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HOTEL ROOM #13
by Barretok

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Submitted on: Feb 04, 2008 - 10:13:20 AM
Last Updated: Feb 04 2008 - 10:13:20 AM
Keywords Hotel (2)relationship (23)love (1000)infatuation (2)secrets (3)blues (398)rock (1184)poetry (114)Barretok (2)
Description This is really a combination of blues and rock. A laid back rock ballad with blues touches. One more song based on a real story turned into a poem and then into lyrics.
I hope you like it.
Lyrics HOTEL ROOM #13
By©Bernardo Barreto

Your body
As pale as the ocean
Brings back memories
of golden times.
Soft and tender in my hands
Against that mirror on the wall.

Hotel room number thirteen
Just one bathroom and your skin.
Hotel room number thirteen
Just one bathroom and your skin.

(solo)

Your body
As pale as the ocean
Brings back memories
of golden times.
Soft and tender in my hands
Against that mirror on the wall.

Hotel room number thirteen
Just one bathroom and your skin.
Hotel room number thirteen
Just one bathroom and your skin
Hardware PowerMac G5
Software: Garage Band
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apb

Feter

Vic Holman

falzaabi

lengold

bonnieprincejohnny

Bob Rodgers
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DWL said 339 days ago
edgy and a little unsettling
I really like the vocal delivery and the groove

Cheers

Dick

apb said 339 days ago
..quite ..
.. an interesting sound you got there.

I get that slightly unsettling thing too .. it's perhaps the gritty, seedyness .. mixed with the occassionally
more romantic reminiscent lyric... gives a certain creepy quality.

I like dialects in songs sung in English, it adds spice .. and this is no exception .. for a poor comparison I envisage Antonio Banderas after joining Dire Strait's band in a song, the Sultans of Swing... in some bizarre way... so pay no heed.

Mix is very good. Is this all loops?

Feter said 339 days ago
HOTEL ROOM #13
great rockin blue song ...hte slide sound is a killer
he vocal impressive as always !! ..thnx for sharin !

Vic Holman said 339 days ago
13 the hard way
blusey edgy and a bit haunting. the slide has a great slinky edge to it. cool.

lengold said 338 days ago
After such a
short time here, your songs are really starting to get under my skin. Lovely musicianship and beautiful vocals. Downloaded.
Thanks.
Cheers
Len



Barretok said 338 days ago
Thanks
Thanks for your feedback. It helps me a lot to hear what you guys think.
B

davisamerica said 335 days ago
wow
kinda a tom waits feel ... which is cool...do indeed like the lyrics... nice production and the sound of your vox still is captivating. very nice indeed

said 335 days ago
Yep
What they all said.

This really does work its way right into my brain. Looking forward to more.

bonnieprincejohnny said 335 days ago
Superb.
Thank you Barretok - very edifying - I like it.

Barretok said 334 days ago
Thank you
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
B

Heightened said 333 days ago
Another
awesome blues number backed with original vocals and imaginative lyrics. B, you never disappoint!

Bob Rodgers said 328 days ago
Great!
Love this blues and a great vocal from you! Wonderful slide guitar sounds and a great vibe!

Artist Profile
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Barretok

Artist Bio I was born in Lima Peru but I have been living in New York since 1984, It's my second home. I am a visual artist. Painting, Illustration, Photography and Underground Comix. But music is my passion. Ever since I remember, songs have had a profound effect ...[more]
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Desire II (woodstock)
A Man We All Know
A Lady With Class
Elusive II
Blood Of Bloods
MONDAY BLUES (with Lupiroz)
SUMMER NIGHT SMILES
JAMIE WAS A GOOD GIRL
YOUR TENDER SOUL
A PROPHET IN DISGRACE
THE PAINTING
SLEEPING LIGHTLY
THE OUTSIDER(purgatory blues) With Ziti
SKETCHES (with Bass2x)
YESTERDAY'S DICE
I'VE BEEN DOWN (w.Bluepiano)
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GHOST