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 | egobandit said 264 days ago |
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first let me say great work here this is just right, being an artist it set a great mood for painting. I am sorry to hear about your loss it always a good thing when you can express an event in music. I like the end where the piano comes in but then it cuts out. Anyway I think it is a very soothing piece of music thanks for sharing |
 | magnatone said 264 days ago |
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Meditation 4 Hi Luna: as with others, so sorry to hear of this loss for you - and yes, how wonderful you were able to help her with your lovely music. I think drak's comments are really insightful ( as always) and a cello would be so great. And like he said, you'll start getting interest in collabs, so hang onto your hat! |
 | Heightened said 262 days ago |
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My condolences. Sorry to hear about your loss. I can only say this was a wonderful piece of ambient. |
 | Doug Somers said 262 days ago |
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Beautiful acoustic space I suspect some part of your sister in law survives in this lovely music. I am sorry to hear of your loss and am gladdened by your shining creativity in this work. Keep well, Doug |
 | onesweetworld said 260 days ago |
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lovely very beautiful. Thank you for sharing. |
 | thetiler said 252 days ago |
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A terrific tribute to your departed sister and law. Thanks for sharing. |
 | dirigent said 242 days ago |
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meditation 4 I'm very sorry for your loss. this track is outstandingly beautiful. |
I'm terribly sorry to hear of your loss, but am glad to see you could offer her some comfort with musical gifts, I'm sure she appreciated them greatly. Of course, with such a personal and touching connection, its hard to think of critiques... but I'll offer what I can. Overall, this fits well in the ambient genre, and does create a somewhat contemplative mood. The very light touches of dissonance here and there are just enough to catch a little attention, without heading into anxiety or foreboding. You have a light build-up to the final piano end, which teeters on the brink and really wants to slide back into a part 2, but instead you stop... so like Chance (ScreamAlexz) mentioned, this should be doubled. You could repeat the first part but with slight changes in instrumentation for the second half, for example.
Now that I've gone to read your bio, perhaps some very gentle legato cello bowing floating in and out would really add to this :-) Do you have microphone/recording abilities? As a cellist, you'll soon be having all sorts of people asking to collaborate with you here, I am sure.
ttfn,
Drakonis