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 | caroline said 307 days ago |
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i love this pink and fluff - thank so much - it was a perfect start to my day and i suspect i will be singing it late into the evening x |
 | Blondie said 307 days ago |
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My heart.... is all a flutter with your voice, the words are amazing and again you have excelled, well done Craig, you are a star xxx |
 | dirigent said 307 days ago |
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Right on Time wonderful tune, a beautiful melody, heartfelt delivery :-) Thanks for sharing, enjoyed your music a lot :-) |
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classic country with a nice playin'-pickin' guitar and a great vox...i would made the reverb a tad thinner with the vox...you dont need it with such a good voice...Enjoyed it. |
 | aclarke said 307 days ago |
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How could I resist? When I have my own song with the same title (quite different though.). This is a very, very nice song... I like how you kept the guitar nice and simple (very nice tone, too) and how you alternated lines with background vocals. Vocal delivery was perfect for the tone of the song... very sincere. I love the simplicity of this! This would have fit well in the folk section I think. An Excellent love song in any genre however... well done! |
 | sloparts said 307 days ago |
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Excellent Song writing Craig Nice simple guitar accompaniment that works well to show off the song, which is very well written. Thanks for sharing this one Craig. Ed |
 | craighalkett said 306 days ago |
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cheers caroline thank you for the nice comments cheers craig |
 | sngwrtr said 282 days ago |
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Right on time? I agree with one reviewer's observation that this would do well in the folk category. To me, the song feels very dated, both musically and lyrically. '60's folk music, to my ear (not that there is anything wrong with that!). The production is solid, vox are too. Some of the lyrical phrases are perhaps a bit worn ("happy ever after", "set my spirit free", "found the key"). To my way of thinking, the first line of a song needs to compel the listener to continue on ... it should have real impact and be "on point with the title" and I'm not sure we have that here. I personally didn't feel that the first line and/or first verse really stood out and told me something truly interesting. I would strive to find a unique way to say the same things you are saying here. I think the way you are saying it has been done many times before. All that said, it does have a nice, mellow, relaxing quality to it. |
 | Nosdlanod said 2 hours ago |
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Loved it's simplicity, but... ...I wonder about the pace/tone. It's a love song, but doesn't have to be so laid back in its execution. Let the chorus kick you in the teeth sort of like Jerry Reed's "When You're Hot, You're Hot" - it drags some as it is. And in response to Songwriter - open with that rockin' chorus - (sort of like Presley did for example with Return to Sender - comes out swinging.) Then slow it all down a tad for the first verse. Gets you in the mood right quick. Needs a bridge, too. All that said it made me smile, even if I was antsy to hear it sped up some. Keep writin'.... |
What i great melody... You really has a great voice.... Sounds good when you sings.... I like when the chorus plays... Sing a long song... Thanks for sharing...