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![]() | nyakki said 1235 days ago |
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Nice Job I really like what you have done here. Downloaded. |
![]() | snowdragon said 1235 days ago |
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A fine tune A little bit of nerves is generally a good thing before a performance. Harmonies work particularly well. |
![]() | Cori Ander said 1235 days ago |
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Congratulations! What a great sound you've got in that orchestra! And oh, thats a good melody (I am writing while listening the first time) and the chorus is good ... and a female singress ... woo good acoustic backup sound and nice guitar solo, you are a good singer too. Nice ending. Listening second time ... Must admit that I am surprized in a positive way!, maybe because you've been around so long without having a song, that I have gotten used ("primed" or "conditioned" in psychology language?) to regard you as a listener rather than a producer. The tune has a very cool tempo that I like a lot. I like your style a lot! (High rating)! Such a great start for you at MacJams! Congratulations! |
![]() | Peter Greenstone said 1235 days ago |
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Very nice A very enjoyable listen. You have a very soothing, warm voice and Phylis' backup harmonies are excellent. Your voices compliment each other very nicely. Everything sounds well balanced to me; the additions of the bass and the electric guitar were a great choice as they really fill this melody out. I think it works well as a lullaby. It's soothing and comforting. |
![]() | rmaclema said 1235 days ago |
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Nice Piece Nice piece, Ejh. Laid back and pleasant. I like the lyrics. Not that you asked, but my other thoughts... Production-wise, it sounds good, except for two things - the aforementioned guitar solo ought to be louder, and the second thing is the BR-8 and its snare. The drums in GB sound considerably better than the BR-8 (though that may be a stylistic decision,) and the snare feels sluggish through the song - like it's dragging and holding the song back at times. What this really is is the acoustic guitar playing ever so slightly ahead of the beat at times, which gives the illusion that the snare is "late," which is probably isn't, unless you intentionally programmed it to be slightly behind the beat. Either way, I'd like the hear some GB drums in place of the BR-8, and then put the snare every so slightly AHEAD of the beat. Then the snare and the acoustic would be on the same page and it'll all sound tighter. Even better would be some nice sampled real drum loops (ie Drums On Demand.) This is like "what comes around goes around," because a year ago I posted a song "Can't Back Down" here on MacJams and I was using drums from Reason, which were dead on beat-wise, and someone had made a similar comment to me, though they just said the drums didn't sound right. My guitar work was ever so slightly ahead of the beat during some spots in the song, and the Reason drums emphasized that. And Tobin suggested a harmony on the chorus. I went back and replaced the Reason drums with Drums On Demand loops, and added the harmony, and it was SO much better - night and day. The DOD loops are accurate but they've got a human feel to them - they're not dead center sample accurate to the beat (thank God) and suddenly the slightly rushed guitar sounded perfectly fine. I put that song as track 2 on my CD. Without the changes I would not have put it on the CD at all. I know you didn't specifically ask for critique, but it just reminded me so much of the issue I had with my own tune that I thought I'd bring it up. Keep doing what you're doing! Post more tunes. I liked this one quite a bit. |
![]() | Mystified said 1235 days ago |
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Fab first post! Welcome to MacJams! What a great song this is--both in concept and performance. I'm a sucker for harmonies and these are lovely. I like those lyrics, too...(Makes me want to do some more folk songs, myself!) Great first post. Looking forward to hearing more. Fav'd and D/L |
![]() | TEXASFEEL said 1235 days ago |
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Sweet Sweet tune...Every thing seemed fine to me...no loss that I can hear...good job |
![]() | AquilA said 1235 days ago |
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Thanks... ...for getting over your nervousness and sharing this song. This is a really good tune. Very pretty melodies and I like the concept of the lyrics also. You've already gotten some very detailed critiques so I'll leave it at that. I'm not so good at that anyway. Welcome aboard, you'll obviously be an asset to the community. |
![]() | Tom Atwood said 1235 days ago |
