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| egobandit2 said 456 days ago | |
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shop da do do YEah !!! |
 | estellie said 455 days ago |
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this is sweet hee hee. with all the la la las, the one sentence you have: "It's OK." has so much depth and meaning, ha ha! Same with "everyday." Anyway, I love the back up singing - I'm sure the new harmonies you added are great. I also like when you just hold that one high note in the change. It all sounds like a very sweet song. I agree with whoever said it's fine like this - no need to add more words. It could be a sort of interlude in your album. |
 | apb said 453 days ago |
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Definitely .. .. showing promise .. love the bass playing - keeps everything "up" and trundling onwards .. at spots on the guitar I could hear a bit of Who "substitute"-esque sound and chords .. but here they are used for that little dreamy bit, very nicely done all round here. Will be nice to hear the album version. Kudos. |
| ZOI said 452 days ago | |
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Thanx for this :) LalallalLlallal ENJOYED IT VERY NICE WITH HARMONY !!! |
| Birdman Wayne said 452 days ago | |
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Nice ! Very Nice song, wish to hear it with the lyrics too ! Very nice music, and the drums is great ! enjoyed ! Take Care ============== Yeman Auf Al-Rawi |
 | peacepiano said 450 days ago |
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Good Sound I like the interplay of the vocal and guitars. An almost psychedelic sound. I'll be listening for more :) Thanks Bill |
| Calchas said 448 days ago | |
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You old tease! Nice concept Steve. I really want to hear the final product. Give me a heads-up when you post OK? Be well! |
 | biba_nova said 445 days ago |
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Nice tune Reminds me of Jonathan Richman or early Talking Heads with that brittle tele sound Fab |
 | Rebsie said 445 days ago |
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Nice groove Very promising demo ... nice rich mixture of guitar and bass and plenty of scope to develop it further. All the ingredients are there! |
 | Dj French Toast said 438 days ago |
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Nice raw Sound ! I love the sorta old school indi sound to it I think itll be awesome piece when your done with it . Nice musical bed for the vocals ! |
| Justbase said 436 days ago | |
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little happy song I like the positive vibe of it. And I think that when you work on it some more, the lyrics (;-)), it is gonna be an even better one. Enjoyed for its vibe, thx mh! |
| Faelin said 407 days ago | |
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i actually like... the rough quality. i think it adds to the whole vibe of the tune. a fun tune it is at that! |
 | Char said 90 days ago |
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It's about the sweet young thing who walks through town everyday and every man has to turn his head and sigh. At some point, she knows they are all looking at her, so she smiles at all of them. Nice and lighthearted. :) |
i like it this way. i'm kind of a freak, but I don't like the lyrics exactly the way they are. it's inspiring me to write a pop song with la la la as the lyrics. good song.