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| MoJoMoFo said 195 days ago | |
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Pretty cool groove I think this is just the start of something wonderful maybe add some horn hits and changes could be a great song. Mojo |
![]() | guygrooves said 169 days ago |
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Funky.... I enjoyed my listen. Same issue here as the last though it sounds like the rhythm guitar is to thin or just not up in the mix quite enough. It may be the RP 350 you seem to hate.. ha ha. I am beginning to question whether buying mine was a good idea ;o) Cool bit of funk you have goin here and your chops aren't as poor as you think. I never heard anyone shred in a funk song anyway ha ha. Side note... are you using the RP as your interface into garageband for everything? |


This is a good start. like the sound and the feel.
A few suggestions... try and add a bridge leading to a chorus. (Give us a few more chord progressions.) I haven't heard a Rhodes in a while. Its got a nice sound but you are playing in the same register as the bass. Try playing a little higher and find a way to complement the bass line rather than shadow it.
I think you should leave the guitar leads. I like them and they reflect your personality. Its hard to get a good lead and make it perfect.