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![]() | Rolo said 1040 days ago |
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I'll do it Great mood. I'll mix it if i could put my personal mark in it (synths and vocals) |
![]() | aclarke said 1040 days ago |
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Needs more reverb! Heheh- just kidding! I give you a ton of credit for giving the mix a fair shot. Let's face it, we'll never improve on anything if we don't try. This still needs some work but you are definitely on the right track. Plus I know it was made more difficult given the software issues you were having. As always, your tremendous voice and distinct style really make the best out of JMogielnicki's wonderful instrumental piece. Thanks for thinking of me for the backing vocals! |
![]() | kevmikwa said 1040 days ago |
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Excellent tune! Alannah, your vocals are very well suited for this one, this range seems very comfortable for you. There's a very mystical feel here (from the guitar line with the high bend to the vocal flutters). In your next go- round, you should consider trimming that initial 2 seconds of silence at the very beginning where you can hear the guitar/microphone hum (IMHO). Great use of what I presume are looped drums, they really fit the jam. Guitars are a touch hot in the mix for my tastes, but then again I'm pretty deaf from my drumming career, so what do I know. Thanks for posting this one! |
![]() | screamalexz said 1040 days ago |
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midevil folk i get a bit of a midevil feel that fits with the prince concept. has a bit of an enchanting feel, but something else to it i can't place, with a bit of a folky sound. the lyrics are pretty good. the vocals have a rather unique sound to them. as for what could be changed i'm not entirely sure. |
![]() | caroline said 1040 days ago |
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oooh alannah.... that distinctive voice of yours.. haunting and so distinctive. thank you for sharing.... got any big show tunes planned???? har de har har!!! catch you next friday!!! xoxox from me and the bear! |
![]() | stevel said 1039 days ago |
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This is great! I loved the instrumental anyway...the vocals really add a whole lot more feel. Fab!!! Steve |
![]() | jgurner said 1039 days ago |
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As the founding member of Reverb Anonymous... ...I'll say you showed remarkable restraint. :) You've added some really great vocals. And the lyrics are great. The production even sounds fine to me. It's got a pretty good balance and features your vocals prominantly. |
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Nice tune..:) Love your voice it's fabulous, you are a good singer and the acustic sound is great realy like'it. *Skean* |
![]() | alanfraser said 1039 days ago |
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I love your voice! It has a full and rich depth to it that is highly captivating. Love it! |
![]() | Joshosh said 1039 days ago |
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so good allanah your voice is always such a nice addition to my day. Always beautiful, and intersting, with a touch of jazzy and a dash of throwback. Really cool. |
![]() | neckbones said 1038 days ago |
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rip me apart it starts great, then the vocals kick in. not very unique in my opinion. needs something, but still a good tune !! |
![]() | Peter Greenstone said 1038 days ago |
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gorgeous song buried This is a gorgeaous song. I love that guitar riff and the melodies. Excellent performances from all of you involved. It has a lot of emotional power. I'm taken by it. The builds and breakdowns work very well. The lyrics are poetic and flow well with the music. That said, I think all the heavy reverb and echo is burying it. Alannah, I know you likes the reverb abd echo, and oftentimes I think you use it well, but in this case I think you are washing out the whole thing with the amount you are using. It all becomes acoustically chaotic to a degree. Not terrible at all; but diminished from what I think it should be otherwise. You have a great voice and should have confidence in it. Effects aside, I think this is a damn good song, performed beautifully. |
![]() | dreadmon said 1035 days ago |
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Very delish As always, a very sweet voice, Alannah - you've got so much emotion dripping out of those pipes, girl! I love the music in this - the guitars play off of each other with tasty colors and the insistent rhythm is a delight to behold. I have no comments on the mix, because I've no time for mixing. Hahahh! I'm still trying to get you our collab! I will say this - simply put half as much reverb on when you mix - your voice in the ear is really something to behold (I speak from experience....) |
![]() | Macaudion said 1034 days ago |
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I would LOVE to see you in concert And chills... - They're rolling off of my shoulder and down my spine to feel me up w/ your sweet goodness. I REALLY liked this one! And,,, - I don't know what's taken me so long... Thanks Alannh! Dion |
![]() | jie said 984 days ago |
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fantasy island Beautiful song, beautifuly sung, great structure to song, a winner. keep up good work, Cheery |
![]() | alanfraser said 943 days ago |
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Hooked on your voice You've already talked about your production problems so my only purpose in writing is to say again how much I love the quality of your voice and the range in which you sing. |
![]() | ocean said 658 days ago |
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wonderful song... I found the original song (Procrastination's Consequence) via an old thread in the colaboration forum and really liked it - was anxious to hear the re-vamped version. Your vocals are terrific, it sounds wonderul. |
![]() | davisamerica said 95 days ago |
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wow lady toes just wow .... |

















Nice melody. It has a definite suspended feel about it.
Dreams are perfect.
I enjoy the guitar accents as well.