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 | dreadmon said 1060 days ago |
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This is beautifully done I really enjoyed this - it has a great big outdoory feel, and I got the limited scale structure, images of several different primal tribes - which lends itself well across the board to interpretation. I love the canon flow, and the delicate flute interjections - I'm looking forward to the rest of this, very serene and exciting at the same time! Awesome crafting! |
 | drakonis said 1060 days ago |
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Great melody Nice orchestration, good build. Love the simple flute countermelody at the end, wish that were a little longer, and the saxes, sigh... I think they're OK here, but maybe balance them with more clarinets to take the sawtooth buzzy edge off them a bit. The ending was fine I think, normal way to end a movement that expects a second movement following it. The melody and harmonies are very primal and feel powerful to me. I'd add a little more rolling dynamics in the measures to get a swell going. ttfn, Drakonis |
 | Scared sacred said 1059 days ago |
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A Comment What they, everyone else, said. It's pretty and bombastic; music to be set to the climax of a film about lions, or something.. My only gripe is that the instruments sound like crap, being synthesized. But that doesn't detract much from the piece. I think it's just the right length. My attention span is somewhat short, and I don't have the patience for classical pieces of the traditional length (anywhere from 6 to thirteen minutes). This is compact and satisfying. |
 | RickW said 1058 days ago |
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Fits nicely with the other two movements. Very beautifully done! I'm looking forward to the suite being completed so I can listen to it in its entirety. God bless, Rick |
 | Cori Ander said 1058 days ago |
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Mmmm Mmmm ... A soothing piece. A very nice compisition! I think that with a real orchestra this piece would grow to something really beutiful! Hope you will be able sooner or later to set the suit up for real instruments, (and please dont forget to record in that case)! |
I only say that, because it haunts me in that it reminds me of a lot of
other songs. Mostly church style songs. I kept trying to come up with
the lines to sing along. And obviously not finding them.
My only minor criticism is that it seems to have all the instruments
along the same track and timing. I like the energy of the song, just
think it could be more of an inter-weaving, rather than a perfect
harmony of instruments.
But take than from someone that has never figured out one instrument.
I assume since it's JP4 it's loops, so that may be why the da da DA DA
gets to me a bit. But I am biased.
christopher....