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![]() | bud said 317 days ago |
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Smokey - you've really made something special here. Your voice sounds great and the arrangement is wonderful ( dig the key modulation). The message is all too true I'm afraid. Excellent track. |
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Nice! Well done Bill. I agree with Feter re the Western and Asian fusion. Beautiful! Oh, and I love the pic of Fred and Ethel Mertz! Ha ha... Be well friend! |
![]() | DWL said 317 days ago |
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Poignant Bill lovely sound, soft and round, longing and slightly sad. Nice change half way through. Thanks Dick |
![]() | Dj French Toast said 316 days ago |
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Indeed Manities RULE ! This is awesome man . I really dig it alot . |
![]() | Vic Holman said 316 days ago |
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I've listened to this a few times now i have to say this has to be my personal favorite of yours. very deep and complete. |
![]() | announcer said 316 days ago |
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Here is what I especially like about this the vocal treatment that gives it a surreal feel, the bass line and its bit of a growl, the key change, the melody in the first bridge, the lyrics, the whole mix. this is the best song posted so far this year on MacJams. |
![]() | dajama said 316 days ago |
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This is great A really different, unique sound. The sounds are perfect for the melancholy, thoughtful sentiment of the song, and the production is great - reminds me in a way of Peter Gabriel. Your vocal is excellent - you express the sentiment beautifully. I love the touches of guitar. Very nicely done. Wow, this is impressive! Kudos. Peace. |
![]() | michael2 said 316 days ago |
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great song you are so full of gems, and you have the technical skills to give them all the treatment they deserve. this is a really strange song, I can't compare it to anything. take that as the huge compliment i meant it to be. great job Smokey. |
![]() | lengold said 315 days ago |
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Just superb. Cheers Len |
![]() | lavalamp said 315 days ago |
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Original Kind of an Asian feel. This is super because it's so original. And that's what this is about. The right to experiment and have fun. Bravo! LL |
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I dont know why This has the quality of a prayer. almost religouse, Bravo excellently executed. |
![]() | droop said 315 days ago |
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Well I see you got off that smiley face, cold medicine, crackhead kick and back to more serious matters. Strong message here stated simply and wrapped in a captivating musical blanket. Excellent |
![]() | guitapick said 314 days ago |
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Needs to be heard... ...straight 10s... ...not "uplifting"...but needs to be heard...high art, Bill... |
![]() | sammy said 313 days ago |
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This is so religious. I agree with ego bandit. It is like a desperate prayer. |
![]() | thetiler said 313 days ago |
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Enjoy this kinda oriental feel here Like the choir effect, and that mixed with the oriental, makes for a nice listen. Like the modulation ! Interesting, great to hear words about losing touch, kinda puts the importants of not shutting out reality that is important to us. This tunes seems to really gather steam and to quite an emotional listen. With a nice pop flavor! Almost like. Now towards the end I am hearing an indian feeling in the music. WAy to go! |
![]() | jiguma said 313 days ago |
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One of ... ... the more original pieces I've seen here Bill. Lyrics are powerful, thought-provoking, real. And there's even a keychange ;) Congratulations, Neil |
![]() | The Fritters said 313 days ago |
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Nice! Nice! |
![]() | pengui said 312 days ago |
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nice and dreamy I like dreamy stuff like this. Give us more! |
![]() | echoroom said 312 days ago |
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Little prayer This is wonderful Bill, like a little prayer from a race thats lost their way. Your voice, and the treatments on it, are great - the end section is particularly strong. i love manatees, so the picture really gets me... another species we're casually wiping off the planet. s |
![]() | gail60 said 311 days ago |
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awesome Great job here. You sang and delivered it well! Liked this alot and agree with the message. We have lost touch we so many mportant things. Really enjoyed, thanks for sharing. |
![]() | Char said 78 days ago |
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Thank you, Bill, I agree with your sentiments here. I enjoyed the Indian sound, the kind of music that I imagine harem dancers would dance to and the vocals were sweet and tremulous even though there were a lot of you. Unique and fascinating piece. Thanks. |




















now this is totaly impressive ..its mix between
couple asian and ol western fusion ..merge with
ambient and world music ..now this is cool my
friend ..great lyrics !!