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Do You (Version 2)
by SinJimMusic

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Submitted on: Apr 10, 2008 - 04:59:54 PM
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Keywords Electropop (33), Do You (2), Dance (502), techno (348), electronic (293), Daft Punk (4)

Description This is version 2 of the song.

Let me know what you think about this one and what direction I should take it. I adjusted the notes on the vocoder here to make it different and finished the song. I added a guitar part to it, but I'm not sure about that one.

Hope you enjoy, thanks in advance for comments!

~SinJim

Lyrics Do You...
Want to...
Do you..?
Want to...?

Do you want make your dream true?
I think I can do this for you.
Let's see where this life will take us.
You're the only one I can trust.

Hardware Macbook, Yamaha DGX-203

Software: Logic Pro 8

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	magnatone said 224 days ago
	Do You wow SJM - what an improvement over your first version! Your vocoder voice has much more variation now, and the whole song is MUCH more interesting. I like how you brought it around to the end, although the end feels a little abrupt to me - that's just a subjective thing though. Congratulations on sticking with this and bringing it to this fine state - great work!

	SinJimMusic said 224 days ago
	Re: Magna Thanks for the wonderful comments here, I really appreciate them. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one, hopefully I can adjust it a bit more and then make it downloadable. Thanks again for commenting!

	MarkHolbrook said 224 days ago
	Nice going! This really has a good feel now!

	Skean said 224 days ago
	Wows I kinda like this sort of stuff... I have check them both and your new one kick ass to H in my opinion simply love it... I wish I could DOWNLOAD it. Cheers --- Kenta

	SinJimMusic said 224 days ago
	Re: Kenta Wow, thanks for the comments here, I'll go and adjust it to downloadable if I can, if not, I'll re-upload it soon, I still have a few nitpickings to do. Thanks for listening, glad you enjoyed!

	Skean said 224 days ago
	Thanks I really love this... The beats the synths are all way too cool iy really kick ass... The guitar at the end are just right... Cheers

	Heightened said 223 days ago
	Turned this one up, put my headphones on and enjoyed thoroughly! Very cool! Loved it when the guitar broke in.

screamalexz said 223 days ago

creative
i like the effects on the vocals. could come up a bit more so you can hear the words a little better perhaps. the effects are cool, but perhaps you can lessen them a tad so the words are understandable or put a second vocal track that's more clean in parts so with out the lyrics it's one understands what the song means. if you perhaps have a semi clean vocal echoing the effects track. the instrumental and song structure sounds good. i like how it builds up at the end.

	SinJimMusic said 223 days ago
	Re: Alex Thanks for the comments here, I do think I can bring the vocal volume level up and maybe reduce the effects. I'd like to do a clean vocal; however, I only have the mic on my mac (which is what I used for the original recording) so the quality would be crap. I appreciate the comments and I'm glad you enjoyed this.

	screamalexz said 223 days ago
	hmm perhaps not entirely clean but if you do it with just a touch of reverb or an effect that leaves it so you can still make out the words perhaps. echo also is great for hiding sketchy vocal recordings as well.

	SinJimMusic said 222 days ago
	Echo hmmm, good suggestion, I'll look into that.

	SinJimMusic said 224 days ago
	Re: Mark Thanks for the comments Mark, glad you enjoyed this one!

	SinJimMusic said 223 days ago
	Re: Heightened Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed this one

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