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Mi Ricordo Le Tue Parole
by lupiroz

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Submitted on: Feb 09, 2008 - 09:15:21 AM
Last Updated: Feb 09 2008 - 10:28:42 AM

Description I remember your words

What seemed a neverending and “definitive” love unexpectedly finishes; it was, mainly a “one way” love from him to her so, after a while, he meets her to express all his disappointement and to.......wanting all the feeling/emotions he gave her back......everything....sex included (in an ideal sense!).

Lyrics MI RICORDO LE TUE PAROLE
(I can remember your words)
PURE QUELLE CHE RIPETER NON SI PUO’
(even the more intimate ones)
MI DICEVI: “TU SEI IL VERO AMORE,
(you said me: “you are the true love)
QUELLO GIUSTO CHE ALLA FINE MI TERRO’’”
(the right one that I want to stay forever)
E NON VOGLIO AGGIUNGERE ANCHE IL RESTO, PER FAVORE!
(and don’t make me adding all the rest, PLEASE!!!!)

COSA FAI CHIEDI SCUSA ADESSO?
(Are you going to ask forgive now?)
STAI COMINCIANDO A RICORDARE UN PO’
(Can you remember too?)
POI DICI CHE ERO TRA I MIGLIORI A LETTO
(then you say I was between the best ones in your bed)
MA TUTTO QUESTO NON MI PLACA, NO
(but this can’t quiet me at all)
E NON VOGLIO AGGIUNGERE ANCHE IL RESTO, PER FAVORE
(and don’t make me adding all the rest, PLEASE!!!!)

NON E’ GIUSTO TU MI HAI FATTO MALE
(This isn’t a fair destiny, you hurted me)
QUASI NULLA QUELLO CHE RIMANE
(and I’m lost in the empy space now)
LO RIVOGLIO INDIETRO, LO RIVOGLIO TUTTO ADESSO
(I wanna it all back, I wanna it all back now)
TUTTO CIO’ CHE HAI PRESO, SI ,VOGLIO DIETRO PURE
IL SESSO!
(All that you took from me, sex included!)

TI RICORDI LE TUE PAROLE? GIA’
(Can you remember your words? Yeah!)
NON LE HAI USATE SOLAMENTE CON ME
(You didn’t use them with me only)
ORA SUONANO UN PO’ SCONTATE MA
(now they sound just obvious but)
CREDEVO FOSSI IL TIPO GIUSTO PER TE
(I believed to be the right one to you)
NON PUOI DIMENTICARE TUTTO QUESTO, PER FAVORE!
(you can’t forget all that, PLEASE!!!)

NON E’ GIUSTO TU MI HAI FATTO MALE
(This isn’t a fair destiny, you hurted me)
QUASI NULLA QUELLO CHE RIMANE
(and I’m lost in the empy space now)
LO RIVOGLIO INDIETRO, LO RIVOGLIO TUTTO ADESSO
(I wanna it all back, I wanna it all back now)
TUTTO CIO’ CHE HAI PRESO, SI ,VOGLIO DIETRO PURE
IL SESSO!
(All that you took from me, sex included!)

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	MIRx said 334 days ago
	eppure questa l'ho gia' sentita mi assomiglia un po' a qualcosa di noto... forse mi verra' in mente prima o poi! ciao gigi

drakonis said 334 days ago

Cool piece of music
I think the guitar playing stands out here... the melody/chorus/harmonies are very enjoyable to listen to, and I like your singing voice.

I believe a couple of the synthesizers are a little bit "harsh" and "persistent" through the song... maybe they should come and go a little more (swap them with a softer instrument sometimes?) The lyrics are good (strong story idea)... but sometimes there are many words in one line, and you sound "rushed" to say them all, and out of breath. Perhaps a few less words can let you get more emotion and anger behind those words... make us feel it :-)

Good music here! Welcome to Macjams... and I hope my ideas are helpful. Of course, they are just my opinions, so maybe not worth much :-)

ttfn,
Drakonis

lupiroz said 334 days ago

opinions
are always essential and welcomed in the improvement process, imo; in your comment I was surprised how you get such a specific point regarding the fastspeaking words of some parts of the text, considering that they are in a different language than your own one (I presume this, maybe you know italian better than me, :D); you surely listened to the song very carefully and I thank you for that: yes, I agree on your point, maybe I should try to reduce the words or, also, to get more than one recording take on the vocals; as it usual happens to me this vocals part was the first and only take I did, not very professional, lol!!

lou

	said 334 days ago
	Very cool great song Lup, jumps right up and grabs you...Bravo.. Shadow

	Barretok said 333 days ago
	Italiano!!!! You sound really good in Italian (of course)!! Bella pezza!!! B

	thetiler said 331 days ago
	When I see a pic like that It really seems someone got a bad broken heart ! Cool soft rock sounds here. Like how the tune rolls along! Thanks for sharing and taking the time to post this tune! Nice delivery of the vocal, love the synth as it continues along and gathers steam.

	lengold said 334 days ago
	What a great professional sounding track. Lovely song and expertly played and produced. Welcome to Macjams. Cheers Len

	lupiroz said 334 days ago
	Thanx a lot for your warm welcoming Len and kind comment! :D

	lupiroz said 334 days ago
	anche tu mi sembri conosciuto, anche se c'e' una x di troppo...... :D

	MIRx said 332 days ago
	M'hanno fregato! Quello senza la x era stato gia' preso!!!!

	lupiroz said 334 days ago
	glad to "grab" you here Shadow, I'm going to be grabbed by you too!!!!

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