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Fallen Frame
by Alannah

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Submitted on: Oct 21, 2005 - 10:28:17 PM
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Description This song was written and originally sang by mrcjtm - he posted a forum inviting singers to sing it .... I couldn't resist !!!! The lyrics are his ... the score is his ... the vocals are mine. First I owe A HUGE apology to mrcjtm for "flubbing some of his lyric" ... in my attempts to learn how to cut and paste and re-record small sections of songs ... I managed to correct two areas - however - there is one line (due to my limited software use abilities) I was unable to correct - so it is posted lyrically incorrect on my part. Secondly, I also apologize for my lack of expertise in mixing my vocals - it was my first attempt at mixing myself - eeeeek .... and apologize for the volume levels jumping in places ... (or is it me screaming)???? Anyway - I wanted to post the song mostly to get feedback on the vocal positioning (I was slightly reprimanded for singing all over the lead guitar solo ... ooops) but decided to post as is and let the people decide. Mrcjtm's original version is posted on his page - you can hear how the vocals were originally intended and the timing of same.
Lyrics Fallen Frame by mrcjtm

I am the fallen frame in the hallway
a crooked leg in the morgue
im all thats haunting
pleasant, contrasting
warmly swimming to the deep end
slowly sinking
the flying thoughts come back again while i
think i might
come home

the curveless pitch returns come monday
with the weekend gone im loving more
and in every way prepared
the stars might shine through everyone but the earth
devours hearts
bleeding mouths without a mind to render false
and eyes running till they all turn red
slowly retreating
and look back again
to the south

carrying on
about needs and wants
ruptures spleens
and breaks up hearts
if there was one thing more
in this world the i abhor
its that you were nothing more
than what the cover told
me you were

i am coming to the end
of my wits
or what you might say
gets me through the days, the weeks, the months, the years
what little time
we hold, we share, we bought
we join, we split, we part
but still hold hands in the dark
just a little
taught

the days grow long
our hold grows strong
we wont have to do it alone
our hearts cant break
and our eyes wont tear
because we wont
forsake
our love this year
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cjhoose said 1138 days ago
nearly perfect!
The only minor gripe I have is there's some peaking. But other than that,
wow. You sung a beautiful song beautifully.

Slotogenic said 1138 days ago
Sounds good to me
I really like the sound of your voice. It compliments the guitars well. I
only noticed a couple volume jumps, those can be easily remedied. The
placement of your vocals sounds fine to me. Though I'm pretty new to
mixing as well.
Good Job!

Alannah said 1138 days ago
WOW !!!!!
Please ... who voted this a 9 and didn't leave a comment ????????

Alannah said 1138 days ago
WOW !!!!!
Please ... who voted this a 9 and didn't leave a comment ????????

Alannah said 1138 days ago
CJ and EVE you are awesome !!!!!
I am totally in agree-ance with my inability to MIX .... I am soooooooooo new to this .... but I take my praise well from two VERY talented and well celebrated MACJAM hosts ...... thank you !!!! Learning is fun ....

Leon said 1138 days ago
You beat me to it, Allanah
...but i'm not complaining :-) I was gonna give it a try to put vocals on
this song, but i havent had the time to do it sooner. Your rendition
certainly sets a high bar. Your voice is versatile and has a pro quality to
it. Although your vocals are better suited for other genres, you pulled
this one effortlessly. The only thing lacking is probably some harmonies
to give it some color, but as you said u are just beginning to learn GB.
There is also a little bit of clipping of the vocals; I think you have to stay a
little farther away from the mic. Very impressive effort from a GB
beginner! Mrcjtm must be jumping on his couch right now.

Alannah said 1138 days ago
You beat me to it, Allanah
Thank you Leon ... it's true I am not used to singing into a condenser mic at all ..... my experience rests with the dynamic mic and the KARAOKE mixers ability to make me sound OK .... now that job is mine and I MUST learn more .....

mrcjtm said 1138 days ago
very nice.
i'll resist my urge not to vote this all 10's...but it really is quite good. your voice is certainly better than mine, and if you didn't notice, you're definitely beating my version in the ratings. congratulations, the difference is clearly all you.

Alannah said 1138 days ago
very nice.
Thank you mrcjtm ... but your version IS the song ... YOU wrote the score and the LYRICS ... I personally think it is a FABULOUS SONG ...... if the song isn't GOOD to begin with ... no one and nothing can make it GOOD ! So please take your BOW !!!!!

missnina said 1138 days ago
Goosebumps!
Thats what I got when I listened to your song!
Your voice is beautiful. The lyrics are haunting. And the guitar is perfect. Nice work babe!

Alannah said 1138 days ago
Goosebumps!
Thanks Mss Nina .... and welcome to the MacJams community .... you will enjoy listening to people's music here ... I know I have ... there are many hidden gems here.

drakonis said 1137 days ago
great unique voice
Nice guitarwork mrcjtm, good songwork & lyrics, Alannah's voice is great,
dead-on singing, nice emotion in the voice... just need to get you some
better recording equipment (and watch that clipping!)... you know, with
new Macs just announced, older powerful G5s should be coming down in
price now, just in time for Christmas :-)
ttfn,
Drakonis

chakeres said 1137 days ago
Wonderful voice
You have a very unique singing style and I like the power and emotion
you put behind voice. I like the guitar playing and the bridge guitar
was very nice. I agree with some of the others on the production side
but you will improve in time and one thing about Macjams is there are
plenty of people willing to help. Nice work,-JAC

Alannah said 1137 days ago
Wonderful voice
Thanks Chak and Drak .... I am hoping to learn alot more about the production end ... it can make all the difference sometimes .....

