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![]() | rik said 1063 days ago |
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Beautiful I cannot say by words what I feel for '900 music. It is our world, dead and alive. I cannot tell my appreciation for this piece of yours. It is as I already were acquainted to it, with all the pleasure of finding its warm passages, as well its bitter ones. You don't need any of my silly commentaries. I need this music, I need to be moved by it when "My heart is cold / I cannot weep", and I am grateful to you for sharing. |
![]() | Mystified said 1063 days ago |
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beautiful ....but not the kind of thing you want to listen to when you are feeling sad! Really...I'm at a loss of what to say other than this is tremendous. (now, off to find something 'happy' to listen to...!) |
![]() | notsosweet said 1063 days ago |
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Gorgeous This is truly stunningly beautiful. You have a great talent not only for scoring, but for composing with such emotion. Thank you for sharing it with us! |
![]() | J.A.Stewart said 1063 days ago |
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How Lovely... that you can express these emotions about your Mom in such a magnificent way. Dark and lovely, this piece is both interesting and inventive. Kudos also to your student orchestra, who performed so well. |
![]() | Tadashi Togawa said 1063 days ago |
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Emotion and feelings The composition of the sound is what. It is indescribable. Expression of complex mental situation. A deep spirit is a deep intellect. Music is an intellect. This harmony. This discord. My brain is developed by this sound. It is taught that the person is a living thing where it lives with the brain. |
![]() | Denny Borsboom said 1063 days ago |
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There is beauty in sadness Beautiful composition, very well played, and brilliantly recorded. |
![]() | Emily Rohm said 1063 days ago |
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A real string section!! Real strings! And live ones for that matter! It's so wonderful to hear real strings on this site. This piece is suspensful, haunting, heartbreaking, but with much beauty. I love your Lorca inspiration along with the tribute to your mother. It is very moving and certainly well-performed. Thanks for posting this. |
![]() | ziti said 1063 days ago |
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holy camoley this is truly a remarkable heart-grabbing inspiration! BRAVO!!!!!! A fantastic composition, pristene recording, and inspired peformance. The orchestra wailed for you!!! Just FANTASTIC!!! Thank you so much for joining us here at MJs...and I can't wait to hear what's next!!!! in the iPod, thanks....right before Spike Jones! deepest bows!!!! z |
![]() | ziti said 1063 days ago |
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after my third listen....damn this is some GREAT music!!!!!!!! |
![]() | ziti said 1063 days ago |
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.... ....whew!!!!!!!! |
![]() | Cameron said 1062 days ago |
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'pretty heavy stuff', indeed You definitely achieved your goal of expressing your sad feelings about your mother, as well as portraying the hopelessness of the protagonist in Garcia Lorca's poem "Cordoba" in this piece. This work, extremely well-conceived, performed and recorded, is reminiscent of Barber's "Adagio for Strings". It also echoes the melancholic atmosphere of Mahler's "Adagietto" movement from his Fifth Symphony. The sustained layers of the strings set a contemplative, grieving mood, and the dissonance tears at the soul. The pizzicati in the middle of this piece pluck at the strings of the heart. The trills and descending slides add a great deal of color to the more sustained textures throughout this composition. The last slide is very effective. You should be very proud of this piece, as well as the wonderful performance and good recording quality. How fortunate for you (and all of us) that you have a live symphony orchestra at your disposal! |
![]() | jhenny said 1062 days ago |
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I Don't Like My Sampler Any More You have proven that no matter how good the samples or the programming...you can't touch the real thing. The performance is beautiful and passionate. Bravo!!! |
![]() | Scorpjammer said 1062 days ago |
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Beautiful, Indeed And sublime. As still as the ocean in your picture and so emotionally moving. Thanks so much for sharing. |
![]() | futzpucker said 1062 days ago |
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Transforming Skilled, profound, moving, excruciatingly beautiful... What is significant here is the combination of the studying that you've done and the heart you brought to this piece. The result is undeniably magnificent. Congratulations on this triumph. Thank you for the gift. |
![]() | Cori Ander said 1062 days ago |
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So much love and beauty So much love and beauty! Thanks a lot for posting! This is one of the most attractive pieces I will have in my large iTunes collection of music from now on. This will be a worthy piece to start the day with. And to end the day with. If I wanted to play something for a new born baby this would qualify, or for a very old person, or someone in grief, or someone in doubt, or someone overloaded by stress. Or for myself. Anytime. Thanks a lot! |
