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Will You Find Me
by daphna

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Submitted on: Oct 01, 2004 - 06:06:46 PM
Last Updated: Sep 30 2004 - 07:03:26 PM

Description This song is basically about personal loss. I originally arranged it as a pop tune, but never liked it. Recently however, I completely redid it in a jazz style, (which was a surprise to me believe it or not) but I think it works miles better. Also, since I refused to sing this one myself, SlimGirlFat very kindly offered to lend her vocal talents to the song. I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is welcome as always.

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	regulus said 1559 days ago
	very very lovely, senitive and thought provoking. I felt the emptyness, the tenderness of you both. very refelective for myself and a multitude of like souls everywhere. no more words from me, just cheers......... cheers

	koolpaw said 1559 days ago
	!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finaly :D

	Mcboy said 1559 days ago
	gorgeous.... sound......great lyrics....i thorougly enjoyed this piece....excellant work u 2!.......

chikoppi said 1558 days ago

Lots to like!
Where to start? The lyric arrangement is very nice, with some interesting phrases and melodies. The piano score is also good, with tasteful progressions and flourishes. In all its terific bit of songwriting.

Slim, this is another excellent vocal performance. This may be the most stripped-down recording I've heard from you in terms of absence of effects/harmonies. Very upfront and "exposed," and very well done.

If I had one suggestion it my be that the song is too consistent. I'd like to hear some more accentuated moments, like when you move into the bridge. That's probably my favorite spot, that transition. It might just be a matter of adding some unexpected chord changes to accentuate the lyrics here and there. Still, great song! (7-8-6-7)

	daphna said 1556 days ago
	Lots to like! thank you for your feedback chlkoppl! I'll look into those chord changes you're talking about. Glad you like it.

	_nderscore said 1558 days ago
	perfect pair great song you two! the arrangement is top-notch, excellent, excellent vocals slimgurl! you have come so very far with your singing, wow. feels like super classy lounge music.. grand piano, formal gowns, big chrome microphone.. & roses thrown by the crowd

	said 1557 days ago
	I echo chikoppi's comments... Just reread what he said. SGF, you should do more vocals in this "almost live" setting. You have a whole other plateau waiting for you. Daphna, well composed song, with such feeling. The simplicity of this piece comes across as just right. Taking chikoppi's comments into account, this can be a great song.

	said 1556 days ago
	Great Union... of MacJammer talent. SGF's voice suits this style so perfectly. Put me smak dab in the middle of that smoky piano lounge. Well Done. 8788

TheWireman said 1556 days ago

Two different songs
They are both great, in their own way.

But the melody is trying to say too much for the tune. It's
beautifully performed - SGF, what can I say - but it's
kinda... too many words, Mozart.

I love the piano part, and when the strings came in I
nearly fainted with pleasure..

But the vocal line is just wrong, I'm afraid. It belongs in a
different song altogether.

Having said that, SGF makes a really good go at it. And I
like her voice without effects. She should do more of it.

	said 1556 days ago
	There and back There's something in your voice that is wistfully reminiscent of Petula Clark's "Downtown" and "Sign of the Times". Those songs, a now this one, make me sigh and think of my earliest unattainable heartthrobs. The sign of a good song -- the evocation of deep feeling.

	Ringo said 1556 days ago
	Dusty Springfield Got a bit of. Can definitely hear the Petula Clark thing too. The strings in the middle are excellent and the piano is just plain cool throughout. Well done you two.

	Cantor said 1518 days ago
	your voice i love the honesty in your voice. totally unadulterated. i'm glad you don't really use effects on it. is the piano live or an apple piano? man, do i have pianist envy. i love when you double your voice. keep 'em coming.

	eleveneyes said 1492 days ago
	glad i found you wonderfully beautiful and expressive. Piano accompanyment was better than perfect. Vocal melodies are right one. Especially the faster wordier sections. They compiment what you're saying and add so much to the jazzy nature of this piece. The simple orchestration really sets a nice mood. oh yeah...and the doubled vox came at the perfect moment. thanks.

	thetiler said 1430 days ago
	This a very nice song Man when ever I see that name "daphna", I always know I'm getting something special. To me there is a lot of quality in what you do. Not just of course on this special tune but all your stuff.

	daphna said 1492 days ago
	your voice thanks for your comments Cantor. I played the piano part, and another macjammer - SlimGirlFat - sang it.

	daphna said 1492 days ago
	glad i found you glad you found ME eleveneyes. I am a HUGE fan of your work - you and I would have so much fun together....

	daphna said 1428 days ago
	This a very nice song thanks thetiler! Glad you are enjoying. I'm also enjoying your wonderful guitar.

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