Reinholt56 said 1136 days ago
I really enjoyed this song...
and your singing.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

R.


Alannah said 1135 days ago
I really enjoyed this song...
Thank you for your comment .... Music is all about people enjoying it !!!!!!

BobRoberts said 1131 days ago
very nice job
Great work on the vocals.......I'm off to hear the original.

thoddi said 1124 days ago
good singing:)
I enjoyed this song - both the guitar and the vocals. You have a nice, sensual voice that has a lot of potential.

Hmmm, maybe I should try getting you in on one of my songs...;)

Sing some more for us:)

Thoddi

Alannah said 1123 days ago
good singing:)
Thanks THODDI .... I have a couple of others posted ... if you go to my own page I have posted them as links ... I am always open to singing anyone's songs ... I am working on a couple of collabs with a few other people .. so there should be plenty more coming .... usually they will be posted as collabs ... on my page ... because I don't do the musical part .. I just add the vox later .... I will give some of your stuff a good listen !

said 1089 days ago
Other than a little clipping
and a little "buzz', this is a very solid song. Work on the production.
The performnace is great.

nyakki said 1089 days ago
Nice Job
I really liked listening to this song.

It needed some harmony (as mentioned above) and the mixing was a bit
uneven at times but those are little nitpicks to an otherwise nice listening
experience.

Downloaded.

penguinsocks said 1079 days ago
wow
i'm very impressed by the excellence of vocals and lyrics here. beautiful
song! wish i could have had a bit more clarity in the anunciation so i could
grasp the lyrics more, but i'm plenty guilty of that all the time. oh well.
anyway, well done you two, make some more collaborations!

--the girl in vancouver who stopped making music (for now)

Alannah said 1077 days ago
wow
Unfortunately for the song ... I did the vocal mixing myself ... with no clue on how to use the software or how to clean up the mix .... NOW I usually ask someone for help in the mixing aspect of songs I am collaborating on (which is all of them). Maybe one day when I learn how to do a better job at mixing I shall clean this one up !!!! Thanks for the comments.

said 1071 days ago
Oh My
Your voice melts my heart like a rose pedal in the summers rain! I feel enriched by your cartoon beauty your romantic delivery and poise. In true love it is the soul that envelops the body and beautiful voice! Carry me away to cartoon beauty.


Joshosh said 1071 days ago
Oh My
Wow, that is some high praise coming from the man voted "sexiest macjammer"!
(And I agree with him on the qualities of your voice. Beautiful)

---
Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler


Alannah said 1070 days ago
Oh My
Your flattering comments come so close to Bizarre's ..... I'm smelling a "conspiracy" .... but I'm not complaining.

Alannah said 1070 days ago
Oh My
Your whisperings of cartoon bliss turn a heady fragrance in my imaginings ..... to the man voted "sexiest macjammer" from the girl in your "animationimagination" .... stay sweet

said 1070 days ago
Oh My
Well I've got a surprise for you if your interested my cartoon love! Stay
tuned!

---
DR. BIZARRE!

loyd vader said 1038 days ago
nice vibe
chilled me out when i needed chilling out..............thanks for that...............perfect example of a collabaration done good.

said 1029 days ago
Thats Cool..
Love to here more and more you have so nice voice, and it's flows so fine
to the song.
Thanks, Alannah
The stream flows through the wood...:D
Yours faithfully.
------------
*Skean*

annalia said 739 days ago
Vocals Shine!
This was Beautiful. The guitar sounds very nice and your vocals shine through regardless of your software difficulties. You sing with much feeling in your voice, it's lovely.
I'm sorry for not having listened sooner.

Alannah said 738 days ago
Thanks Analia ...
... I was surprised to see a new comment on this one ... it was actually the FIRST song I ever tried to mix (vocals anyway) myself .... I'm not sure I've grown much since then tho ... hahaha ......

---
"Music is the way our memories sing to us across time"

annalia said 654 days ago
Beautiful Vocals
Boy, I like that guitar and your vocals are amazing and strong. You sing with much feeling, love your style. Again, the guitar is great, a great first-time mix and good ending.
Simply Beautiful!

C.O.Jones said 569 days ago
great voclas
Great songing. Beautifull voice.

Alannah said 568 days ago
Gee
And a visit to the oldest tune yet .... thanks for checking my stuff out! I must now see if you have anything posted and return the favour!

---
"Music is the way our memories sing to us across time"

lavalamp said 269 days ago
Checking out your first
Your voice sounds great on this. You should consider doing this again and reposting. It's a very nice song.
LL

Alannah said 268 days ago
OH my gosh ... yes ...
.. this was the first thing I ever tried to mix myself ... and at the time I had absolutely NO idea (not entirely convinced I know yet what I am doing when it comes to mixing) ... but I can hear how much better it could sound .... (and I think I flubbed the lyrics and never did go back and fix it - my bad) .... but I like this song and have often thought about redoing it ... maybe this could be an anniversary project .... we should all re-do our first post on an anniversary ... see if we have actually improved any.

mrcjtm said 169 days ago
Yah
I'd love to hear it! I need to do some re-posting/recording of my own...

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Artist Bio Find this artist in drop-down: -- MY FAVORITES -- I have met a lot of great and talented musicians here and have had the honour and pleasure of collaborating with them. All my songs are collaborations as I do not know how to create the music ... m...[more]
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