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 | lengold said 254 days ago |
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Loved this from the first post and the way you have expanded the idea really does work perfectly. Had to look up Dysphoric. I'd also say that your experiment in mixing was a massive success too. Absolutely love this and downloaded. Thanks. Cheers Len |
 | Pete_NB said 254 days ago |
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Frickin' Creepy And beautiful. Very mysterious and wonderfully constructed. The mix is astonishing. |
 | bud said 254 days ago |
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Strange coincidence - I watched the movie "23" last night and then here come the numbers. I'm really digging this big time - your vocals sound great and the production is perfect. Are you singing the high harmony? Have you ever heard the Conet Project? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Conet_Project Damn this is good - part three manages to bring Nirvana and Radiohead together in your own vision of heaven/hell? I'm blown away - seriously - this is a masterwork. Way to go - you have a right to be proud of this. |
 | tokai said 254 days ago |
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A.1. Top groove i love it, i especially like the way the vox sound over the track. Great use of looped vocals. Nice and dark.... can't believe you made it sound like that on garage band. |
 | magnatone said 254 days ago |
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Chronicles Wow Ridd - this is SO COOL! I completely understand why it's your personal fave. This is so creative, it's dripping with great ideas, fully realized! Thanks |
 | egobandit said 254 days ago |
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masterful what a great mix love the intro then the guitar part I like how you mixed the 2 together Thanks for sharing Into the Ipod I say |
 | dajama said 254 days ago |
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This is great I was hooked by the opening, and the vocal (and the cool bass and drums) just pulled me along. Very intriguing use of sounds, and fascinating lyrics. Excellent production too. Nicely done. Peace. |
 | ageofthedeathtree said 254 days ago |
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alls i can say... is holy frickin crap ridd!!!!!!!! i've loved, and i mean LOVED your other posts....but this is PHENOMENAL! this is AMAZING! this is one of the best pieces of music i have heard for QUITE a while!!! i cannot get over how good this is.......this is perfect man...you just made me feel better after one of the worst weekends of my entire life (everything that could go wrong went wrong). this lil piece of music just made me forget it all and smile.........thank you man! age -sons of hypnos p.s. oh, did i forget to mention THIS FRIGGIN KICKS *SS!!!!!!!!!! |
 | Heightened said 254 days ago |
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There is something oozing from my ears: musical bliss! |
 | Tiny_Man_Inside said 254 days ago |
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cool vibe for some reason I'm thinking about Portishead when I listen. Like with a male vocalist... definitely got some trip-hop feel, but a lot more "presence" and up front if ya know what I mean. just eerie. wonderful experiment. Parts of the song actually reminded me of another MacJammer - gregd. Mason |
 | Vic Holman said 254 days ago |
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it's been a... .... cool ride through the series! now where's that 'option/shift' |
| ageofthedeathtree said 254 days ago |
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ok..... just had to hop back in and say FAILURE!!! all the way! not saying the song is a failure...it's who it reminds me of. it's been driving me NUTS! those guitars and the music box...fantastic planet...definitely. this is way more inventive though ridd, WAY MORE! still listening to it....over....and over....and over...and over.....and loving every spin! age |
 | davisamerica2 said 254 days ago |
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I had to pry my earphones off my head How did you get the Elmer's glue into the wiring? Nice trick. I could never do this, but I wish I could. I have a 7 minute song of my own, but they usually fall to sleep by that time. I stayed awake for this. Very good! Terry |
 | Nick_Flash said 254 days ago |
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PartIII Wow man, Part III is huge! This definitely adds an extra kick. It's been really cool to see how this has progressed from the original sketch. This is a great example of fine songwriting and creativity. Well done. |
 | gail60 said 254 days ago |
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you are so good... I love your music and you have many styles, which is wonderful to me. This is very unique and certainly it keeps me entertained throughout. Mysterious sounds, a great beat to keep me hooked, Rockin' Guitars! What a cool song. Love your voice as always!! Awesome job! |
 | SystematicFailure said 254 days ago |
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oh boy! i'm with ageofdeathtree this is fANTASTIC! my ears are thanking you for gifting them with such stimulation! ok seriously this is great never heard anything like it befor. can wait for more! |
 | lavalamp said 254 days ago |
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Amazing You're a genius brother. You're one of the best around. Inventive, great production, and brilliant idea. LL |
 | Skean said 253 days ago |
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Hove cool is this 4 10s in my book... Super cool track dig it & d-load it. Thanks for this one. Cheers --- Kenta |
 | BossHook said 253 days ago |
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Complete sonic uniqueness Great creative juice here in the writing, performance, mix and production. |
 | michael2 said 253 days ago |
