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 | Heightened said 342 days ago |
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This Course of Treatment Might Be Expensive This belongs on a CD heard by millions! |
 | rover101 said 307 days ago |
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Rather fine Really liked the approach; just not enough of this stuff around. That said, I'm a picky sod (someone has to be now Ik's gone) First, you should be aware that this is playing back at a very low volume. I kept on wanting it to burst into song; I think you might have a hit on your hands if you found a silly, simple chorus. The vocal should be mixed higher. The lady telling the story does not yet have a full grasp of the dramatic gesture in the English language (I suspect she's got it in Russian just fine), and as a result, I found myself going 'Huh?' a couple of times If you're going to insist on such a long intro, then it needs (way) more melodic interest - somethiing you don't break out 'til the very end A very good basis for developing something that could be quite wonderful. Cheers, Shaky |
You need some more exposure here at MJ's,or maybe you don't.More people need to hear your fine song crafting and in my humble opinion excellent tracks.This is awesome stuff.Another instant fav!
Blessings,