![]() | Einarus said 1062 days ago |
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Gorgeous... For as long as I can remember I've been hearing modern classic music like this, as my dad is a composer himself, so this piece is really right up my alley. And what a great piece it is. You really manage to express your feelings in your music, not something everybody can do. But frankly, I'm lost for words. The mood, the performance, the composing, the quality of the recording - it's amazing, all of it. A standing ovation from me! Gorgeous. |
![]() | kristyjo said 1061 days ago |
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Wonderful! It's really great to hear live strings. This piece had its 'modern' moments, but in other ways it was wonderfully 'romantic', too. I don't think I can add much to the other comments made here, other than to say I've downloaded it and faved it. |
![]() | The Composer said 1061 days ago |
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title This piece reminds me very much of some of Nigel Westlakes (Aus) and Vasks' (Latvian, can't remember the first name) string pieces. There's that fantastic blend of contempoary harmonies that isn't tied to being strictly tonal but also doesn't feel the need to do everything in a 12 tone row... making this piece very accessible while not being old fashioned. The piece drifts along in a melancolic, almost lethargic way which is fantastic and I really enjoy the variations in timbre along the way too. I appreciate the score writting too, particulary since writing for strings is not something I've done much (yet) or have had much success with... rhythm and computer music being more of my forte. |
![]() | dreadmon said 1061 days ago |
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This is unique and inspired Elements of Samuel Barber, Holst and John Williams, emerging from an earth-toned pool of conflict as your own instrumental phoenix. The pizzicato towards the middle came as the twig that snaps to announce that I wasn't alone in this forest. I couldn't hear the players, I couldn't see you labor over each note and every chord. I was lost in the strains of this luxurious and forboding give and take, feeling a warmth upon my face that might've been sun, or flame or tears. Quite simply the most breathtaking experience that I've ever had here at MacJams. Bravo! 10-10-10-10 d/l |
![]() | Audiologic said 1061 days ago |
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Wow. Well if you have a *real* orchestra doing your stuff, then congrats. I like it. And as stated, yes the recording is absolutely superb. Ben |
![]() | cjhoose said 1061 days ago |
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holy... ... wow. Dark and beautiful. Yes indeed. When I grow up can I learn to compose like you? I'm assuming that's a real orchestra... it is, isn't it? When was it recorded? where? by whom? |
![]() | jonx said 1060 days ago |
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great stuff this is a beautiful piece-an excellent recording and performance and it packs a lot of emotionality. you're a fine composer and i'm going to check outyour site, i think the sound and style of this wouldn't be out of place on kronos quartets' "black angels" or rachels' "handwriting" lp. excellent work- keep on! |
![]() | alley-oop said 1060 days ago |
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Mahler My dad is a 'Mahler-head' and always played his pieces. You have captured an exceptional mood reminicent of his genius. Very sad feel. But such beauty as well. Bravo |
![]() | perceptualvortex said 1059 days ago |
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Lovely emotional resonance. Nice to hear a real orchestra on here for a change; I've been hearing so many software instruments emulating them that the...er, "realness" really stands out here. I mostly listen to groove oriented music, so classical music is I guess extra meditative to me. And this does that really well, slowing down my brainwaves and taking me to a serene and moody place. Very enjoyable, thanks for sharing! |
![]() | TobinMueller said 1058 days ago |
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Memories that nourish The combination of delicate playing, haunting harmonies, unresolved phrasing and melodic discovery blend very well, poetically. The poem reminds me of one of my favorite lines: Living is like the building of a harbor long after the ship as left. Or the energy of a Camus hero who still creates beauty in the face of hopelessness. Such nice spaces. |
| smeager said 1058 days ago | |
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dark and calming I could close my eyes and see the Orchestra play. The recording is outstanding. You should and must be very proud. Bravo. |
![]() | screamalexz said 1057 days ago |
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nice i like sounds added about half way through. it gives it a little more. i like how it fades out. a nice calm mellow piece. |
![]() | Parichayaka said 1057 days ago |
