Subject: first one, comments craved =)

tried to submit it but I couldn't find it afterwards... I might just be an incompetent fool... it's not like there's no prejudice =)

anyway... here's a link that'll hopefully work if anyone feels like taking a listen...

whoop! here it is

Hi!

I just gave your track a listen...
First off, I like your arrangements. Second, and don't take this personally, but I feel that the transitions were too abrupt. It felt sort of like you were going from one style to the next. That's not bad to be eclectic, but if the transitions weren't so quick, perhaps it would sound more natural.

I'm just a hack, so don't pay too much attention to me! Good overall job, keep it up!

thanx for the comments.
Created a new song called sleazy,
are the transitions any better?

this one