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 | MarkHolbrook said 243 days ago |
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Genre doesn't matter to me personally! I think it fits AR though! Sweet song! I like it but in my headphones it sounded pretty much mixed to the middle. I think it would sound great if you pushed the guitar left a little and your vocal slightly right. The drums seem spread ok. That is just my opinion! |
 | Godchaser said 243 days ago |
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Smooth tune Can't put my finger on it but reminds me of another tune that used to ride the FM airwaves.That's not a bad thing mind you.Like the vocal work and the mouth organ accents.The only issue I have is the stiff drum feel and the off beat drum hits at the end of the verses,"Even if we had it all".All around a nice easy goin' post.Thanks for sharing. Daniel |
 | Remark80 said 242 days ago |
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Slowhand This reminds me of the songs from Clapton's "Slowhand" album. Your vox and the effect on it sounds very similar to that genre. Very cool. Look forward to listening to your other material. Cheers |
 | gail60 said 241 days ago |
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nice song You have a nice voice. Liked this song alot and you don't have to worry....you actually do have it all here. Great talent and great sound. Thanks for sharing. |
 | dajama said 241 days ago |
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Very nice song I like the lyrics, and i love the vocal on this - a nice, warm sound, filled with expressiveness in a laid-back style. Some nice guitar on there too. I love the sound from the acoustic - very clear and crisp. I second Mark's comment about the panning - a little width in the phones would be nice. I also think the drums are a weak point, a little low in the mix, and there are some discordant snare hits in there to my ears. However, I stress that these are nits I'm picking here. It's a great song and once you have that, you're golden! Glad I stopped by. Nicely done. Peace. |
 | SJB said 216 days ago |
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great Excellent track! Harmonica is such a nice touch. I think your voice has a lot of warmth and if I was forced to nit pick I'd say it had just a bit too much effect applied - it's down to personal taste but a rich voice like yours doesn't need much doing to it. Enjoyed listening to this alot so thanks for posting! Steve |
 | Alannah said 206 days ago |
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Hmmmm .... .. nice tune .. I might have notched the VOL some .... maybe thats my late night listening here .. but I always like the volume LOUD .... vocals could have been clarified slightly (as mentioned earlier) cause (and I have the same problem when mixing) ... without the benefit of printed lyrics .... hard to follow .. and I like to read or hear the lyrics ... there was a slight muffling there ... (who am I to speak to this tho .. cause I am the overuse of reverb Queen on MJs) .... but the tune is good ... solid .. and with a little tweak on the VOX could be gold !!!! we need to hear those words !!!! |
 | jiguma said 195 days ago |
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Good song I really enjoyed your vocal, and the song really worked for me. Now, as you were asking for some helpful advice ..... Some areas already mentioned which I'd agree with are: that you could probably set up the soundstage better with a little imaginative placement of vocals and guitars; the drum track is definitely a weak point, both in volume in the mix and in some pretty dodgy timing in places - some of those crashes are significantly out. I can't hear a bass track for much of the song - maybe something a little stronger in that department would be a good idea. I really do like this, just think it could be much better. Harmonica playing is just perfect. Cheers from Oz, Neil |
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Great! Great song, I have to agree with Jiguma's comment about the advices but otherwise, this is beautiful song and very well done! Take Care - Yeman A. Al-Rawi |
 | woofer3 said 189 days ago |
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Great song really well put together. At the risk of repeating myself I think this also reminds me of Jethro Tull at about the time they did Minstrel in the Gallery, - it's got to be the voice though the song is also typical of what they were doing around that time. Well done Guy, very enjoyable - one suggestion, - I think it might be a good idea to take a little bit of bass off your voice, but only a little or you'll lose the richness. That's just my own opinion though. John. |
 | saymme said 184 days ago |
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( : So Beautiful & such thought in the lyrics You hit the head of the nail !!(or however You say in English) GREAT(!)SONG - love the length too kudos ! high scores in my book , nice with the harmonica ! |
 | richardhowardjones said 178 days ago |
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MmHm Lightfoot meets Clapton. |
 | sloparts said 152 days ago |
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Nice folky song Guy Like what I hear, and you voice is so rich on this. About that, one thing I would do is to use the graphic EQ on the vocal to bring up the 1k and 1.25k frequency maybe 1 or 2db to add a little clarity to the vocal. It's won't affect the richness of you voice but it will make it a little easier to understand the lyrics. Love the harmonic and the rhythm guitar, which are both clean and pristine sounding. Nice song Guy, and again, your vocal is so mellow. Great job Ed |
| desert_54 said 151 days ago | |
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Hey dude Great song I know next to nothing about creating music, but I do know when a song moves my heart....and this one does it in spades. Love it ...love it...love it. Thank you so much for creating this!!! |
You have a really great voice love the music the guitar sounds really good too. You know what ! You certainly got it all in this song,
you made me cry it is so beautiful I love your harp. I don't think you will
stumble and fall with this song. awwe it touched me emotionally.
You sang this song so heart felt the lyrics are brilliant too.
You Rock!!
Peace Dee x