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Calming, excellent Very nice piece, Ejh. I also have the Boss BR-8 and still use it to record vocals (because it is quiet). Love the harmonies. Tell Phyllis. Great 1st post. 8-8-8-8 |
![]() | Tom Atwood said 1235 days ago |
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Calming, excellent Very nice piece, Ejh. I also have the Boss BR-8 and still use it to record vocals (because it is quiet). Love the harmonies. Tell Phyllis. Great 1st post. 8-8-8-8 |
![]() | JOAN said 1235 days ago |
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Beautiful!!! Nice lush sound!!!! |
![]() | thetiler said 1235 days ago |
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nice Like the texture of the guitar, the flow, the singing sounds very nice. Like that ending. Thanks so much for sharing ! |
![]() | jackstone said 1235 days ago |
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Beautiul song Your arrange and melody really excellent. What a nice song! |
![]() | Z293 said 1235 days ago |
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First Post Under Your Belt And you were nervous? No need to be nervous as I write this you have 32 comments, 13 votes, 4 downloads and 8 fans and I don't even think this song has been up 12 hours. Great start I'd say. |
![]() | perceptualvortex said 1235 days ago |
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Great sound Your voice and guitar sound rich and crisp, very nice to listen to. Great song, and I like that sentiment... maybe if I just let the day stay out later I can have more time to finish these things up.... nice going Ejh! |
![]() | mandolinquent said 1234 days ago |
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Wonderful. Actually, I thought the drum was deliberately slow - but what the hell. This sounds so Irish - especially with the harmonies. I really like the warmth of this. I liked the guitar solo too, but I wonder if it would be nice to fit another instrument in there just to give a different texture? |
![]() | alley-oop said 1234 days ago |
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Lovely and mesmorizing Sweet and nice to hear this to START my day. Wouldn't it be nice to feel that feeling all day long? I will today, thanks to you. I hope to hear some more from you, ejh. What ziti said ... everything is cool here. We're a group of people from all over the world just digging your song. |
![]() | Drew Kopr said 1233 days ago |
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Great Stuff! Man, I love the vocal tracks and harmonies. I also really like the guitar sounds. I think this is extremely well-produced. I like the feel and sound of the music--very soothing, very nice. Great work! |
![]() | ledebutant said 1233 days ago |
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You've been holding out on us! I think I know why you were nervous. You knew in your heart of hearts that this is a terrific song and if we didn't respond well, then it would mean we were all deaf in both ears and had no souls and then you wouldn't be able to hang out with us anymore. I definitely dig the Neil Young feel in this song. The vocals perfectly suit the vibe of the music and I agree, tell Phyllis she sounds terrific on this. So cool to get the chance to suport you, when you've been so supportive to people here. Thanks for posting and make some more, please. D/L |
![]() | jesushairdo said 1232 days ago |
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heartwarming this is really a sweet song youve got here. loved it. also the quality of the sound is TOP!! |
![]() | illuminati said 1232 days ago |
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Gorgeous guitar sound complements the fine arrangment. I love the last chord at the end of the chorus. It's surprising and transcendent. I like it a lot. |
![]() | TobinMueller said 1232 days ago |
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Love your baritone voice Your baritone voice is so warm. Love the way you present it, so easy and honest, and Phyllis' backing vocals are great. My favorite part was the instrumental break, wonderful song on the guitar, great layers. Well balanced lyrics, rhymes, pace. |
![]() | ziti said 1231 days ago |
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well.... fifty some comments later...I'm back to congratulate you on the reception your work has recieved! I thought it would probably go this way for you when i listened at your house...the fact that you are a warm, intellegent, humorous, and talented fellow are apparent in your music. I know you will be a vital and popular MJer for a long while to come, and we are all better off for it! Thanks Ed!! ps please paint the Charvette....and let me borrow that syhtax thingie-do??? peace |
![]() | bronco said 1231 days ago |
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Nothing to Add It's all been said and I liked it too! |
![]() | Cameron said 1229 days ago |
