably on the beat, but shifting it forward might psycho-acoustically help a bit to make it *feel* on the beat. The siren section is pretty cool. That initial drum hit is wonderful, and the low rumblings are pretty gut-rumbling too. The more traditional drums are mixed very well. Nice job. That bass at the end was a surprise, but a good one. In all, an interesting track with lots of cool sounds. Good stuff. |
 | BossHook said 234 days ago |
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Such deep atmosphere - great sound sculpting and welcome here! |
 | davajonah said 234 days ago |
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Great soundscape Very atmospheric. Really nice job on this and one for my ipod. Thanks for sharing! |
 | massa said 234 days ago |
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Great atmosphere! Really liked the atmosphere of this song... got my mind dreaming around... very nice! |
 | lavalamp said 234 days ago |
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I read..... drakonis' comments, and I found the mix to be very nice. We really don't state.of.the.art recording studios, do we? The piece itself, it very haunting and artistic. Some also mentioned soundtrack. I could see that. Outstanding job. And WELCOME. Dave |
 | dajama said 234 days ago |
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Very nice Very effective use of synths, and the sounds you use are terrific. There is a great atmosphere throughout the track, and I like the arrangement. The intro works very well, and the use of rhythm is effective. Very cool. I look forward to hearing more of your music. Welcome to MacJams. Peace. |
 | richardhowardjones said 231 days ago |
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MERCI For this is what God meant when he handed out talent. Salamati! Richard |
 | Alannah said 229 days ago |
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OH Wow .... .. the beginning reminded me of a cross between Tuvan Throat Singing ... and the Bhuddist Men's Choir ..... kewl ..... there sounded to be a few hints of (Drakonis' Ember) there ..... and then WOW there are those creepy WAR sounds which were so MOVING ..... what a great MIX .... full of every emotion ..... |
 | Char said 200 days ago |
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Not really something that lulls you to sleep but rather, it gets your attention. Hope is resilient. You are very talented. Thanks. |
This is gorgeous. Really took my breath, could be a cinematic soundtrack somewhere but really amazing. The guitar sounds so nice and nice beats feelings you captured, impressive choice of sounds. I'll leave the mix and use of effects to Eduard "Drakonis", I agree with him.
I bow deeply for this work man, really out of words!
Big WELCOME to MacJams, hope you'll enjoy your time here
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