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Power of live music I am always fascinated by the vast difference between live recorded music and computer generated music. I quite enjoyed listening to this piece. Especially the balance between dissonance and harmony. The quality of the recording is surprisingly balanced and blends the various instruments hamoniously (not an easy task for whoever has tried)! I read that all the musicians were students. Impressive! I am hoping to hear more from this artist! I appreciate music that swerves off the most travelled road and ends up with new sounds and ideas. Though the theme-sadness and grief-is rather dark, I can defenitely imagine that the composer is capable of expressing a variety of emotions. I will browse and look for more compositions by this artist now. Good work! |
| cliver1 said 1057 days ago | |
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howdy Part-ner Moving piece that reminded me somewhat of Arvo Part's spiritual music. He is quite religious and this comes across here too. I would like to know if similar beliefs play into your compositional process. The only thing that bothered me slightly were the glissandi (esp the almost inaudible one at the end) - introduces a "Penderecki-ish" element that is out of place. But this is a minor quibble. I will check out your website for more. |
![]() | SpasmodicMan said 1052 days ago |
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Ironed out the spasms Really liked the gliss at the end. Could have used more 20th century weirdness like that, the potential was biting at the edges. Kind of static for me, like a preluding piece for something more. Very quiet. Well done mood piece. You ironed out all the spasms, and I'd rather hear them. |
![]() | Corporal Beef said 1046 days ago |
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As Promised... To cut to the chase, this is a great piece. It gently grips you, then lets you go. Tension, resolution, tension-repeat. I enjoyed the fact that this piece allowed me to feel my own feelings; it did not dictate or force an emotion. It was very flowing and natural. The ending fit well with the premise of the piece. The pruction and mix were definitely above average, and the songwriting was excellent. Thank you very much for posting this. |
![]() | screaming.org said 1032 days ago |
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... I wanted my comment to be brief on this one: this piece is moving in much the same way Samuel Barber's Adagio for Strings is. Execept this hasn't been played to death. I didn't mean "moving" lightly, by the way. |
![]() | lucas said 1017 days ago |
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Quite enjoyable I just registered here and what luck! The first piece I listened to was yours. I really enjoyed it. |
![]() | leonardo21 said 1012 days ago |
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Don't understand it Don't really understand this kind of music, but it sounds pretty nice, I guess. I think you really could use some drums and such. |
![]() | Warren Smith said 974 days ago |
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soooo emotional I love that place where the violins suddenly zoom upward in pitch (maybe there is a technical term for the passage) - it is such an emotional moment! Also, those sudden abrupt pluckings that interrupt the sad, slow current of sound. They could mean a number of different things, but given the context outlined above, I can't help but think they represent a struggle against a dark impending fate. Still, I recognize there's no need to get overly analytical with an interpretation. What fascinates me in this piece, and in other "classical" pieces as well, is the long, drawn out quiet notes, which you just don't get in rhythmic-based music (which is what I write). They are soooo emotional. |
![]() | Scott Carmichael said 944 days ago |
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Contrast Much of what we listen to at MJ, is computer generated... and I love this technology, it certainly is a great tool... but I'm struck by the dynamic differences there are between synthetic and live played... I think everyone who make the synth stuff should get their ears into this, for a reference... but on another note... i know the nuts and bolts of recording the pop genre stuff, How do you go about capturng this... mikes, preamps, techniques... I wouldn't know where to start |
![]() | Morris R said 915 days ago |
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Moving Well, I just wrote that your 'last dance' was the highlight of all the pieces I've heard here so far, but now I think maybe this is. It's unbelievably powerful, and made me think of my late wife, and a few others I've lost along the way. It makes me very sad, but it wouldn't if it weren't so beautiful. |
![]() | scratch_harris said 894 days ago |
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CC'd again your first chord sounded so close to the first chord of my new piece i nearly snorted up my Guinness! It moved so effortlessy and when you hit the glissando I was all smiles. Have you heard "Spirit of Eden" by Talk Talk? Not as a comparison, just occurred to me you may like it. On to number 3! |



































This is a dark, lovely piece, and an exquisite recording of a fine
performance. I would like some info on the recording itself. How many
mics? What format? Digital?
As for the piece itself, it is astonishing. Eduard (Drakonis) said he
doesn't normally enjoy this type of music? Well, I do, and this is
beautifully written. The ending is inspired. The sparse orchestration
and use of lower register strings gives this sad piece gravity, Beauty
grounded in despair.
I know you are disappointed that no one has voted, but sometimes that
goes slowly here, and don't worry, I will change it now.
10-10-10-10.
Welcome to MacJams!