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very nice! Your guitar playing is excellent and you got a very good sound quality on this recording, actually. I liked the live, reverb aspects of the sound. The opening vocals sounded just a bit tentative, then grew stronger as the song went on, with the addition of harmonies. The combination of sounds and your chord structure is pleasing to the ear. Looking forward to hearing more! |
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beautiful sense of rythm in the vocals. Wonderful harmonies. A very enjoyable listen. thanks for sharing |
![]() | Macaudion said 1226 days ago |
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Excellent Another wonderful piece. This is music at it's best... I can completely relate to these lyrics and they help to have something in mind as a goal as I go out almost every day w/ my R.E. agent looking for my new digs to call home. Thanks for another wonderful tune. This is really a nice production! Very nice job Ejh. Keep em comin! Cydniko |
![]() | Macaudion said 1226 days ago |
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ANOTHER FIX Had to come back for another listen...taking this one to have as my lullabye as I'm off to bed after another day of feeling homeless. Thanks again for posting this one. Did I mention, that I think that you have a warm and honest voice that deilivers this tune in the type of packaging for which it was meant to be wrapped... Cyd |
![]() | Macaudion said 1226 days ago |
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ANOTHER FIX Had to come back for another listen...taking this one to have as my lullabye as I'm off to bed after another day of feeling homeless. Thanks again for posting this one. Did I mention, that I think that you have a warm and honest voice that deilivers this tune in the type of packaging for which it was meant to be wrapped... Cyd |
| daphna said 1224 days ago | |
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very enjoyable : ) sorry it's taken me so long to post a comment, despite your heads up Ejh! I really like this tune - it is well put together and truly relaxing to listen to - very fitting considering the subject matter. No need to be nervous about this first posting!!! Can't wait to hear the next one. Cheers, D. |
| said 1212 days ago | |
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Broad and embracing I like the song. Well built. Well played. Well sung. I'd like to hear a little less FX on your voice. |
![]() | Mackie said 1209 days ago |
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Good song - nice son hej ed den har lten r bra tyker jaghur lenge har du spelat Gitar viken trevlig sn du har jag r cori anders sn felix. p mac jaams heter jag mackie ----------- From swedish to english by daddy Cori: Hi Ed. This song is good I think. For how long have you played the guitar? Such a nice son you have. I am Cori Anders son Felix. On MacJams my name is Mackie. |
![]() | jug88 said 1189 days ago |
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Call it Groovy! Great lullaby tune! I can see me playing it for my little ones before they head off to sleepy land. Great vocals and I'd say your femail voice made it through mixing just fine as I think you two sound great together. I agree...more please! |
![]() | selters said 1064 days ago |
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hmmm I never got to this before, and what a shame that is! Youve got some beautiful vocals on this one, very nice harmonies from phyllis as well. You sound so good together! And i can tell you i also have big problems calling home the day! Very nice track to listen to right now, when im actually having trobles calling home the day. I just gotta say that i beleive you are my favourite macjammer, and also among my favourite artists in general!! |
![]() | Joanna said 1043 days ago |
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Soothing Lullabys are meant to soothe and this one does its job perfectly. With sweet, restful lyrics, warm vocals and wonderful harmonies (Phyllis does a great job), one can't help but feel tension unwinding while listening to this song. Great job! |
![]() | jamorama said 552 days ago |
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great tune... ...and superb lyrics. Really nice. |
![]() | saymme said 11 days ago |
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Very good song.. awesome hearing this !(!) I'm smilin as I read the description(doin it backwards lol kinda recognize myself there) , so nice to see You here at mj EJH Your songs mean so much to me they do . Love the lyrics You caught it really great like a poem ..FUN to hear Your first posting here I dont recall I've heard it before! Thought I'd heard most/all of Your songs- this is a treat tonite ! tx Courtseys to You !! ahve a nice weekend : ) Lena " Call Home The Day . .. : ) ( :" |
































Nice performance and tune! Thanks for sharing
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