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wow that is intense. i'm liking the development of this a lot. so much cool stuff going on in here. i can hear a little failure in there, but really that's just another way of saying awesome distorted minor chord changes. totally blown away by this, what an achievement. what did you use for the guitar? is that an amp or software? this is making me angry that I have to leave for the airport and have no time to record. really incredible. |
 | DWL said 253 days ago |
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One word Staggering The ending is simply excellent. Radiohead meets Robert Fripp. A slice of true excellence. Cheers Dick |
 | craft said 253 days ago |
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great this soundz so good... well done |
 | floppysurprise said 253 days ago |
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whoa this is more like a short symphony than a song, its pretty genius. and yes you should definitaly add more parts to it, because at i was disapointed when it ended at 8 minutes. with all the different parts in it, if you get some more parts its probably suitable for 15 or more! |
 | caroline said 253 days ago |
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sheesh... if this is an experiment i can hardly wait to hear what you come up with when you know what you're doing!!! that is some very impressive mixing - i am green with jealousy - i listened all the way through and my ears loved it - thank you |
 | composerclark said 252 days ago |
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Fantastic I kept wanting to shout BINGO! during the first part... This is fantastic, and I love the epic scale of this; very ambitious, but you pulled it off beautifully. Very original, and profoundly moving. |
 | kassia said 252 days ago |
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wow This is friggin cool! Your vocals are awesome. And I have to agree with everyone else - you definitely succeeded on creating a great mix. Really cool lyrics...this truly is something to be proud of. Keep 'em coming! |
 | 8piscean8 said 252 days ago |
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Holy Sh!* This is amazing. I have never left any comments that say "amazing" in them until now. This is spectacular. This is the best song I have ever heard on MacJams. Lets just pretend that I was your teacher and you were my student (like in painting or something). This is the part where the teacher knows the student is better than them and puts down their brush and walks away knowing that the student is now the master. Mind blowing! The production is flawless. My only extremely small critique is that I might try and disguise the robot voice (I've heard it elsewhere on this site on other songs), like pitch shift it or distort it slightly or something . Anyway, again, this is an excellent piece of creativity and you should be stoked. I'm done gushing now, I think. You are amazing dude! |
 | Ibstrat said 252 days ago |
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I agree with all the above comments.The transition to acoustic in the middle is killer and an awesome guitar solo.This is some great stuff! |
 | Henke said 251 days ago |
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Pretty cool, man! Thanks for sharing! Fav'd and DL'd of course :-) /Henke |
 | yrp said 251 days ago |
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great just great, man! I dont know if the comparison is valid but it reminds me a lot of OK computer ( the voice that teels the number seem to be the same used on "fitter happier") and of course, the multi-part epic "Paranoid Android". My favorite part is the last one.Very dramatic. Congratulations! |
 | harisahn said 250 days ago |
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Nice man! Excellent mix with all the space. Love it. Sounds very 3D. great conceptual piece. Kudos. I am glad to see you getting at least Macjams recognition. Hard work pays off. Wow. Great Job. |
 | guygrooves said 250 days ago |
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Outstanding piece of Art!!! This was phenomenal, I thoroughly enjoyed every second of it. It has a Pink Floyd flow to it, although it is all you from a musical standpoint. This is something that makes me want to step outside of my safe little bubble and truly try to do something unique, very very inspiring. Thanks for sharing this. Straight into my Itunes, so I can listen to it while wandering around downtown Calgary and have a live video at the same time lol. |
 | Alannah said 250 days ago |
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I started to listen .... .. and thought ... "Hey I know this" .. then I realized it must be the continuation of the saga ... now I DO know how it all turns out ... great stuff! Nice RAWKIN at the end .... |
 | guitapick said 249 days ago |
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"Not for everyone...".... ...but I'm plugged right into this. The machine...so unforgiving...nice step outside... |
 | obbster said 244 days ago |
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Great Great arrangement and production. Love everything thats going on in the background of this - the strange sounds/synths and backing vocals. There's a lot going on even though it sounds fairly simple. Great work. |
| Roca_Atomica said 232 days ago | |
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One of the best ... pieces I've heard here at MJ. Minimalist progressive. Haunting. Intriguing theme. |
 | thehansbarstucksband said 207 days ago |
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:) this is more like it i love the fact that even though its long it keeps you engaged throughout with all the different sounds and things. its getting harder and harder to keep peoples attention these days but this is a job well done. in fact i love it :) cool guitars, lush production, excellent vocals. any plans to put post all the parts together any time soon? |
Great sounds, the intro sounded killer. Nice vocals over this Hip-Hop-Pop soundbed. Enjoyed!
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