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Battle for Ratings Pick Hill [LIOLI7]
by rabittwhole

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Submitted on: Mar 30, 2008 - 03:15:01 PM
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Keywords loops (147)Loops (147)More loops (2)more loops 2 (1)did we say loops (1)
Description We were a command of young troops sent to defend Ratings Pick Hill from the advancing Elite Loop Blaster Brigade of Dr. Lioli. We held the line for two days until they began to bomb us with 5s and the line was lost. We threw every loop we had at them. We were so young ... so very young. Our last communication was sent as we were over run. We hope we have given you some time Mac Jams City .... remember us.
Lyrics every loop we had we hurled [sic]
and held the line for 48
then they bomb with fives alas
we check our ratings much too late
and thus we sealed our fate
oh great
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MarkHolbrook said 247 days ago
Excellent
Very creative!

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
well thank you mark
much appreciated

said 247 days ago
1.23456789, on a scale
of -9.666 to 1.23456789666 almost got it per fect there, y'all

Better luck on the charts next life.

Right, then - This is cool! What's for lunch on me next time? Bon appetite!

. - Harold

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
the boys
had heard the legend of "grinding rock" ... was an inspiration to the end

davisamerica said 246 days ago
the charts man!!??
they don't need no stinking charts man..
they play to watch their fingers dance!

bud said 247 days ago
Bring on the full metal jackets -
the boys are up against it - and need reinforcement - they've put a mighty hurt on the enemy but so few can only do so much. Excellent post - hang in there.

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
the mighty dog!!
we have tried and failed ... revenge us my brother! and thanks bud ... u r da man!!

said 247 days ago
Go! Go! Go! Go!
Over the ridge and into the fearsome wall of the evil doctor's terrible Loop. Your young troops have become heroes this day, and their brave deed will be spoken of in mess halls for generations to come. MacJams City will never forget...

Excellent entry; love how the grim, determined pulse keeps building, notching up the action and mood as it goes!

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
hello rik
u are too kind and this has been fun ....

said 247 days ago
My God!!!

Absolutely brilliant love it. Great fun tune here you got going on.
Cheers.
'Download ! You bet your bottom doller'

Peace Dee xx




rabittwhole said 247 days ago
the wonderful dee....
many of the boys had your picture inside their ruck sacks for comfort... thank you dee you are the best!

Feter said 247 days ago
Battle for Ratings Pick Hill
You rock ....and who can forget !!

Hats off !!

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
hello feter .....
we all took courage from your example .... thank you feter much appreciated!

gregd said 247 days ago
Love the story.
The intro is great too. Love the electro-industrial drums, but the rock guitar is almost too much only because that loop is now engrained in my DNA. Cool looping you did in here. Everything is stitched together well, and your outro is like the intro, great.
-g

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
loop burn..lol
hi greg .. i do know what you mean ... this loop will not be used for awhile again...lol.. thanks for the kind comments!

sloparts said 247 days ago
A true Warriors lament
the young men of which you speak will forever hold a place of honor in MacJams City's history. We will never forget.

This is like listening to a radio play, something most of you have never done I'd guess. The action, the drama, the glory of a useless fight. Great stuff here Rab. congratulations, you've been awarded the MJC Universal Soldier Award, posthumously of course.

Thanks for doing it and posting it

Ed

rabittwhole said 247 days ago
hello ed
wow that was cool .... fortunately i do know about radio drama and that was a cool comment .... finish the job ed... we are counting on you!

WillyB said 246 days ago
captured the whole thing...
You weaved a pic, a story and a great tune all together here; and gave this whole lioli thing a feeling of playing a shooter vid game. The pic even reminds me of a mission from call of duty/finest hour. Then on top of that, you tease us with some INCREDIBLE guitar licks. A masterpiece production!

rabittwhole said 246 days ago
wow...
thanks WB .... mr. strat ...lol ... but really all of this was just loops ... we threw every loop we had at them ..... thanks man!

Doug Somers said 246 days ago
Just keeps building its relentless beat
Until the big climax - Rock on man! This is great stuff, cleverly put together.

Keep well, and bend a note or two for me....
Doug

davisamerica said 246 days ago
alright!
"mr. Head Banger"!!! well thank you very much doug .... riky r and the rascals were a blast ... note bending us say thanks!

rabittwhole said 246 days ago
hmmmm...
so the cat looks comfy. ..

Diviner said 246 days ago
Cool
Cool description and it really matched the track as I was reading it. Very imaginative. The track is very good and all the sounds really go well together esp the guitars. Well done.

rabittwhole said 246 days ago
hello dave {LL}
is up to you know to knock the doc with your most excellent post! thanks man

rabittwhole said 246 days ago
hey diviner
man u r too cool .... thank you!

stooey said 246 days ago
I would have
helped you fight off the 5s, but you didn't allow any voting!

Very creative, both in the description and in the tune. Rocking hard to Hamburger Hill!

rabittwhole said 246 days ago
hello stu
just checked out your oldfield post .... too cool man! and thanks for the listen!

guygrooves said 143 days ago
This is just...
what the medic ordered, as I found it right after I took a hit and was almost blown off the hill. Alas I doubt I'll regain my position so with that said, I'll take this auditory medicine and try to hold my current position. This is so creative rabbitwhole. Thanks for sharing and making me smile with this cool song.

rabittwhole said 143 days ago
man
x2 thank you

Zee said 142 days ago
Battle
Hey there. Great stuff. I enjoyed it.

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