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 | biba_nova said 215 days ago |
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I like it very much I would consider emphasising the more electronic aspects... I think the chord sequence is great Areas I think could be improved on include the vocal sound (initially a bit muddy but seems to improve in the latter part of the song - maybe consider using a clearer reverb or eqing some of the bass/mid freqs out of the tonal range?) The drums: again seem to work better in the 2nd half but I am not sure the drum pattern you have chosen in the first part is quite as effective I REALLY enjoyed this - I would love to hear it develop b |
 | lengold said 214 days ago |
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As requested. Some very interesting and unusual stuff going on here. I think your vocals are being swamped by the orchestration and need to be brought out more and lyrics are a must. As Composerclark says people are too lazy to look at another link and may lose interest if they cannot understand the lyrics (mind you, on second listen, they start to become clearer). Your vocal is very good and I understand your shyness but you must overcome it. When you are singing in a deeper tone than usual they need to be even louder and clearer. Strangely the song I am working on at the moment also leans on some middle eastern vocal influences which I notice in this piece. Looking forward to hearing more from you. Cheers Len |
 | Heightened said 204 days ago |
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Again, not my cup of tea. I'm kind of a Electronica freak and now leaning towards Trance. But I love the work you put into it and the lyrics again are super cool! |
 | ic42 said 82 days ago |
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chanting monks it is an interesting feeling of music. the drumming is not fitting well. but the organ and singing is a hypnotic sound. it is almost gregorian chant sound? sugoi... yukionna is ancient japanese story! is the snow goddess. yukionna is terrifying creature. the lyrics create new meaning, new thoughts. it creates new snow. 0x0 |
Your style, I think, has a lot going for it. I genuinely feel that your vocals outclass your instrumentals.
The sounds of the horn and the organ were pretty thread-bare. To achieve an ominous and real atmosphere, I would recommend tinkering with an AU Matrix Reverb effect %u2013maybe a cathedral sound? But it depends on what you're going for.
Later on you really achieved some "crunchy chords," as Clark said. I was surprised that the quality rose so much. Seemed like your simpler sounds weren't as good as your complex sounds.
Thanks for the melody! I'll be checking out the rest.