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 | Roxylee said 318 days ago |
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Timeless song I love the LP sound in this, and the chords. And your vocals. And the lyrics. and the horns, and the strings. OK, I like it all. |
 | Feter said 318 days ago |
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I Thought I Told You Deeo Bow Deep bow .....Maestro Jack ! |
 | drakonis said 318 days ago |
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sweeeeetness not only is the song sweet, the lyrics and singing are great as well, distinctive "fake-lo-fi" production makes this warmer, and it is great to have you throw your hat back in the ring... Hey Look! Men without hats! (Ha! made you smile!) ttfn, Drakonis |
 | Barretok said 318 days ago |
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Great ballad The production effect takes me back to those 70's songs I like so much. Very good one Davis. B |
| said 318 days ago | |
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Great This is a really beautiful song and melody... The vocals sounds great.... And i also like the strings... Great song..... Thanks for sharing... |
 | sschedra said 318 days ago |
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Yes! Jack, just a beautiful song. Nice production too. Short is good on this one. Right to the heart. Very nice, Stephen |
 | magnatone said 318 days ago |
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This is GREAT What a beautiful ballad. That's it. Just a perfectly beautiful ballad - it's probably the right length, but I wanted it to be longer because - you know - it's a beautiful ballad. Thanks for this! |
 | peacepiano said 318 days ago |
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Melody I really like the melody your have going here. Short maybe, but very sweet. Easy to listen to over and over. For such a short piece you have a lot going on, and it all works very well. Thanks Bill |
 | davisamerica said 318 days ago |
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hello bill and thank you sir.... very much appreciated |
 | SmokeyVW said 318 days ago |
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sincere welcome back! this is most excellent whoever it's about, you must care deeply. you get right to the matter of it. wow. nice one, thanks & keep the faith |
| davisamerica said 318 days ago |
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hello vw thanks for the comment.... friends... how lucky am i?...very. |
 | Godchaser said 318 days ago |
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Sweet, sweet song Short does have it's place.Love the string parts and arrangement you've got here along with your solid vocal work and that analog sound is just,so right on.Simple and understated classic piece.Good stuff! Blessings, |
 | stevel said 318 days ago |
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A lovely track Great melody and orchestration....very nice indeed Steve |
 | lengold said 318 days ago |
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This is a very lovely song Jack and performed beautifully. Cheers Len |
 | echoroom said 317 days ago |
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wow Great ballad, beautifully played and sung - really timeless work |
| davisamerica said 317 days ago |
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wow steve very cool and much appreciated! |
| said 315 days ago | |
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I Thought I Told You Beatlesque. Strong melody, and wonderful vocal shaping. I also thought the chord progressions were great. Very enjoyable, and quite masterfully done indeed! |
 | pablatone said 315 days ago |
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nice one davis I'm glad this got pointed out. It's got a really unique sound, good mix of instruments. thanks for the tune. |
 | dajama said 315 days ago |
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This is beautiful Lovely singing, great lyrics, and nice arrangement. I love the guitar and those strings work very well. Sounds heartfelt and filled with love. This is very impressive. Nicely done, my friend. Peace. |
 | kristyjo said 315 days ago |
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Sweet - Sometimes, saying any more is just saying too much. |
 | BridgeCreek said 315 days ago |
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Well done Great songwriting and performance - i thought that you should now... this is very well done! -- Alan |
 | buckhorn said 315 days ago |
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Sweet little number Nice melody and use of strings, megaphone effects on the vox were good and subtle and fit well into the mix......I like this, and I'd also be happy if you reposted "shame town" |
 | thetiler said 315 days ago |
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Very nice love song! Enjoyed! Thanks much for sharing!! |
 | futzpucker said 315 days ago |
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Lovely tune... Very nice job of orchestrating this sweet love song. The chord changes really pull the listener in to the warmth you're trying to get across. I enjoyed this very much. |
 | jiguma said 315 days ago |
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Nice one Jack! Lovely song and really well done. What's the story with the crackling at the start? Was that supposed to be there? Musically excellent, and a top song, but I'd really like to hear it with a "normal" vocal - I think the lo-fi sound of the vocal doesn't quite line up with the clarity of the instrumentation. I'd like to hear a hi-fi version. Bloody good song though, despite my nitpickyness :) Neil |
 | saymme said 315 days ago |
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... 8 ) ...lissening now...LOVELY. . . wow songs like this makes this place such a good one....thankyou very beautifully sung... ( 8 |
 | caroline said 315 days ago |
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mmmmmmmm pretty song - perfect for this sunny morning - thank you x |
| said 315 days ago | |
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Simple Simple can or is the best in my opinion... I wish I could do a song like this... Kudos my friend. Take care -- Kenta |
 | bud said 315 days ago |
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Jack - the comeback king this is amazing - so fresh and original - rom the heart . Simply wonderful. The instrumentation and your voice go so well together putting this message out. Glad you're back in the game buddy. |
 | Moviz said 315 days ago |
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This is such a nice song which sounds like an excerpt from a' musical' I hope we get a longer version at a future date though. Love the slightly removed vocal as if it's being thought rather than singing. |
 | Ejh said 315 days ago |
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It's a very... ...well put together song... Ed |
 | Karmatoburn said 315 days ago |
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thx to smokeyvw for turning me onto this. a wonderful comp with outstanding vocal and orchestration. superb songcraft |
 | Mystified said 315 days ago |
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Aww.... What a lovely song and a sweet sentiment. Thank you for sharing this! :) |
 | Mcboy said 315 days ago |
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what a gem golden nugget of a song.....! |
 | ajnorth said 315 days ago |
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Lovely. Short but sweet song delivered just right, well done. Adam |
 | damiengh said 315 days ago |
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Finesse Great changes, great thoughts, terrific delivery of a truly heartfelt message. Just what all the ladies like to hear. Big score on this one, nicely done. |
 | timothy devine said 315 days ago |
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what a find nice tune short on time bye |
 | apb said 314 days ago |
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Lovely .. .. really fine song, sentiment, delivery... heartfelt. My only crit/suggestion/improvement would be small on the vocal production: really very well sung btw but I wasn't keen on the ELO/Beatle-esque distant reverb (in headphones .. less in monitors I noticed).. was a little harsh in contrast to the smooth strings...could be nice as an intro verse effect .. but I'd like sometime to hear them in my face and 'warm and cosy' for a song like this... perhaps if you extended it and worked in drums .. that might be the transition point?? I get the LP low-fi aspect .. but it would be nice to 'hop' from that .. since it's it's not on the strings .. they sound very polished. Hmm, perhaps a little 'plosive' on "T"s: 1:00-1:04. There .. I told you :o) But as usual, this is just how I hear things ..I'm no expert .. I also hear a really excellent song... and none of these little tweaky things could take that away. Excellent Jack, short and sweet. |
 | guitapick said 314 days ago |
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A very, very... ...sweet song which says it all...beautiful.... |
 | woofer3 said 313 days ago |
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Wonderful and clever song, just has everything. Great production as well. Loved your voice and the string sound. John. |
 | Alannah said 313 days ago |
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ah .... .. this took me back to a time ...... well I was younger for starters .... and likely better looking .... so well .... if a song can take ya back for a moment ... its a good song! Well done Davis! |
| davisamerica said 313 days ago |
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right then alannah i would bet many a moon struck lad composed such songs to you! |
 | The Infinites said 312 days ago |
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Great piece of work I am in the soppy department tho' and would like to hear this re-recorded with a softer vocal treatment/production to match with the overall feeling of the music and the lyrics. That said, this is a great song and if it wasn't for the harshness of the vox I would have this sitting comfortably in my "Songs That Say I Love You" playlist at home... Right now tho' it's a diamond that needs a polish. Great composition. Cheers, Jim |
| davisamerica said 311 days ago |
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right then jim! probably agree on vox and ... fingers crossed ... a MJ er might be working on smoothing a different version .... non the less ... thanks for the listen and thoughtful comments ... keep that space reserved ... maybe it can be filled soon.... cool u r and thanks! |
| davisamerica said 310 days ago |
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hello again jim!!! jiguma [neil], alan [apb] and eduard [drakonis] and you ... are honestly some of the folks i love to see comment just for the constructive comments you folks offer .... seems if you get thinned skinned on this growth and improvement is gonna suffer .... so i feel id anyone takes the time to offer such comments ... must mean they like the basics fairly well and that is way cool. about the female vox .... hmmmm .... any suggestions there on who? |
 | Heightened said 299 days ago |
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Short and sweet. Nothing wrong with that. |
| davisamerica said 292 days ago |
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hello dee well there u are again ..... whot a treat and such nice things to say! too cool u r dee.... too cool u r thanks |
 | Three Cat Clem said 289 days ago |
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Real... Nice sound here. Nice singing... nice atmosphere. Well done. |
 | SJB said 278 days ago |
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Relaxing Very relaxing mood with this production. Just a perfect little love song! Really enjoyed it so thnks for posting. Cheers Steve |
 | Pete_NB said 278 days ago |
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Beautiful little song Short and sweet! Great voice and original melody. I really enjoyed this! |
 | Jarvoid said 254 days ago |
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Short and quirky,sort of thing Harry Nilssonesque..strings over a simple lead, good strong vox well I think so...much enjoyed.....DLed Jarvoid |
 | HenriROGERsoloandbands said 223 days ago |
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water simple and short but very nice . |
 | Cadman said 182 days ago |
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Ok - listened to both versions....... Without question, the version on davisamerica2 is more lush and better produced, etc. But I think I prefer it like this. Nice one. |
 | Char said 127 days ago |
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Goodness, Honesty, Gentility, Compassion, Sweetness, Simplicity,.... you put your heart in. Fortunately, you have a great heart. Just thought I'd see what I previously missed. Thanks for all you do. |
| davisamerica said 126 days ago |
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hello my friend ... thanks for walking back down the lane a bit to hear this ... you make me smile |
 | MarkHolbrook said 58 days ago |
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Ah crud... I missed yet another treasure!!! Jack you are amazing! I'm sorry I've let you down in the listening and commenting department but I'm making up for it! This is priceless! You are truly gifted my friend! |
 | Kev3136 said 8 days ago |
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=D Davis Awesome, much enjoyed this song, haven't had time to get around to listen to much that you have made, but im going to look more, loved the song =] |
to spot songs from the heart. This is a great little song davis!